Bronynumber299 Posted March 14, 2012 Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 So being the creative colt that I am I came up with an idea.(Oh god)Now it's a bit late for Hearts and Hooves day but whatever.I've decided to make love songs (my mind is dying).I've got the RD one done.And by done all the bad lyrics wrte in my notebook.And after talking to Ashton I hope that my Pinkie Pie one will be better.I might have different themes like the RD one is a colt trying to get Rainbow back and the Pinkie Pie one will probably be the love from afar one.Like when you have a crush on a girl but is too shy to talk to.But that's a maybe.Thought voulenteers to try if I get voulenteers I will post the RD one and the one that is WIP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carameldelight Posted March 14, 2012 Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 well I can sing relatively well but I don't play any instruments besides trombone. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronynumber299 Posted March 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 well I can sing relatively well but I don't play any instruments besides trombone. =/That's okay tell me if you want me to post the first two I made god thier horrible.Well as I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carameldelight Posted March 14, 2012 Report Share Posted March 14, 2012 yeah, do you have any tune along with the lyrics? :3 is that what the video is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyMirage Posted March 16, 2012 Report Share Posted March 16, 2012 I can guitar for you I play acoustic sytle and electric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronynumber299 Posted March 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2012 I can guitar for you I play acoustic sytle and electric yeah, do you have any tune along with the lyrics? :3 is that what the video is?I do not have a tune and I need a guys voice.FYI.Next time I get on I will put them on.And I like Danny's idea.It is your idea to put the toon.Just wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carameldelight Posted March 17, 2012 Report Share Posted March 17, 2012 oh, I'm a girl. Never mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronynumber299 Posted March 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 oh, I'm a girl. Never mind.I'm soooo sorry It's just that it would be wierd if a mare was singing a love song about a another mare.Because that's what these are Didn't I mention that.Again I'm sorry if I ever make a song and it can be unisex I'll PM you I promiss.Anyway with that resolved(sorry) here are all four(I gave up on the unicorns):RDI met a mareWho had some flairWe flew through the airChorus:She was Rainbow DashOur friendship didn't need any cashWe did amazing tricks and would never crashBut good things never lastShe was gone like a flashand we'll never meet againit really was the endbut it still could turn a bendIf I could only send her a lettahand tell her that I love haThen maybe she can fly like a feathaand live happily ever aftahChorusMy heart is really brokenbecause she was really a tokensomething dorment is now awokennow I'm depressedI can't even restshe really was the bestChorusNow I'm going to CloudsdaleI can never failOur love will never lackI'm going to get her backChorusNow I'm a classyguy and won't be shyShe is very flashyShe's my little dashieNext time I'll put up pinkie's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyMirage Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 I do not have a tune and I need a guys voice.FYI. Next time I get on I will put them on. And I like Danny's idea.It is your idea to put the toon.Just wait. Wait... What's my idea? also, the lyrics kinda threw me off when it says chorus is that returning to the chorus? or is it a new chorus?I'm sorry, I'm big on asking a bunch of questions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronynumber299 Posted March 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Your Idea is with your guitar skills.And I have a knack of making things confusing yes it means it repeats the chorus that will be the same for all songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobaltFlare Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 it would be wierd if a mare was singing a love song about a another mare.I find nothing weird about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyMirage Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Anyway, I think I get it...So it's:verse 1 chorusverse 2chorusverse 3chorusverse 4chorusverse 5 (or outro?)the chorus is kinda repeated a lot you usually want to avoid that in a song... and did I mistake one of the verses for the bridge? or is there no bridge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronynumber299 Posted March 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Bridge?oh i'm sorry It's just I'm new to this stuff and I do think I have too much of the chorus on each song(considering those are the only lines I mezmerized). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carameldelight Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 I find nothing weird about that.Me either...but if that's what he wants Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyMirage Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Bridge?oh i'm sorry It's just I'm new to this stuff and I do think I have too much of the chorus on each song(considering those are the only lines I mezmerized).okay, most songs follow this pattern: Intro(if it has one), Verse 1, Chorus, Verse 2, Chorus, Bridge, and then a strong ending chorus usually played two times. Some people use different patterns but it's rare to hear a song with a different pattern in the top 40 or something like that (I don't think Skrillex or metal bands follow that pattern). you could try merging the verses (if they work like that) or rewrite the verses so they are twice as long as they currently are. that way people won't be sick of the chorus by the end of the song that's why so many people hate "Chocolate Rain" it's one verse played repetitively, the same chords and same melody made it really annoying.Me either...but if that's what he wants I pretty much live around horses/ponies and I've never seen any in a relationship with the same gender. If they feel that way about another, I wouldn't know, They usually don't talk to me about those kind of things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobaltFlare Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 I pretty much live around horses/ponies and I've never seen any in a relationship with the same gender. If they feel that way about another, I wouldn't know, They usually don't talk to me about those kind of things.You know what I meant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyMirage Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volt Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Decided to follow this topic because it's quite interesting. I'm really curious about the outcome, since I'm wondering how would it end.Also, I'm glad Danny pulled out words out of my mind and posted them here. Didn't have to move a hoof this way, and still achieved the results. *Friendly salute towards Danny ;]* I'm talking about song styles nowadays of course.Now, good voice is quite... subjective statement. For example, I consider myself a fair singer. Most of my friends confirm that, often being surprised by my voice, so I believe that they might just be right. But, there are always some who dislike it, as simple as it is, and would just say "Stop singing" with annoyed voice So I guess, you'd need to gain samples simply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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