LegendaryTriforce Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 RolePlay Type: Crossover[b]Name: Mint[/b][b]Sex: Male[/b][b]Age: Colt[/b][b]Species: Earth Pony[/b][b]Eye Color: Gold[/b][b]Coat Color: Light Green[/b][b]Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Dark Green Swirls on Mane and Flank[/b][b]Physique: Average[/b][b]Cutie Mark: The Triforce, got by returning a very important item back to an elderly pony.[/b][b]Origin/Residence: Unknown[/b][b]Occupation: Canterlot[/b][b]Motivation: Death of parents[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorWilliam Posted November 28, 2011 Report Share Posted November 28, 2011 There are quite a few problems with this application. One, you shouldn't have kept the bb code and color. The full application needs to be black. Two, you're crossing over The Legend Of Zelda with My Little Pony (even if it is slightly), and I'm pretty sure applications aren't used for crossovers. I could be wrong though. Third, some of the answers filled out on the applications are either undescriptive, or answering the wrong thing alltogether. For example, your occupation is your job or career, not your residence. It's okay to say that your origin location is unknown, but you also have to put where you are now, and you put it in the wrong area in your application. You're also unspecific about your motivation. How did your parents die? Does he want to avenge their death, Or is the character's motivation is to kill his parents? Lastly, you forgot to type in your character summary that should be below motivation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted November 28, 2011 Report Share Posted November 28, 2011 I agree with the bb code and having the whole application in black, but seeing this is a crossover application it is mostly anything goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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