Hiya, nice to meet you Here are my questions, comments, and suggestions Your title definitely needs some work. Why not just "Gale Flurry [Final]"? Not only is it hard to read, it's very confusing! Sorry to say, but it probably will not be accepted as an RP character with that title. Don't worry, that's an easy fix. It's my understanding that you can't have relationships with canon characters, and I think the Wonder Bolts count. You could always create your own team of flyers, or ask some moderators if being a Wonder Bolt is an acceptable career. Your character summary and cutie mark stories are very strong! I enjoyed reading them. I also liked all of the proper grammar and spelling. What a treat! Keep up the good work!