Unicorn Midnight Sun [FINAL]

[PonyHooves]

Roleplay Type: World Of Equestria RP

Name: Midnight Sun

Sex: Female

Age: Foal

Species: Unicorn

Eye Color: Green

Coat Color: Dark blue and Pale blue.

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Her mane and tale are both in the style of dreadlocks which are orange and red. However, her manne is tied back with a small piece of dark orange ribbon. She has paint markings all over her body and some feathering by her hooves.

Physique: She is quite a short pony with stocky legs. She appears to be chubby; however she is the average weight of a foal.

Cutie Mark: She hasn’t got her cutie mark yet. But when she does get her cutie mark, it will look like a golden sun with a silver star in the center of it.

Origin/Residence: She was born Manehatten but now lives in Solstice Heights.

Occupation: Attending lessons at school.

Motivation: When life gets her down she looks up to the night sky. A shooting start always leaves her smiling. The night sky seems to enchant her with its mysterious glowing stars.

Likes: Shooting stars, shapes in clouds, magic and books.

Dislikes: Going to bed early, bullies, having to put a good book down and being told she’s too young to do something.

Character Summary:

Midnight Sun originally lived with her parents. Her mother was a unicorn. Her job was making furniture. Her father was a pegasus. He helped to control the weather. The pair of them loved their child dearly. But she was picking up bad habits from other city foals. She was disrespectful towards her parents and seemed self absorbed when it came to reading.

One day they grew tired of this new attitude she had. They decided that it would be wise to send their foal away to live with her mother’s nephew. He was a fully grown stallion and after visiting him a few years before, she knew he was well mannered and kind. Midnight Sun trotted into the room and her mother announced. “Midnight, you’re going to with your cousin Whisperpaw.” Of course the foal didn’t want to leave. But she didn’t have the choice.

At first, Midnight Sun didn’t like her cousin very much. But after a while she started to like him. They soon became good friends with him. Of course the mare didn’t like the fact that he took her to school every day. She wanted to go to Canterlot's school alone. But, after he explained why, she understood and gradually got used to his company.

Midnight Sun regularly keeps in touch with her parents by sending them letters every week. She also gets quite excited when they send her letters in return.

Midnight Sun used to act quite snobbish. However, she learned her lesson when she was sent away to live with her cousin. She has learned to respect others feelings. Another problem with Midnight Sun is she doesn’t seem to understand the meaning of the word bed. She often stays up past her bed time just to read or look at the sky. She is improving now that Whisperpaw comes into her room and checks to see if she’s sleeping. Sometimes he catches her out though.

Picture of Midnight Sun

[brianblackberry]

I feel the application is pretty solid, there are only a couple questions I have before giving it the old ol' stamp:

The night sky seems to enchant her with its ominous glowing stars.

I think you must mean another adjective other than ominous, which means foreboding or foreshadowing evil, or exhibiting an omen.

Of course the mare didn’t like the fact that he took her into Ponyville every day on the train.

Why does she travel to Ponyville daily from the Solstice Heights? Is it for school? There are towns much closer to the Heights than Ponyville, such as Garden Gait and even Canterlot.

[PonyHooves]

I've made a few changes.

[brianblackberry]

Alrighty!

For Great Justice!

[Dio]