Melkos Unchanos [FINAL]

[Drakomis]

NOTE FROM OP

I'm bringing an OC from another Universe in. I realize I should simply create my own, but following in the line of the stories I have done I am simply incapable of doing so. I have found it extremely difficult to create a pure pony OC character and have decided that this would be the best alternative. I have fashioned this character to be like its namesake only in appearance. The capabilities and powers that the other character have will not be included as it would simply ruin the character as a whole.

I hope this is overall acceptable. If it is not, I will go back and create another character that is more fitting to the desires of the Moderation/Administration staff. I am not here to bring a character in to be powerful, godmodding or anything else. I am simply adding this character as I way to fashion my personality into it to better interact with other player-created characters.

Thanks!

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION

Name:

Melkos Unchanos

Sex:

Male (Stallion)

Age:

N/A

Species:

Pegasus Pony (Friesian Breed)

Pelt Color:

Skeleton Form

N/A

Physical Form

Raven Black.

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style:

Skeleton Form

The mane and tail of this character is replaced with a dark mist of raven black. The style fluctuates according to mood.

Physical Form

The mane and tail of this character has a color of raven black with no specific styling other than free falling. There are no visible markings.

Eye Color:

Skeleton Form

The eyes are replaced by two crimson red orbs of light residing within the skull.

Physical Form

The eye color is Crimson Red.

Cutie Mark:

None

Physique:

Skeleton Form

N/A

Physical Form

Melkos Unchanos appears as a Friesian Breed of stallion in his physical form. His body is toned perfectly in shape and he seems to be well exercised. However the main difference between most other Friesian Pegesi and Melkos is his wings. When fully stretched, the black feathers and wing structure look oddly similar to a Raven's or Crow's.

Origin:

Melkos Unchanos hails from the Equestrian/Anagonian Crossover Universe and assumes the form of a Spectral Entity worshiped by the human-based population in Anagonia. His interactions with the Mane Cast and Other Characters in Equestria was limited only to involvment to protect Equestria from the temporal cataclysm. After the events concluded in that Universe and both dimensions resumed a normal existence, Melkos Unchanos chose to venture forth and further explore the citizens and ponies of Equestria.

Roleplay Type:

This character is a Crossover Character specifically aimed towards player-created characters and not towards Canon/Official Characters. Therefore this is an OC RP Type Crossover Freeform Character.

Occupation:

Explorer

Motivation:

Discovery, Education, Spiritual Enlightenment

Likes:

Griffons, Feathers, Exploration, Friendship, Order, Discipline

Dislikes:

Hatred and/or Violence of any sort

Character Summary:

Skeleton Form

Melkos Unchanos appears as the skeletal form of a Pegasus Pony. His body is usually hidden by a spectral cloak that assists in keeping his physical form in one piece. His mane is formed by the spectral mists that surround his form. His eyes are simply two red crimson orbs of light that exist within the eye sockets of his skull. His wings are fashioned in the form of the bones that make up a Pegasus wings, equally shrouded with the spectral mists.

Contrary to appearance, Melkos does not have any special powers whatsoever. He is completely mortal and has the same flaws and weaknesses as any Pegasus Pony. He cannot fly fast, cannot use any form of magic nor can he, unlike his appearance, bring death to anyone with a single touch.

Due to his physical form, Melkos does not have any style of cutie mark. His origins are not from the Equestrian Universe and therefore he has not earned the right to have one. His entire purpose for traveling through the lands of Equestria is to meet new friends and, hopefully, experience a few adventures along the way to better understand the lifestyle of Equestrian citizens. At no point during any engagement will he attempt to interfere with the proper temporal time-line, therefore ensuring that he does not interact with any important events that may or have happened in Equestria.

Melkos' personality is best described as reserved. When he meets somepony new, he encourages discourse and conversation to better understand the other. When treated badly, he resorts to tolerating the treatment and is prone to easily forgive. He does not exhibit any form of hostile behavior and maintains his purpose through his travels as simply one of discovery and noninterference. When threatened with danger, or somepony he knows is threatened, Melkos will react to defend himself and other ponies.

Physical Form

Melkos Unchanos appears as a Friesian Breed of Pegesi in his physical form. His body appears to be perfectly toned through various routines of flight and trotting exercises. His mane and tail are free flowing and occasionally can be seen flowing on its own accord should he rest for too long in one place. His wings appear very un-pegasus like in the regard that they are formed extremely similar to the wings of a Raven's or Crows, with the inclusion that the feathers are rather similar as well. His eyes are usually a bright crimson red, keeping the eyeball beneath the glow hidden. However when Melkos is calm enough, the glow will dim and other characters will see an iris with the same Crimson Red coloration.

In his physical form, Melkos Unchanos is more capable of flying faster and longer than his skeleton form. It also gives him the advantage of being able to trek through crowds of larger groups of ponies and other species without attracting attention. He will rarely use this form unless it is absolutely necessary. However it has been known that certain individual characters, if attracting his attention enough in some way or another, can initiate the change from skeleton to physical without his knowledge. This is due in part to the fact that if Melkos cares for someone enough, he will feel more comfortable around them and feel safe enough to be in a physical manifestation of himself.

It should be noted that despite the change from skeleton to physical, Melkos remains mortal. There is no specific advantages from this form from the next with the exception of flying and trotting speeds.

When he flies, a long trail of black mist follows in his wake. It signifies the energy that enables him to exist in the Equestrian world.

[BlindJester]

This application of yours is most interesting but I think a character of this type is best suited for the crossover sections.

[Davroth]

You can edit the title by using the full editor, there is a button for that when you edit the first post.

[BlindJester]