Pan Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 [Pony Related Character] Name: Gypsy Breeze Gender:femaleAge: mare (~28 in human years)Species: PegasusPelt Color: orangey goldMane/Tail Color: teal with lime green streaks; long and layered with feathery bangs, mane usually under a yellow kerchief.Eye Color: Red-orangeCutie Mark:Physique: Average to athletic. She appears sturdy and strong.Residence: Her home is located in Trottingham, but she is rarely there for any length of time. Occupation: TravelerMotivation: To see the world!Likes: Adventure, meeting new ponies, food, good conversations, poker, music and dancing, helping flowers to grow with her weather skills.Dislikes: Competition, studying, work, boredom, uncooked tomatoes, rude ponies.Character's Personality:A happy-go-lucky pony who is always most interested in what lies over the horizon, Gypsy Breeze is a stalwart companion - as long as the going doesn't get too tough! Perennially lazy and lover of a good party, Gypsy is constantly moving about from town to town, making new friends and memories as she goes. She is generally upbeat and positive, always seeing a sunny side to everything. Character Summary:She is an intelligent and curious pony, and she was nearly the last pony among her peers to get her cutie mark. This was mostly due to Gyp's enthusiasm and interest in a wide range of topics; why pick just one talent or skill to focus on? This led to some amount of friction between her and her parents, who felt their daughter's frustration but were unable to ease it. They reasoned that her angst would end naturally, and if it took a little longer for her cutie mark to come in than had their friends' colts and fillies it wasn't the end of the world. They loved her, the same way they always had. Thus her home was a sanctuary from mocking cries of "Blank flank!" and the like.One spring afternoon, while on a picnic in the forest with her parents, Gyp wandered off while exploring. She did this often on outings, and as she grew toward her teenage years her parents worried less year by year when she disappeared. Usually she would reappear just as quickly as she'd gone. Often she would tell her parents with delight about some flower or creature that she'd seen. On this day, Gypsy stumbled over an owl made out of stone which was lying across her pathway. "How strange!" she thought, "Such exquisite carving, it almost looks real.. I should tell the others!" She retraced her steps to the clearing where she'd left her family, only to find two statues shaped just like her parents, and nopony else! Poor Breeze had never learned about cockatrices, so she didn't understand the danger she was in. If she had she would have frozen up with fright! But she did know that they weren't far from the outskirts of Ponyville, so she decided to go find help.She led the party of rescuers back to the picnic clearing, and they drove off the cockatrice. Once her parents were back to normal she felt a curious tingling sensation on her hip; turning, she saw her brand new cutie mark for the first time. There was a scroll, no, not just a scroll, it had a brown-colored grid of lines: it looked like an old treasure map! A small dashed line ("the same color as my eyes!" she thought with delight) which led to a ? shape could be seen on the map as well as the grid. "I did it! I got my cutie mark! It's because I love to explore so much . I was safe when the cockatrice got here and was able to go for help," she gushed to her parents, while they glowed with pride. "If exploring and helping ponies in need is what makes me special, then I think that's what I should do." Her parents agreed with her, and from that day on Gypsy Breeze has lived a largely indepentent and nomadic life. She still finds time to visit her parents occasionally, which always brings a smile to their wrinkled faces. But her biggest love in life now that she's fully grown up is still exploring new places and making new friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pony_Sage Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Hi hi Pan! I was thumbing through the applications and I thought I would offer a bit of help. You might want to expound on how Miss Breeze got her cutie mark a little, fill out the Biography a bit. Making an interesting back story is the most fun part of thinking up an OC! [for me at least ^.^ ] Miss Breeze sounds like an interesting pony but I would like to know more about her!! Just a few thoughts for ya!!~Sage AkA Freddie Freewings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pan Posted April 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Will do Sage! Thanks for the pointer. If it's possible for a mod to mark this thread as a WIP I'd be thankful. I can't seem to edit posts from this app, though I can make replies. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Will do Sage! Thanks for the pointer. If it's possible for a mod to mark this thread as a WIP I'd be thankful. I can't seem to edit posts from this app, though I can make replies. ^^You should be able to edit any of your posts...if you can't, let me know. It'll be at the top of your post, on the right. On other people's posts, there is an exclamation point, star, and an arrow button. There is a fourth button before those on posts that are yours, that looks kind of like a pencil. If you do see those, please let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pan Posted April 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Tales, right? I've figured it out. I'm using an app to browse the forum, not a browser window. I didn't see any icons (and still don't) but that's okay. If I tap on my post's title several dialog boxes pop up, one of which is called Modify. ^_^ Will give it a go tomorrow, it's bedtime for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Tales, right? I've figured it out. I'm using an app to browse the forum, not a browser window. I didn't see any icons (and still don't) but that's okay. If I tap on my post's title several dialog boxes pop up, one of which is called Modify. ^_^ Will give it a go tomorrow, it's bedtime for me.Haha, ya, it's Tales.Okay, well that seems to make more sense as to why it's not showing up. We've just never had anyone with that issue before . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted April 28, 2011 Report Share Posted April 28, 2011 This should be marked a WiP in the subject if this is still a work in progress. Have you considered working on this character more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted May 5, 2011 Report Share Posted May 5, 2011 If there isn't a comment made on this app saying that you wish to continue with this character within 5 days, it will be locked for deletion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pan Posted May 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2011 I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back to this. I'm living in Alaska right now and we recently had a bad spate of internet snafus. I'm editing the original app as soon as I post this.eta: Alrighty, finished with that bit. Now to get a cutie mark reference made. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 I think she looks alright to me. Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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