AlisonRose

Fiddlestick's mane sure felt the effects of the fans as soon as they turned on as it seemed to puff out and sprawl all over the place and even strands of it landing in her face causing her to fall over and assume the fainted goat position waiting for the horrors of horrors to be over. There was one thing that she was secretly scared of and it happened to be fans mainly lots of them. As she looked up at the ceiling to see all the fans she began to hyperventilate a bit as she attempted to think of what to do to fix the situation. [colour=#008000]"Fans, must, be, turned, off."[/colour] Fiddles wasn't able to talk much as her fear clenched her tight and made it hard for her to even move as she tried to crawl over to the nearest fan and pull its cord to turn it off. She would have to do this one at a time unless Misty could somehow turn them all off as quickly as she turned them on but perhaps this would be better left to hoof and not magic since not to be mean but Misty did use her magic to spawn all of these fans. [colour=#008000]"Fear, of fans, can't move, too scared."[/colour] Was all else she could say as she pulled the cord and almost began to cry as the fan blades sped up and blew more air in her face sending her mane straight back as her eyes opened wide in horror.

Apple Pie nodded at Berry Punch with a slight smile as she blushed a hint. She wasn't used to ponies openly complementing her like that, or her apple pies, it was something the felt that she would have to get used to but it didn't bother her that much more as it shocked her to hear someone actually say it. [colour=#00ff00]"Thank you Miss Punch, it means a lot to me to hear such an astute lady as yourself say those things about me."[/colour] She had no idea what the proper response should be since it was obvious that Berry Punch knew exactly what she was doing when it came to her life so there was no words of wisdom that seemed to roll off her tongue, that didn't matter though since Pinchy was too busy being adorable...again... Now came the talk of her cousin Apple Bloom. [colour=#00ff00]"Yes, Apple Bloom is rather intelligent and resourceful. I hope that her cutie mark shows off her talent to bring together ponies as it does the projects she works on. It'd be a shame for her to end up as a baker like myself."[/colour] She nodded her head slowly up and down, not meaning to be hard on herself for being a simple baker but more so seeing more in the cards for Apple Bloom.

Misty's wings came to full bloom as Martini shook her plot in her face. It was a strange feeling and although she didn't have her corrective lenses on she could do nothing but stare at her glorious behind and her Cutie Mark. She then let out a soft sigh as she knew that the other ponies at the bar didn't understand her "Did it hurt?" comment. She shook her head and looked at Pocket Change. [colour=#00ffff]"No the 'Did it hurt?' part was supposed to be a lead in for her to say 'did what hurt?' then I retort with 'when you got smacked with the gorgeous wing, since you are the most exquisiteness mare I've ever seen.' But you done went and ruined it."[/colour] She let out another sigh and sipped on her water again resting her head on the bar and lowering her wings as she drew circles with her hoof on the counter not knowing what else to talk about other then herself as before she had never really be asked about much else then herself or the Wonderbolts. [colour=#00ffff]"In other news, it sounds like your excavation went well and you seem to really enjoy that line of work so I hope you stick with it. You should always stick with things that make you happy."[/colour] Misty offered the words of wisdom as she looked up and gave a quick wink to Martini before she returns herself to her Lemon Water and the conversation at hoof with the two stallions.

It had been a long day and Fiddlesticks was plum tuckered from all the work that she had already done today and eating with her friends or more so new acquaintances was well worth it as she dug into her bowl of soup. As Filthy spoke up about the concert and Misty added in her two bits it made it clear that they were both going to come and enjoy the music. [colour=#008000]"Well,"[/colour] Fiddles started, [colour=#008000]"It just so happens that I have two extra tickets just sitting here in my bag. You two wouldn't mind sitting next to each other in the fancy seats would you? You'll have your own little booth to watch the performers from."[/colour] She giggled and slid the two ponies together and smushed their faces together on either side of hers. [colour=#008000]"It will be a most fantastic show for sure!"[/colour] She cheered letting them go and returning herself to eating. She attempted to keep her joy and excitement under wraps as she yipped and nipped at her soup keeping as straight a face as possible.

Fiddlesticks nodded her head in agreement as she started to put some food on her plate with a huge smile on her face at the trophy Misty made for herself. [colour=#008000]"It's rather cute darling, nothing to be ashamed of."[/colour] She grinned even more and patted Misty gently on the head trying to at least make her take a seat and eat with them. [colour=#008000]"So Mr. Rich, other then that prospect of a business partner you must have surely heard that there is a concert being played in the Music hall this Friday."[/colour] She giggled and slid a brochure towards him that so disgreatly had her name among several others that would be preforming there with her. [colour=#008000]"Surely if you find time you should come out and see the groups preform, it will be a spectical to be seen for sure."[/colour] She was trying her best to make it sound as appealing to him as she could without making it sound like he had to come. It would be nice for her to have at least some adequateness in the crowed to make it less awkward while she played her three piece set.

Misty blushed even more as the gorgeous bare mare flirted back at her. It made her feel good that there was other ponies who thought she looked good, it made her feel better thinking that Pocket Change wasn't just hitting on her but being honest about her appearance. [colour=#00ffff]"Don't you ever get tried of being a Bare Mare?"[/colour] Misty was just now prodding questions wherever she could slide one hoping to strike up more information about the bar mare, not so much finding an archaeological dig that interesting to her tastes. [colour=#00ffff]"Also I would like to know if it hurt."[/colour] She let out a snicker hoping that Martini would answer her in the simple form of "When what hurt?" but that was yet to be seen as she shifted on her stool and flopped over more on the counter trying not to take up too much room where the other guests might be trying to drink. She sipped more of her lemon water and giggled as the lemon wedge got stuck to her snout. She was in quite the perdiciment just staring at it not knowing how to take it off or perhaps she just didn't care and would let the scene lighten the mood of the hard workers who were all sleepy from fighting the storm.

It was hard for Apple Bumpkin not to shed a tear as she saw all of the foals gather around the teacher in such a way that it could move mountains to cry. Even the rain seemed to shed tears as they broke the embrace and Cheerilee began to dart the conversation focus away from herself onto Bumpkin herself. [colour=#a52a2a]"Naw Miss Cheerilee, there be no need ta clean the floors. It gives me something to do once ya'll leave."[/colour] She said with a giggle not wanting to make her guests clean up any mess while they were here on the farm. [colour=#a52a2a]"But yes you are right, we all slip up sometimes and I fear I have slipped up as well with not making this a very enjoyable field trip for all of you involved."[/colour] She bowed her head trying to not take the spotlight from the teacher but feeling that she too had let down not just the class but Cheerilee. She flipped her mane out of her face and with a decisive pose she cuts into the Apple Pie and hands the first piece to Apple Bloom. [colour=#a52a2a]"Yes this was made by your cousin Apple Pie, she even sent you this little card when I told her that ya'll'd be here for a field trip. Got a lot of heart that one."[/colour] Bumpkin giggled as she handed Apple Bloom a card that aside from what appeared to be a bunch of loose scratches and inconstant words to a normal farm filly at the bottom was a translation to the normal farm speak just in case. The card pretty much rambled on about how Apple Pie misses her cousin and wishes that she would come visit her more in Appleoosa or invite her to the family reunion again next year. [colour=#a52a2a]"Miss Cheerilee 'Ah think its time you took a seat."[/colour] Bumpkin pulled up a stool for the teacher to sit on and take a load off for a moment. [colour=#a52a2a]"The rest of ya'll can sit here on the floor or anywhere else so long as ya'll be supervised."[/colour] She winked at Haywire and let a gigglesnort escape her as she thought of all the fun that little filly had been part of today.

With a nod and a slight giggle Fiddlesticks moved her way over to Misty and gave her a gently rub on her head with a hoof. [colour=#008000]"I don't know why you are so sad Misty, you did nothin wrong here and in fact it looks like you made enough food for us to have a feast. I see nothing that you need to be upset over."[/colour] She giggles again and sits down in one of the chairs and flips her mane out of her face and set her hat on the bed next to her, normally she wouldn't have taken it off for supper but it was in the company of friends and a rather well off stallion who would most likely find it rude for her to have her hat on at the dinner table. She giggled and reached out and pulled out Misty's chair and Filthy's chair hoping that they would sit down and join her for some nice afternoon dinner. [colour=#008000]"So Mr. Rich you never did tell me what you were in town for. You know why I am here so it only seems fitting that you sit down and talk to us like the proper stallion you are."[/colour] She lets out another giggle as she arches her back in the chair for a bit trying to stretch her muscles a bit.

With a sigh Apple Bumpkin got off the poor teacher and kept of blushing as her face zoned out and made her look as if she was looking off into space. She shook herself off and patted the quick Haywire on the head. [colour=#a52a2a]"Oh 'Ah don't need any medical attention, 'Ah landed on...."[/colour] She kept her thoughts to herself as she shook her head no. [colour=#a52a2a]"Also Miss, its not your little sisters fault for causing the damage it wasn't anyponies fault at all. She was just helping to get some apples for the Apple Juice. Surely you can't fault the filly for trying."[/colour] She nodded her head and slid the little rust coloured pony close to her and attempted to smile. [colour=#a52a2a]"See how can you stay upset at this face?"[/colour] She reached down with her hooves and made a huge smile on Haywire's face. Albeit a failed attempt to make Haywire at least smile a little she herself mirrored the grin and stared at her sister with eyes that pleaded for her to not interrupt the field trip anymore then she already had. [colour=#a52a2a]"Now if you will quickly excuse me I have to stop all the foals from destroying my valuable apple juice making equipment...Or being hurt by it."[/colour] She sighed and quickly put her hoof up to her mouth and whistled loudly hoping that the foals acted as her chicks did and would all rush to her. [colour=#a52a2a]"If'n yall ponies come down here I'll cut ya'll a nice slice of Pie from my cousin Apple Pie, she made them by hoof!"[/colour] She presented a case full of Apple Pies. [colour=#a52a2a]"There is also plenty of Apple Juice here that we can sip on, you all did such a wonderful job. But I think you should all thank Cheerilee for bringing you here to experiance what it is like to be on a farm other the Sweet Apple Acres. 'Ah just hope that 'Ah have taught you some valuable lessons about hard work and dedication!"[/colour] She giggled to herself as she recalled Cheerilee making them write a report on the visit here.

Giggled as she watched her friend Pinchy dance about and imitate a cartoon she had viewed once about a cat finding this special pancake syrup and being able to see into forever. [colour=#00ff00]"Well thank you Miss Punch."[/colour] She patted Pinchy on her head and ruffled her hair a bit. [colour=#00ff00]"Maybe your name could be Princess Adorabus, or just Princess Abby for short. You could be the Alicorn of Cuteness!"[/colour] Apple Pie was surely going to the moon for those remarks but with an evil grin and eyes that could turn a Timber Wolf docile she thought about how hard it would be for Celestia to handle her. [colour=#00ff00]"In other news, I must state that the pie was hoof made by myself. I even picked these apples by hoof from the far east trees in the Buffalo Run Orchard. They are the ones that ripen last but taste the best." [/colour]She was so proud of herself that when she was given the pie with the ice-cream she didn't know what to, marvel in its simple elegance or swallow it hole.

Blushing slightly at all of Pocket Change's attention to her 'natural curves' she pretended to not hear the part about her backside and below her navel as she simply shook her head and sipped on more of her lemon water. [colour=#00ffff]"Yea, that about sums it up Mrs. Martini, has anypony told you that you are easy to look at?"[/colour] She felt odd saying it but she felt that it would be some way to get a bit of this 'attention' to flatter the barmare as well/ [colour=#00ffff]"As for the story, that is exactly how it goes, and the worse part is that she even came to the Flight Acadamy and became a Leader Pony, but that is as much of her as I have heard. Lately I've been trying to keep to myself and work extra hard to not let Spitfire down."[/colour] She nodded her head and listened to the talk about buying Rainbow Dash a drink, [colour=#00ffff]"I think it is safe to say she is love drunk."[/colour] Misty giggled and snorted at the end before she assumed a straight up pose and flicked her tail as a face of pure shock covered her face and caused her to blush even more.

Fiddlesticks quickly fixed herself up and flipped her mane out of her face, albeit wet still good looking on her. She tipped her hat and with a quick kick knocked the dunce cap off of her friend Misty and clung to her tightly. [colour=#008000]"You are far from a Dunce mah Misty, here, let us go into the hotel and get you two dried off."[/colour] She didn't know what else to say, out here they were just getting soaked so with a decisive move Fiddles grabbed a very tight hold on Misty and preformed an almost sprint towards the Hotel grabbing onto Filthy as well making sure to not mess his fine looking suit up. [colour=#008000]"Pardon the hooves Mr. Filthy but we'aint got much time before 'Ah'm sure we are all soaked to the bone and get all sick-like."[/colour] She erupted in the door holding tightly onto them still as she finally let them down inside of the hotel and trotted slowly and casually up to the desk to get her room key.

Apple Bumpkin looked on it a hint of horror as she saw Remington, Snips, and Snails all heading towards the center of the vat. Surely they knew that was where the drain was. Bumpkin quickly made her way up there and with the help of Snips pulled Remington out of the vat, a little too forceful she ended up pulling the other two ponies out with her as even her herself fell out of the vat. Landing smack dab on Cheerilee, their muzzles very close. Bumpkin closed her eyes as she braced for impact but having landed on something soft other then the ground she gasped and opened her eyes, blush streaking everywhere and her eyes widening as she just laid there not knowing what to do. [colour=#a52a2a]" 'Ah hope all them foals are safe, is anypony hurt?"[/colour] She muttered from her position atop Cheerilee. [colour=#a52a2a]" 'Ah can go get the med kit should anypony have some scrapes or bruises."[/colour] She wanted to make sure that Cheerilee herself didn't have to care for the foals as much hoping that it would lighten her load as a teacher and get her to relax a bit.

I wanted to be in there =D but I wasn't at the con T_T

Fiddles giggled a bit at the pun that Doctor Stable just had to use. [colour=#008000]"Well I guess that there could be worse things, we'd best get inside before we stay out here and catch a cold or worse and actually need the Doctor's help."[/colour] She curtsied towards Filthy, [colour=#008000]"You are very welcomed to come into my room and I would love to play for you once we come to the hotel."[/colour] She then turned quickly to Misty and wrapped a hoof around her shoulder. [colour=#008000]"I would be delighted if you would spend the night with me as well. I still know nothing of this town and would rather not get lost."[/colour] She winked at Misty and giggled again as she began to lead the way swishing her tail about as she thought about what sort of jig she would play for Filthy, or what sort of a jig Misty might actually enjoy rather then the same out southern influenced classic jig.

With a shy giggle and a ton of blush Fiddlesticks pried herself from the 'wreckage' and stood rubbing a hoof on her head. [colour=#008000]"Ah, my big pardon Mr. Rich, I didn't mean to bump into you. Here I was just trotting along towards the hotel over there and then suddenly bam I lost traction and slid into you."[/colour] No great story would be complete without hoof gestures and it was to be sure that Fiddles knew how to use hers the most effective ways as she was now draping a hoof over Filthy Rich as she recreated the scene. [colour=#008000]"Hopefully you yourself are not hurt in any way? And where may I ask that you are staying?"[/colour] Most of the time she wouldn't have stopped to talk but she did just plow into this poor(rich) stallion on accident and most likely ruined his suit that he was wearing. [colour=#008000]"Is there anything I can do to say I am sorry? I normally am not so clumsy."[/colour] She tilted her head down in shame as she trotted over to the doctor pony not even sure how he got there and allowed him to look her over she was already soaked to the bone so why not wait a few more minutes before getting dry.

Its looking a lot better now, however as I stated above, the Cutie Mark Story section and the History section are two different areas of the app. Separating them would be wonderful ^^

Hey you there! The app is looking Mighty Fine! (that's a joke, cuz the clothing company that sells MLP:FiM shirts is called Mighty Fine T_T) But no, in all realism the app looks fantastic! There is only a few issues I see, Firstly there is a rule against referencing cast ponies in your app (including the princesses). Second, what sort of app is complete without a Cutie Mark Story? None, please take the time to make a Cutie Mark story about the events leading up to and earning her Cutie Mark (Note: This IS different then a History section.) Third, I feel like the app itself is still lacking a hint of detail. I also think the part about not having many friends could be tweaked also considering there are plenty of ponies in the world that would want to be her friend ^^ and maybe tell a better job about her Bard days. Other then that most of the app looks ship shape!

With a giggle Fiddlesticks nodded her head as she started to trot towards the hotel. Ahead of her was a brownish pony who she could barely make out to be Filthy Rich, she had only met him once when she was in Ponyvile and she knew very little of him. [colour=#008000]"I wonder what he is doing in Trottingham."[/colour] Her voice trailed off as she started to pick up pace, the rain starting to come down now in spits and spatters as she tugged slowly at Misty trying to get to move her rump towards the hotel. [colour=#008000]"Come on Misty lets get inside fast before the rain starts to hit us and ruin yer mane!"[/colour] She giggled softly to herself as she trotted with increasing speed towards the nice warm and dry hotel. Unannounced to her there was a misplaced stone in the road causing her to trip and tumble RIGHT INTO Filthy. [colour=#008000]"Oof, sorry. I...I um..."[/colour] She had no idea what to do, she was too embraced to actually talk as she noticed how disheveled she must look ramming into a business pony in such a manor.

Admittedly Fiddlesticks was getting surprised by the abilities of this Mojo pony, but the magic of this Mystic Magic was getting her in awe with not how frantic it worked but with such grace and ease it made what seemed to be totally random effects but in all reality they could even be tied to her emotions or her environment. Either way Fiddles wasn't going to take a chance with getting in the way if she perhaps got angry and summoned an Ursa Major. [colour=#008000]"Well, that was stunnin' and amazing both."[/colour] Her voice hitting with a more Apple Family accent now as she spoke and looked about Misty and Mojo. She looked up to the sky next it wasn't her idea really but the rainbow seemed to bring the rain either that or it had planned to come before they even gathered. Fiddlesticks let out a sigh as she turned and swished her tail at the other two. [colour=#008000]"We best hurry to the hotel, don't want to get caught out here in this rain. Looks like a big'n."[/colour] She nodded her head and winked to Misty as if inviting her to go and stay in the hotel with her.

Apple Pie giggled as she followed closely behind her friend. Surely she was very excitable to be sure but that wasn't going to stop Apple Pie from having a good time with her. [colour=#00ff00]"Hehe Pinchy, now while I am sure that we could easily get the pie and the juice for ourselves I would like to ponder why you are bringing your Mother into this?"[/colour] She knew that her mother was a wine maker and would most likely dabbled in other forms of juices but how hard could it really be to get a simple glass of juice. She stared at her small pony friend and giggled again as she trailed off her call for her mother. It seemed that Pinchy got cuter and cuter as she sat there, soon to explode with pure adorable. [colour=#00ff00]"You know, you have a very dangerous power for sure." [/colour]She let out a giggle before brushing her hair back, it was one of the few times she had taken off her bonnet but it felt good to let her mane just flow free now as she was in the cool house. There was no more birds and sun to attack her 'nest' of hair today so her half-braid fell kindly to the side of her head with the tip flaring out.

Misty put on a soft grin as she noticed the other ponies interest into her stories. [colour=#00ffff]"Yes she is a hero of Equestria she is the Element of Generosity. After she knocked me out her Rainbow Haired friend over there,"[/colour] Misty made a very not-so-subtle point over to Rainbow Dash. [colour=#00ffff]"She is the Element of Loyalty and she came diving right after Rarity, not only catching her, but us as well and even preformed a Sonic Rainboom. Mind you it was cool to be saved but I would have rather just grabbed Rarity and been done with the whole situation. At least Rainbow Dash got to spend a day with us thanks to that event."[/colour] She bobbed her head a bit before she swished her tail, there seemed to be a kink in it or something as she had to expend extra effort just to flip it about. She sat there and drank some more of her Lemon Water and with a grin she pinched part of her suit, right above her flank and let it smack down showing how skin tight it was for all those around. She giggled to herself and then prepared to answer their questions. [colour=#00ffff]"Well no, I don't ware anything under my uniform. Rarity did in fact have help from that student of Celestia's Twilight Sparkle, but even that didn't seem to help in the heat of the sun."[/colour] Normally Misty would have gotten startled and tried to run away from the conversation and attention but after such a hard days work she felt that it more so calmed her down to have some ponies to talk to while she stuffed her face with Pie and Lemon Water.

Apple Bumpkin stepped back out into the barn and looked about at all the foals in what seemed to be a hilarity of controlled chaos. Her eye began to twitch as she saw a few of the ponies flying round and round on the treadmill causing her to panic, if any of these foals got hurt it would be her problem to deal with. She trotted quickly over to the pile of ponies and attempted to separate them. [colour=#a52a2a]" 'Ah hope that ya'll are ok?"[/colour] Apple Bumpkin let out a sigh when she found out that Apple Bloom was on the bottom of the pile. [colour=#a52a2a]"Now Apple Bloom what in tha world are ya'll doin on the floor, let alone under all these foals."[/colour] She giggled to herself as she stood all of the foals up and brushed a quick hoof through their manes before she turned her attention to the more pressing matter of task, the whole machine had been going good for a little bit but then as soon as Bumpkin and Cheerilee left the thing seemed to halt to a standstill, she surely wasn't getting her dinner date now. She found her way up to the top of the machine where she would supervise the smashing of the apples, so far they seemed to be doing good without her help but she still felt that it was needed to have an adult at all three of the stations. Bumpkin then turned when she heard her name and focused on Cheerilee who seemed to be talking to a new pony, a parent perhaps. [colour=#a52a2a]"No Miss Cheerilee,"[/colour] Bumpkin began to blush slightly. [colour=#a52a2a]"No recompense is needed."[/colour] She felt smart for using a big word like recompense and she just hoped that would at least score her a smile or something.

Fiddlesticks' mouth hung ajar as she looked at Mojo, then to the book, then back to Mojo. [colour=#006400]"There is no way I am just going to borrow this book Mojo, in such a state as it is at least let me do something for you in return?"[/colour] She wasn't sure what but she wasn't going to just take the book and most likely never see Mojo again aside from a few small parties she preformed at. She started to arch her bow across the strings of her violin and a more country feel hit the song. She turned it from a symphony into a Jig. Mindlessly she played away at the sharp and face pace as she tapped her hoof trying to keep herself from going even faster then she was. The melody seemed to flow from the fiddle with ease as she closed her eyes and flipped her mane out of her face. Her hat seeming to not want to fall from her head as she bobbed up and down and weaved. She wasn't so much playing the song anymore but was playing one of her own creation. At the end she took a bow and began to blush slightly. [colour=#008000]"Well, I hope that was worth the wait."[/colour] She winked at the two and grinned from ear to ear.

Wow, honestly this app blew me away when I read it, very well done! Only a few things I see with it. Why name the family ponies if they do not have players? its not something that I can tell you to take out simply since they do not really help nor hurt the app. But the way our naming system works is that if someone wanted to use that name they wouldn't be able to unless they fell into that relation with you since YOU used the name and your app has already been passed to approved. Other then that all of my points are positive. Good work!