starlight5279 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 (edited) Roleplay Type:World of Equestria RPName:ArtbeatSex:FemaleAge:Young MareSpecies:UnicornEye Color:Vibrant Aqua eyesCoat Color:Light faded pink,almost whiteMane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Long straight brown mane and tail,her mane is usually pulled back into a messy ponytailPhysique:Tall,lengthy figureCutie Mark:A paintbrush painting a red outline of a heartOrigin/Residence:Born and raised in Canterlot,but felt out of place and wanted to paint different scenery,so she moved to PonyvilleOccupation: She sells her paintings but is often tight on bits so she babysits for various ponies.Motivation:To break the barrier of art and introduce new styles of art to EquestriaLikes: Good music,mythology,her pet ferret Artemis,sweets,reading,foals,paintingDislikes:Neat-freaks,snobby ponies,spiders,various foods(she's a picky eater),smelly perfumeCharacter description:Although she is quite shy Artbeat doesn't scare easily and is actually very adventurous,braving even the Everfree forest to find a good spot to paint.She is great with foals,as she has a little brother of her own,and hardly loses her temper although she often loses track of time whether its looking after little fillies and colts or painting Celestia raising the sun.When she isn't babysitting she can ether be found painting somewhere in ponyville .-her coat plastered with every color in the rainbow and then some-or at her part time job at Scugarcube Corner.She is often chastised for the uncleanliness of her house as she is often too busy to care and when she does find time to clean it is often messy again before the next day.Artbeat is a very trusting pony but betray her trust and its not likely you will get it back.She adores her pet ferret Artemis almost as much as she love painting.They have been friends since she was a filly and do everything together. And like Artbeat,Artemis is a very picky eaterOne day when Artbeat was a young filly her mother,Canterlot fashion designer Diamond Dream,came down with a bad cold and couldn't finish her orders.She thought if she helped with her mother's orders it would make her happy and get better quicker,but she soon found out that fashion was not her talent and tried to find other ways to please Diamond Dream,all ending in failure.When she was just about to give up her art supplies crossed her mind and idea struck,rushing out to her mother's rose garden she found the perfect spot,a gray stone wall behind her mother's most prized roses and in the perfect spot to be viewed from her parent's room,and started painting.Although,even with her unicorn magic, she didn't finish until sunset this painting was the best she had ever made,a gigantic rose painted with a beautiful array of colors,ranging from the normal red to a deep midnight blue.When her mother woke from her nap she was amazed with Artbeat's masterpiece,showering her with compliments, and suddenly there was a flash on her flank and after the light subsided she saw her cutie mark,Artbeat was thrilled and couldn't wait to tell her friends.But everything didn't go as planned,instead of congratulating her they stuck their noses in the air and claimed she was bragging about being the first one to get their cutie mark.After that day no one would talk to her,even after every one got cutie marks,and she became lonely and was always lost in her own little world.After a while her parents became concerned and decided to get her pet,thinking she would chose something common like a dog or a cat, at first she was indifferent about everything until she saw the ferrets and instantly fell in love with them.She decided to name her ferret Artemis,with the addition of Artemis to her family she started slowly becoming less lonely and this was only quickened with the birth of her baby brother Little Gust,or Gusty for short,who like her father,royal Canterlot guard Swift Strike,was a pegasus.Even so she still felt like an outcast in Canterlot so when she was old enough she moved to Ponyville with Artemis and started her new life there.Tell me what you think of Artbeat so far. Edited February 2, 2012 by starlight5279 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted January 28, 2012 Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starlight5279 Posted January 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 Good so far,I have an idea for a cutie mark story now and I just need to put it into the application Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted January 29, 2012 Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 Right, comment when it's updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starlight5279 Posted January 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 All updated now I just need to edit a few more things then it will be done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starlight5279 Posted January 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2012 And...Its finished! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunsetSombra Posted February 2, 2012 Report Share Posted February 2, 2012 (edited) Hey there - Regarding the application, I've pokes something I think we need to look at: " Occupation: She sells her paintings but is often tight on bits so she works part time at Sugarcube Corner and sometimes babysits. "For the sake of our overall 'No cast refs' in an application, I will pretty much say that you should make that a more general 'side' thing where she babysits for various ponies foals...that way, you can leave room for the implication that she perhaps babysits for the cakes on occasions Pinky is not - this way it's not a direct mention.Other than that, I like the look of what you have, and it's probably almost ready to move on up other than that minor 'inkblot' mentioned above! Edited February 2, 2012 by Robikku Pegasus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starlight5279 Posted February 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2012 Ok I will change it right away.Thanks for telling me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted February 3, 2012 Report Share Posted February 3, 2012 Ok I will change it right away.Thanks for telling me Just let us know when you do, so we can give it another thorough look see! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starlight5279 Posted February 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2012 Fixed and ready to be checked again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunsetSombra Posted February 4, 2012 Report Share Posted February 4, 2012 There, that looks much more passable as far as I can tell - let's get this stamped and given a better lookover! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted February 4, 2012 Report Share Posted February 4, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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