Pegasus Polaris

[Muesli]

Name: Polaris

Sex: Male

Age: Young Stallion

Species: Pegasus

Pelt Color: Dark Blue.

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Grey, with streaks of white. His tail and mane are scruffy.

Eye Color: Blue

Cutie Mark: A golden compass

Physique: Slight build and rather scrawny. His left ear was damaged in an encounter with a Manticore.

Origin: Cloudsdale

Roleplay Type: Mane RP

Occupation: He is a part-time Travel Writer and an Adventurer/Explorer.

Motivation: Polaris loves to explore every nook and cranny of the land - and is enticed by mysteries.

Likes: New places and new faces. Writing about his adventures.

Dislikes: Being stuck in one place for too long.

Character Summary: Born to Naos and Rana under the pole star that would be taken for his name; Polaris grew up in Couldsdale. He led a quiet and uninspired life as a foal, not doing particularly well at school - other than maybe geography; even then he was far from the best student. He was considered something of a dreamer, often getting into trouble at school and at home because of his absent-mindedness.

Polaris used to wonder what the world beyond Cloudsdale was like; and a chance promotion, granted him his dream. His family moved to the surface after his farther, Naos, was given the job of managing the weather of a small town.

His mother, Rana, works as a post-pony and spends much of her time away from home.

It took him no time in exploring the tiny town; soon his thirst for discovery drew him into the surrounding countryside. And after many months of extensive exploration and study – he learned much about the art of map-making and the recording of his many adventures – he earned his cutie mark; a golden compass.

He now knew what he wanted to do; explore the world. He threw himself into his studies, becoming interested in the sciences and history of the land; though still unable to reach the top of his class, he became a lot more involved in his studies.

In his spare time he began keeping extensive notes from his studies of the flora and fauna that surrounded the town. He gained some renown at this time for his knowledge of the surrounding lands, running errands for a number of ponies; collecting medicinal herbs for the doctor, collecting specimens for a scientist researching local animals, and plenty more besides.

At around this time his sister, Spica, was born. She quickly became very attached to her older brother and idolises him.

Eventually he grew tired of the town and its surroundings; he finally embarked upon his dream of exploring the rest of the world. Nowadays, as he explores the world, he makes a living from the books he writes, as well as from cartography and occasionally collecting creatures and plants from the wild for paying ponies.

[Muesli]

Revised Character.

[MyLittlePonyTales]

You have a good start, but we don't know a lot about your character.

What town did North Star and his family move to? Where does North Star himself currently live? Is he a traveler? Does he still reside in the town he moved to, or did he move away from there?

Did his mother have a job? Or perhaps she was not in the picture at all?

What does North Star do for a job now? Is he a map-maker, perhaps? Does he have a business set up, or does he sell maps to ponies/creatures in places he travels to?

Also, minor note. The player for Spitfire puts the character's fathers name as Stormfront. Not sure if you would want to change that or not.

[Muesli]

Character revised.

[MyLittlePonyTales]

Looks good!

[Skye]

Looking good!