Lyipheoryia Posted September 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 Storm: Yay! Glad to know it's over Hawkeye: I do hope you'll stay...but I thoroughly understand how busy school is. The number of work I have to do for the upcoming week is...undesirable to know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 26, 2015 Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 i think this is just me but i do the most character development while Rping as them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 26, 2015 Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 typed some history on her plz tell me what you think i know i have to make it longer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowDaringDash Posted September 26, 2015 Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 I copied and pasted it so that i could sort of highlight stuff. Name:Rose LeavesGender:MareAge:Early middle-ageSpecies:crystal ponyEye colour:YellowCharacter colour: PurpleMane/Tail/Other: both just yellowPhysique:normalResidence: crystal empire cityOccupation:Works in and owns a flower shop named The Flower PatchCutie Mark:: a single Pink rose. the color means her love for roses and her familyUnique Traits: She can communicate with plantsHistory: Rose has lived in the crystal empire all her life because her parents was over protected, they would only allow her to talk to some from from school one such pony when by the name of Marine Beryllium. He was her best she felt like she could share anything with him unknown to her she love him with all her heart, she sometimes like to play house with him with him as the daddy and her as the mommy, and they would have a stuff animal as thier child, it wasn't until a bit older went Marine Beryllium, got his cutie mark of [insert Mark] and she was still a blank flank.Character Summary/Personality: /Forgetful and loving personality Mostly, it needs to be expanded. Each section should be separated so it doesn't look like a wall o text. Grammar also needs a little fixing up, though honestly not to bad. And come on Storm, that does not explain what she looks like...\Just saying now, please let me know if i go over the top on anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 I am actually really glad we have an rp staff helping us...I'll get to work on mine, and will post it ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParrySlice Posted September 26, 2015 Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 CC sounds good Parry, Hawkeye, any ideas for your characters?I have an idea I have a normal Earth Pony Named Bread Slice that I could play I'll post a link if you'd like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 Sure! He could be a relative or cousin that isn't a Crystal pony. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 26, 2015 Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 so all of use are making new character except for parry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParrySlice Posted September 26, 2015 Report Share Posted September 26, 2015 Actually now that I think of it maybe I will just be my signature character Parry Slice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 I believe so, Storm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 if you ask me that a little unfair but its parry choice not to be part of the family Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 True enough, I see your point, we are all working together-from scratch-to create characters with histories matching to each other's. Parry, anything to say in your défense? I can see you don't really want to make a new character (For what reasons?), but Storm proves a point as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 hey what color would go good with yellow and purple? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowDaringDash Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 Alright, time for a update on my OC Tell me what you guys think of Sapphire Heart/Crystal, haven't figured which to use yet. Name: Sapphire Crystal. She gets called Crystal more often as her first name though. For short, some call her Sapph, or just Cry, though 'Cry' tends to get on her nerves a bit. Gender: MareAge: School aged Filly. Species: Crystal PonyEye color: Her eyes are a shining ruby red that tends to wander a little to far, often peaking into others privacy.Character color: Her coat is a Crystal Turquoise. Mane/Tail/Other: Physique:Residence:Occupation:Cutie Mark:Unique Traits:History:Character Summary/Personality: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 Ooo...love her! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 I will post my app later this week or so. I will take the liberty, hopefully to no one's offence, of making the basis for the family histories (I'll keep mine centered around my character's so that you guys can develop the history accordingly.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 hey i could fine a pic of what i want her mane and tail to be like but i am not very good at describing what it would look like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 Well, you could post the pic, and we could all chip in to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyipheoryia Posted September 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 Do you think it would be allowed for Marine Beryllium to work as in a Crystal Mine? (RDD, your knowledge of rules would be greatly appreciated now). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowDaringDash Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 Glad you like her Her mane/tail is going to be her name, now just gotta decide if i want her to be a proper girl, or a more.... outdoory girl And its what were all here to do Storm, make OC's, and have fun Were here to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowDaringDash Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 Im actually unsure about that. In the MLP universe the crystal mines were under Canterlot, but they don't show in the Crystal empire.... I know the occupation would be allowed, so yeah, i would say if you wanted that you could do it. I mean, the crystal empire must get their crystals from somewhere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 ok for the tail i was thinking along the lines of something similar to fluttershy and for the manehttps://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/f8/26/33/f826332e0ec38ac04388122af4762f89.jpgfirst row the blue one there going from left to right the fifth one from right to left the fouth one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParrySlice Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 True enough, I see your point, we are all working together-from scratch-to create characters with histories matching to each other's. Parry, anything to say in your défense? I can see you don't really want to make a new character (For what reasons?), but Storm proves a point as well.Oh you guys were wondering about that? I would be fine with making a new character! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser1991 Posted September 27, 2015 Report Share Posted September 27, 2015 the way you said it didn't sound like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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