Lilia Posted October 31, 2011 Report Share Posted October 31, 2011 (edited) Name: Cosmopolitan Sex: Female Age: Mare Species: Unicorn Coat Color: Very pale pink Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Her mane and tail are both a nice lime green, styled with buns at the top and dangling down low like lime curls. Eye Color: Blue-gray Cutie Mark: A magazine Physique: Regular build, not too thin, not too chubby...and not very tall at all. Origin: Manehattan Roleplay Type: Mane Occupation: Editor for Manehattan's Fashionista Magazine. Motivation: Cosmopolitan loves to work the fashion industry, and she always has the latest in style and models from any photo shoots she sends her photographers out on. Likes: The drink Cosmopolitan, Scarves, Fashion. Dislikes: Stuffy and overbearing writers, ribbons, being called Polly, shrewish models. Character Summary: Cosmopolitan is an orphan. Her mother passed away when she was born and her father died a few weeks later of a wasting illness. She was shuffled into the foster home of several upper-eschelon families in Manehattan, each one teaching her a bit more about fashion. When she was adopted, it was with great pleasure. Her family named her after the drink her mane and pelt resembled, the Cosmopolitan. Her birth name was originally Morganite, but her new mom decided to legally make it what she goes by today. She got her cutie mark when she was reading a fashion magazine and had begun marking through the errors and things that she had noticed on the page. It was also the time that she realized her love of scarves. She's hardly ever seen without one, and if she is, it means that she is on a mission...one that involves getting the deadline met and the presses printing for the latest magazine. Once the deadline is met and the stress is gone, she is very much a social pony. She thrives on meeting others, usually at the higher end bars and clubs near her job. She is always willing to let her mane down and get in some good, wholesome fun. She likes having her tea, frequently getting it herself. She loves getting her hooves on the latest fashions and will very often demonstrate how those fashions are to match and what accessories go well with those fashions. When she gets the opportunity, she loves to tell ponies how she climbed the ladder of success, starting from a lowly delivery pony. She has devoted her life and her passion to her magazine, though her occasional demands for perfection do get on the nerves of her employees to the point of them giving her several interventions....none of which have ever stuck for long. She's very feminine and will, on occasion, let her staff know that she is not to be distubed as she is going to the spa or off to buy a new scarf, one that she deems appropriate for the outfit, the occasion or just because she thought it was pretty. Edited November 13, 2011 by Lilia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pony_Sage Posted November 1, 2011 Report Share Posted November 1, 2011 (edited) Hay there Lilia, I thought that I would wander by and lend a helping hoof. You have the basic skeleton of a good application here, although I would like to see a bit more. There isn't much in the way of her personality. Does she have any particular quirks or habits? Is she a feminine mare, or is she tom-boyish? As an editor I would imagine that she is a very determined individual. You might also want to expound upon her cutie-mark story a bit. Was it just the act of reviewing the magazine that was the trigger, or was there more to it? How long did it take her to become the editor of the magazine? Did she work her way up through the ranks, clawing her way to the top? A little detail in her back-story, and some more on her personality would go a long way! As I said you have the basic skeleton of what should be here, just put some meat on the bones!Hay there again. We are currently making a site wide push to use 'Title tags' instead of the 'Bracket Tags' system. If you open up your original post in the full editor you will notice up at the top you can edit the title of this thread. Please do so and remove any 'Bracket Tags' such as [Pegasus] or [Final]. There is a second field underneath the title editor in which you can put 'Title Tags'. Please fill this field out to reflect your applications current status. Thank you in advance!~Sage AkA Freddie Freewings Edited November 1, 2011 by Pony_Sage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilia Posted November 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 Working on it now. As soon as I can get proper internet, I'll be able to update. Sorry for the delayed response! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilia Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 Edited! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pony_Sage Posted November 14, 2011 Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 "Assessed!" Thus spake the Sage! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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