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and actually, i can't seem to find the part stating she comes back to Shade and Yuki's house repeatedly, if i did include that i meant to say that she technically lived with them, until she felt attached and wanted to live with them. Despite that one detail, i changed the example of her artwork (if theres a specific name for artwork based off of nature, please let me know so i can just put that there instead) and i changed the story of her arrival a lot, or if you can give me your version so i can just pop that in, that could help too. List anything else missing and ill fix that, but thats all i could think of right now

Yeah just made them

Oh, shoot, yeah im gonna work on it i've thought about some changes gonna apply this saturday night!

"YES!!! FINALLY! Thanks piggy!" Yuki began to calmly nibble on the hat making sure it was to his liking, and began to eat it. "So i'm guessing we're heading out?"

"Oh alright madame bistro, ill still wait to help you guys out!" Yuki however, was desperately looking for another straw hat, considering he wanted to try one in the first place "COME ON HELP A PEGASUS OUT! I want a straw hat..."

"Aww... i wanted the hat..." Yuki reluctantly accepted the fact that the hat was no longer under his name, but under saddlesore's. He eventually got over it, and went to see what Pigpen was up to "Hey piggy, what you up to?"

oh i think itll be finished by the 25th, school is a lot easier at the beginning

"That's Princess Luna? Woah, even better, actually my friend who is an artist wanted to draw you, considering she's into regal and nightly figures like you, maybe you two could meet up and she could start working?" Yuki was also expecting a reply from Saddlesore to see if he could eat the hat instead of Saddlesore, I mean, it IS a straw hat...

[ The weeks before the end of labor day are jerks... inactivity... but im back!] "Woah saddlesore just cuz i gave piggy here a nickname doesn't mean you can go ahead and start hating, piggy's my friend at the same time and i don't appreciate the way you're abusing him, so you either leave him alone and avoid trouble, or keep ti up and look like rubbish to princess luna and cadence here. Also, if you don't want that hat over there...Can i have it?" "Piggy, you don't even need to acknowledge his presence if he's gonna start making fun of you." Even though Yuki mentioned Luna's name he was slow on realizing that yet another regal figure was in the same room as he was. "...wait... is that.. Dang celestia you got a nice makeover, you look just like princess luna!" Yuki stared with a blank, yet excited look on his face

Good if i didnt have so many unplanned inactivity... back to school gets in the way of everything nowadays ;A;

"Bro, Saddlesore, about time, looks like Piggy here wants your attention" Yuki rarely ever gave nicknames, but felt that he made friends today, and felt safe "Lets see, PigPen is gonna be named Piggy, Saddlesore... I dunno I'll come up with something later..." He began to prepare for his next order from Cadence

"Oh, really? Weird i thought that the vase was supposed to be in the silverware pile and the china plates were supposed to be in the decoy pile" Yuki decided to drop the topic and noticed that Saddlesore was idle "Bro, bro, you there? Bro. BRO! IM JUST TRYNA GET YO ATTENTIOOOOOON!" Yuki proceeded to poke the grumpy stallion on the cheek until he got his attention, but until then he paid no attention to what was around him

Well yes i would be happy to do it in free for all but honestly i feel that main rp is more fun, or maybe i haven't seen enough .3.

uugh who knew just one application would be so much work... i guess thats how it pays off in the end, ill get to work when i get the chance

uuh... actually i think i'll just leave out the part where they found her and say she just went to their house instead, but never really wanted to speak to them.

Woaaah it makes them look like kid-snatchers? dang, well no.. but... i thought the application stated that everyone knows about duskus but they couldn't connect her with the couple looking for her, and Duskus grew atatched to them a lot faster than they did with her, but if you give me something i can put in there that can explain this, lemme know and ill do it Self consciousness made clear? Sure New comparison? Its fine i'll change it I'll do it tomorrow since i gotta hit the sack early for once

oh actually on your fourth question, its a comparison, im not saying that they eat meat, its a synonym (is that that right word?) o3o and she feels as if she's being looked at strangely, when she really isn't, she just lacks some self-confidence the whole report thing doesn't really matter since Shade and Yuki could take care of her without a problem, and it was clear that she was shy. Everyone knows that she's back in Trottingham. but they don't know she's related to the couple that lives in the nearby woods. I'll tweak the amount of time to just a week, considering that she learned from herself and her foster parents before she got lost. But you're right in terms of how long a young filly can last in the woods, even just a few acres of it. Also she got lost when she was a young filly, not a foal.

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Oh youtube, you have caught me yet again Well i was on an anime forum and looked all ALL the art on their gallery, and noticed that when it came to my anime drawings... it lacked a lot, but then i noticed that some collabs were made in Manga and Anime in terms of story and art, and thought that maybe i should make a Dojinshi with someone or maybe a youtube series, i know this might be too much to ask for, but honestly I wanted to do something like this for a long time, but haven't developed the art skills yet, you could say my art style is like TWEWY characters, but more simple and... well , just not worth looking at. Perhaps someone could assist me with this request i have and help me do what i've wanted to do for a long time, and if you do wish to collaborate with me ill send you some sketches of the characters i want to use and their descriptions so you can know how to draw them (NOTE: This is anime im talking about, im getting the hang of drawing ponies its just that because of that i kinda let anime go off the radar and it got rusty and just ugly...) Thanks for reading -M!$T