Earth Pony [Earth Pony] Mint [FINAL]

[LegendaryTriforce]

RolePlay Type: Crossover

[b]Name: Mint[/b]

[b]Sex: Male[/b]

[b]Age: Colt[/b]

[b]Species: Earth Pony[/b]

[b]Eye Color: Gold[/b]

[b]Coat Color: Light Green[/b]

[b]Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Dark Green Swirls on Mane and Flank[/b]

[b]Physique: Average[/b]

[b]Cutie Mark: The Triforce, got by returning a very important item back to

an elderly pony.[/b]

[b]Origin/Residence: Unknown[/b]

[b]Occupation: Canterlot[/b]

[b]Motivation: Death of parents[/b]

[DoctorWilliam]

There are quite a few problems with this application. One, you shouldn't have kept the bb code and color. The full application needs to be black. Two, you're crossing over The Legend Of Zelda with My Little Pony (even if it is slightly), and I'm pretty sure applications aren't used for crossovers. I could be wrong though. Third, some of the answers filled out on the applications are either undescriptive, or answering the wrong thing alltogether. For example, your occupation is your job or career, not your residence. It's okay to say that your origin location is unknown, but you also have to put where you are now, and you put it in the wrong area in your application. You're also unspecific about your motivation. How did your parents die? Does he want to avenge their death, Or is the character's motivation is to kill his parents? Lastly, you forgot to type in your character summary that should be below motivation.

[BlindJester]

I agree with the bb code and having the whole application in black, but seeing this is a crossover application it is mostly anything goes.