Not bad (although I only got 5 minutes in because of my damn ipod's inability to buffer correctly). It seems very idealistic and organized so far, but the actual dialogue is a tad amateurish. Of course, it is the first, so I wouldn't expect it to be 100% perfect. P.S. I would ask to join in on this, but my voice sounds awful on microphone. AWFUL. Edit: Just finished it all. My opinion stands.