SapphireDiadem Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 Role play Type: World of Equestria RPName: Alexandrite Blossom ((Alex for short))Sex: MaleAge: ColtSpecies: UnicornEye Color: Forest greenCoat Color: Dark tanMane/Tail/MarkingsColor&Style: Black main and tail with black hoof linesPhysique: Normal buildCutie Mark: A paint brush that has the tip of the brush is a dark blue, the top is black. A streak of pain flows out from the tip as if his cutie mark was painting his flank showing his artistic nature and love of the art.Origin/Residence: StalliongradOccupation: ArtistMotivation: The Equastrian landscapeLikes: All forms of weather, landscapes, the Equestrian SpeciesDislikes: Vandalism, bullies, criticsCharacter Summary: Alexandrite loved the world of art, even when he was just a foal, he made towers from his toys and what ever he could get his hands on. Though he loved spending most of his time with the bottles of paint his parents gave him, though that didn't last long. Using up all of the canvas that he was given, Alex went on to paint his entire room of what he had seen, looking out the window though the Stalliongrad town, to the sky above.When his parents came in to check up on him, they where left speechless, seeing paint allover the room and there son. Alex was lost in his creative imaginative world, everything else didn't really matter to him, even his parents, that where amazed at seeing his walls painted with airships, balloons, and the buildings and other surroundings of Stalliongrad, pointing out that he had gotten his cutie mark still didn't break him from making his dream world come to life on his walls.Soon, Alex was already repainting the entire inside of his home. His parents decided to enrolled him into the Stalliongrad school of fine arts. The time at the school allowed Alex to expand his creativity, seeing more of Stalliongrad, amazing his instructors with the paintings he came up with. This made some of the other and older students jealous of the young colt, getting much praise and how some would put it "special treatment". He had soon become a victim of bulling from some of his classmates and even some of his teachers that had started to look down on him, saying that his works where not that great. This started to cause his creative world to start becoming a dark and cold world of hate and loneliness.Tired of the abuse he had endured, Alex decided to move on. He left the school and decided to head out, traveling across Equestria to see and paint the world outside of his home town.Character picture: With out cutie mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shyshy Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 oh um i like it. sorry thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 Please remove all colors from your Application. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 Please remove all colors from your Application.Done. Made sure all text is automatic black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 12, 2012 Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Hmm, can you also make all the text regular size? Should be really easy. Probably makes it easier for the staff to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Done, though I got the application from your post and it was that size and that color =x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 12, 2012 Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Done, though I got the application from your post and it was that size and that color =xYa, it's best to post that in the simple editor. It chooses the colors and font automatically and I can't change that, but if you use the simple editor it will always turn out as regular text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 mmk, so tell me what do ja think of the app =x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 12, 2012 Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 mmk, so tell me what do ja think of the app =xI don't personally like to do that until the Application is marked as [Final]. I don't want to critique because I don't know what you plan to change or add. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 Will be away till Sunday for Anime Conji Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 I'm back from the con give me a little time and ill probably have it done soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 21, 2012 Report Share Posted March 21, 2012 I'm back from the con give me a little time and ill probably have it done soonDarn, I think my friend was there. I should have told you to say hi! Did you go to the dealer's room/artist's alley, and if so, did you see a girl selling Zombie hats? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2012 Darn, I think my friend was there. I should have told you to say hi! Did you go to the dealer's room/artist's alley, and if so, did you see a girl selling Zombie hats?No...but I did see ALOT of other ponies, you can tell from looking at my DA http://kayian.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2012 Alright I believe I am finished and ready to call this [Final].Though, how would I go about changing the title to that, I can only edit what I put in the text box, unless I am missing something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 22, 2012 Report Share Posted March 22, 2012 Alright I believe I am finished and ready to call this [Final].Though, how would I go about changing the title to that, I can only edit what I put in the text box, unless I am missing something. Click Use Full Editor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 mmk done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 24, 2012 Report Share Posted March 24, 2012 CutieMark: A Paint brushCould you add a little more detail about this? Something to set it apart and make it unique?Though he loved spending most of his time with the bottles of paint his parents gave him for his 4th birthday, though that didn't last long.We don't like to put dates or ages on things. We don't know how long ponies live, how fast they age, or how long a year even is. Please change this.At the age of eightAgain, no dates or ages. You can put a relative age here instead, such as colt.As a three years passedJust pointing out another date that needs to be fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 How is this Application coming along?Fine, just trying to think along with my other work what I want his CM to be, should be done soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Any progress on this Application? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted March 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Any progress on this Application? Fixed what ya asked and put more detail on the cutie mark, I am seeing it in my mind, but when I type it out....it just doesn't seam right, though I put something along the lines of what I'm seeing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted April 2, 2012 Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 I like this, though what comes across my mind is what is he doing now that he's left the school? That and what exactly got him his cutie mark? What does it mean or represent about him?If you could take a moment to clarify on those things for me, I'd be glad to move this along Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapphireDiadem Posted April 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 I like this, though what comes across my mind is what is he doing now that he's left the school? That and what exactly got him his cutie mark? What does it mean or represent about him?If you could take a moment to clarify on those things for me, I'd be glad to move this along Well as far as what he is doing now that he is out of school, is he traveling across Equestria to see and paint the world outside of his home town. He got his cutie mark while painting his room and house into what he had seen from his vantage. It represents his artistic nature and love of the art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted April 2, 2012 Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 Well as far as what he is doing now that he is out of school, is he traveling across Equestria to see and paint the world outside of his home town. He got his cutie mark while painting his room and house into what he had seen from his vantage. It represents his artistic nature and love of the art.That sounds good to me! Though if you could insert those things into the application itself and let me know when that's done, I'll go ahead and stamp this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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