Thoth Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 After having to listen to 'Domino' about five times on the car ride up to Atlantic City today, I got "Domino" by Jessie J stuck in my head...but then I began to formulate a way to ponify it...and now, I give you what I threw together in about an hour right here!Hope you enjoy what I wrote...I just wanted to see what people thought of my improvisation, xDI'm flying fast and freeLike nothing can bother meOff with a shot of rainbowWhile my competition just implodesI can't feel any tension while I'm racing you through the air'Cause all I know is that when you're finished, I'm already thereDon't you know...it's all under control(Ooh ooh ooh ooh)I can do this all nightBy tomorrow, and clear the sky up rightFilly, come on!(Ooh ooh ooh ooh)Boomin' like a RainboomGonna be a star soon!(Ooh ooh ooh ooh)Racing faster than the speed of lightGoing to be the greatest Wonderbolt you've ever knownRacing from sun until moonlightNever bring me down, 'cause I'm a dynamo!Every second is a highlightI'm already gone before you say "Go!"Making every day full of sunlightNever bring me down, 'cause I'm a dynamo!I think I'm losing my mindBut that's 'cause it's almost timeTo prove myself to the starsAnd show them I can be who they areI can't feel any tension while I'm racing you through the air'Cause all I know is when you're finished, I'm already thereDon't you know...I'm a one-mare show!(Ooh ooh ooh ooh)I'll light up the sky brightI can do it all nightWonderbolts, here I come!(Ooh ooh ooh ooh)Boomin' like a rainboomLike a flower, my act's in full bloomEverypony come on!(Ooh ooh ooh ooh)Racing faster than the speed of lightNow I'm the fastest that you've ever known!Racing from sun until moonlightNow I'm on top, just like a dynamo!Every second is a highlightI'm already gone before you can say-"Go!" is the way I live my lifeWhen I'm a star, I'll never let go!Until then, I'll watch the sun shineJust like me, when I'm a dynamo!There's more time to the actual song...but at the risk of further implanting the song into my head, I'll just stick to this short version.Comments are appreciated...I just threw this together, thinking I could write a significant parody in an hour. Hope you enjoyed, xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrescentBlaze Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 <3 <3 <3 <3 I love this! parodies are my favorite and this one just fits so smoothly! well done indeed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conor Colton Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 <3 <3 <3 <3 I love this! parodies are my favorite and this one just fits so smoothly! well done indeed!I second that ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoth Posted June 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 Wow, I sure didn't expect any comments at all! xDThanks for the feedback, though! I do this kind of parody song-writing all the time, but I rarely ever type it out and want to receive feedback for it. I guess I should do this more often, xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrescentBlaze Posted June 9, 2012 Report Share Posted June 9, 2012 yes you really should you're good at it! I'd love to see more from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoth Posted June 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2012 Heyo!Well, I've actually taken this music deal to heart. So much so, for the past week or so I've been working on remixing one of my favorite Brony-made songs.However, because I was doing this in-school, I was unable to finish it (Today was my last day), so I won't be able to properly complete the remix and upload it until September/November-ish.Still, from what I had by the end of today, I'm sure people will like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky Posted June 25, 2012 Report Share Posted June 25, 2012 You have good potential for writing. I am afraid I am not acquainted with the song this is remixing...I'm not one to comment on lyric writing, whereas I don't know how difficult it might be to think of something like this... but I would assume it is not terribly easy.Good work. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoth Posted July 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2012 Every day I wish everypony wellAnd now, why has it feltThat every time I see you, you fellright in-to my waySomeponies would trade a soul for a wishPennies and dimes for one kissI never thought it'd be youStanding hooves-in-placeYour stare was holdingTwo pairs of eyes lockedBoth blue, nowWarm nightNow I'm the clown nowHow do I tell you these feelings?Hey I just met you And this is crazyCome to The Corner*Party with me!It's hard to look rightinto your eyes!So come along with meParty maybe?They take their time with their danceBut still, I like to pranceMusic around, puts us into a tranceBut you're still right with meRight leg, left to the beatNever going to take a seatI didn't think we'd both feel itBut it's here to stayYour stare was holdingTwo pairs of eyes lockedBoth for real nowWarm nightDance past sundownNow we both got the feeling!Hey I just met youAnd some say I'm crazyBut my friends know it's PinkieSo they party with me!And all the other coltstry to chase meBut now we're here nowParty like Pinkie!Hey I just met youAnd if we're both crazyThen let's have fun nowAnd party with me!*Sugarcube Corner, that isHope you enjoyed. Just a random song I tossed together after having to listen to the SAME BUCKING SONG on the way to and back from BronyCon on Saturday and Sunday... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoth Posted July 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 Eeeeyup, I'm making this my song thread.I'll just check in here every once and a while and pop some song lyrics I wrote. I enjoy doing this, actually. Feel free to leave comments about anything I write! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoth Posted July 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 Wow, I just cranked out a song in 10 minutes!This time around, I based it off an upbeat classic by Mr. Ringo Starr from The Beatles, called "Oh My My" Don't know if I felt in a BeatleBrony-like mood, or if I just was feeling peppy today...either way, enjoy!I phoned you right up, galFor 2 years we've been palsYou said, "Come on over"I said, "Do I have to?"Oh, her knees started shakingOur hearts both start achingThen that's when I said to her...Oh mare mare, oh mare mare!Don't break my heart babe, don't you dare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mare!You set my heart off, like a flare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mareIt's guaranteed to give us some life!I hoped I didn't blow it,just like a tornadoWhen we start dancing,it's love, Cadence say so!Now our lips are a'sealingTheir taste, so appealin'But this is what they say for me!Oh mare mare, oh mare mare!Don't break my heart babe, don't you dare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mare!You set my heart off, like a flare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mare!It's the only thing that keeps me alive!I would never slow downBecause we'll never feel low downWe both love each otherNow ain't that enough, now?We've got the prescriptionIt's what we've been missingIt's sweet love, the best remedy!Oh mare mare, oh mare mare!Don't break my heart babe, don't you dare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mareYou set my heart off, like a flare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mareLivin' happy once in our livesHey, oh mare mare, oh mare mareGlad you love me, glad you careOh mare mare, oh mare mareNever shoot me a single glareOh mare mare, oh mare mareDon't break my heart babe, don't you dare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mareYou set my heart off, like a flare!Oh mare mare, oh mare mare... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoth Posted July 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 ...Boy, I must really stink, huh? Just kidding. No hard feelings. I understand it's hard to enjoy this stuff, seeing as I have no....musical talent... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 Hii! I think you're very creative! Keep feeding that creative spark! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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