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Name: Sweet Tweet

Gender: Female

Age: Filly

Species: Pegasus

Pelt Color: Light Green

Mane/Tail Color & Style: Pink in a messy bob. With medium size tail also messy.

Eye Color: Blue

Cutie Mark: Blue Bird

Physique:. Short and stumpy

Residence: Clouds Dale

Occupation: Student

Motivation: To see all the birds of Equestria.

Likes: Birds, Binoculars, nature, wildlife, flying, seeds, field Guides, song birds, books, getting the birds back during winter wrap up.

Dislikes: Loud noises, cats, winter, cold days, being in big cities, school, getting yup early.

Character Summary: Sweet Tweet is Jacker Tracker's little cousin. He would always try get her to help him look for the cutiesarus. One day while they were looking for the cutiesarus she noticed a cat trying to attack a baby chick on the forest ground. Sweet Tweet charged at the cat which grabbed the baby in its mouth and started up a tree. She grabbed a rock and beamed the cat in the head. The cat fell down letting go of the baby bird. Sweet Tweet rushed over to the baby bird. It was coverd in slobber and was not moving much.The cat was about to attack her but her older cousin stepped on and protected both her at the little chick. After that event she took it in and healed it back to health. It was still too young to live on its own so she decided to help it find its mother. She looked threw many books and asked many other ponies until she found the kind of bird it was. Sweet Tweet found out that it was in fact a song bird (Indigo Bunting) which was not an easy bird to come by.

She tried many things to find the song bird's mom. Sweet searched high and low. She did not give up no matter how frustrated she got. She would try leaving food on the ground but it would get eaten by all shorts of birds before the mama song bird could arrive. She finally found the mama song bird by whistling its call and she gave the baby back. After they had said their good byes she saw her cutie mark of a blue song bird. She was extremely happy and she knew she was destined to know all about all the birds in Equestria.

Sweet Tweet is a nice little Filly. She usually keeps to herself and her birds. Though when she is with her close friends she is out going. She can be quite goofy which can get on some ponies nerves. Most of the time she is quietly studying her birds. she can be quite head strong trying to find certian birds such as going into ponies gardens with out thier permission. Her parents live in Cloudsdale and both work in the snowflake making factory. They are often busy so they leave Sweet Tweet with her big cousin Jacker Tracker often.

When she was in the forest with him she would notice the birds singing and try to communicate by whistling back. After a while she got the hang of basic communication. Sweet Tweet does like other animals besides birds but birds of course are her favorite. Ever since she stared going down to ponyville she has become a bit of a seed collector. She likes to experiment to see witch one the birds like best.

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MyLittlePonyTales Alicorn

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I like where this character is headed. I'm not sure how finding a Phoenix led to a blue bird Cutie Mark. Also, I don't think that Phoenix's have babies. They are generally considered immortal, and are very rare. MLP doesn't tell us a whole lot about Phoenix's, except that Princess Celestia has one. That's the only one we've ever seen or heard of in the series. Maybe it would be best to tweak your app a little and make it a different bird. It can still be a rare bird...but perhaps something more normal than a Phoenix.

Also, embellish a little on your character. Help us get to know who they are a bit more. What about her parents? What do they do for a living? Your app says that she likes wildlife and seeds. Does that mean other types of wildlife in addition to birds? Does she want to have a garden someday? Where does her dislike of cats come from (being that she lives in Cloudsdale, where I don't think there can be cats)? You've got a good start to what could be a wonderful character.

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Okay, one last thing. Is her Cutie Mark supposed to simply be a blue bird, or an actual Bluebird, as in the type of bird?

Uhh....both? It can either be a blue bird as in a bird that is blue or the type...it really dosent matter >.>

Well, Bluebirds tend to have an orange colored chest, but it does depend on the species. And Bluebird, as in the type of bird, is one word. Blue bird, as two words, is simply a blue colored bird.

Also, after some research, I realized there are a lot of different types of Songbird. I think you'll need to be a little more specific in your Character Summary.

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Okay, one last thing. Is her Cutie Mark supposed to simply be a blue bird, or an actual Bluebird, as in the type of bird?

Uhh....both? It can either be a blue bird as in a bird that is blue or the type...it really dosent matter >.>

Well, Bluebirds tend to have an orange colored chest, but it does depend on the species. And Bluebird, as in the type of bird, is one word. Blue bird, as two words, is simply a blue colored bird.

Also, after some research, I realized there are a lot of different types of Songbird. I think you'll need to be a little more specific in your Character Summary.

....*sigh* Ok...fine. The bird on her butt isent a specific bird. Its just a bird...Im kinda nervious saying a sfasific bird considering that equestria isent real....if it dosent have humens who says it has THIS spasific song bird?....

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Well, as we see, Fluttershy takes care of a lot of birds. What their exact type is, we're never going to know. It's not important to the plot of the show. But, they can likely be compared to many birds that exist in real life. They aren't crazy or eccentric, they're just birds.

Nice job, you've done good. Approved.

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Well, as we see, Fluttershy takes care of a lot of birds. What their exact type is, we're never going to know. It's not important to the plot of the show. But, they can likely be compared to many birds that exist in real life. They aren't crazy or eccentric, they're just birds.

Nice job, you've done good. Approved.

*bows* Thank you so much @-@

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