Mayday Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted September 2, 2011 Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 This is a good start but very bare. Give us a little insight on who she is, such as her hobbies, how she got her cutie-mark, what her was her foalhood like and how did it incorporate into helping her receive her cutie-mark and how she is as a pony. Why does she dislike raspberries? How did she get her name and why?Just a few questions to help you expand your character a bit. We also do not use numbers for ages since we do not know how ponies age or how long they live. So if you could change the age to Young Mare would be great n_n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mayday Posted September 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2011 Ok sure! How is this now?Edit:-Added Hobbies-Added Cutie story-Added Name story-Added dislike reason Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manestream Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 I think this is a great start- I know you have a lot in mind for Mayday as per our talking on IRC, I look forward to you adding more here as we discover about Mayday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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