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  1. StarStorm
    No problem, Grimshy!! I'm glad that you liked it I'm happy to have been able to help you through the process!!
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    Wow, this game is going by FAST!!!! You're all rockstars, scamps!!!! Way to be on the ball with everything This started what, 5 days ago? And were on number 13? It's craziness!!
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    ((Her horn is under the hat!! ^^ Thank you scamps, I'm glad that you all like it!! Also, Red Rock dead ahead you guys!! How do you scamps feel about stopping soon and getting settled into beach-side cabins that the school can magically somehow afford to rent us? C:)) [colour=#800080]"You're the most beautimous girl I've ever seen!!"[/colour] Shade laughed alongside Violet as Slick goofed around with the socks, talking about how he was the prettiest filly on the bus. Everypony was having a gigglefest!! The red eyed little pony's face expression turned to that of surprise when Knight asked Slick to give him a sock too, but she was more excited than anything to see KNIGHT, out of everypony on the entire bus, try on such attire. [colour=#800080]"Okay!! We can all wear socks!!"[/colour] She looked out the window. The palm trees were growing more and more, and the towns were growing beachier and beachier. Stopping at a light, a raggedy looking pony had spotted her through the window. She gave him a small wave.
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    (My bad, scamps!! Double post!!)
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    YES YES YES YES YEEEEESSSS!!!! This looks wonderful, Grimshy!!!! There's now a whole bunch of Blizzy in her history, she has a cutiemark story that works with mane and doesn't have to change who Blizzy is, AND the bands that she likes turns my gigglebox I'll send her up for senior staff to review right this minute!!
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    ((Hooray!!! I love it when I can make friends smile!! It does kind of look that way, doesn't it?! I meant to just have him covering his mouth with his hoof in shock of Knight pushing Bluemoon off XD I was tempted to just draw his tail and backhooves over the chair, but I wanted his face in the shot XD))
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    Hey scamps!! I drew something that I thought you guys might like to see And everypony faces backwards... Seems legit :3 ((So sorry to all you new scamps, I sketched this out a few days ago before I knew that you were joining!!)) ((Also, I'll post after Violet gets in another reply ))
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    Why would anybody be in trouble?
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    I'm sorry Silvie, I didn't mean to insist that that was cannon for our characters, I was just teasing you about it ^^ Okay, either one of those is fine with me!! ^^ Would you like to make the first post when you're ready and then I can let you out and you can meet everypony on the bus?
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    Yayyy!!!! I'm so happy to hear that!! Don't be afraid to change it up some if you'd like, and remember that I'll be right here if you have any more questions. Let me know when you make your edits and I'll give it another lookover ^^ I can't wait to see what you come up with!!
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    Wow, you did a fantastic job on the history. That's looking much better!! She's about ready to go as far as I can see!! Now, about that cutiemark story... I actually had to ask about the whole freezing over the lake thing, and it turns out that pegasi themselves don't freeze the lakes, but the weather that they create does. They also make the weather up in the factory. I think that one alternative you could possibly have, is that maybe instead of Blizzy freezing over the lake in her intensive anger, it could be like a really snowy day already and she could maybe accidentally run into a snow sculpture or something that a couple of little foals were making. Then, in helping them rebuild it, she could realize just how much she loves the snow and how it was able to calm her and bring her a little bit of joy even in such a tragic situation. Then maybe after discovering how much she loved it, she could start going to the weather factory with her mum some days to go see how it's made and then practice a whole bunch to become really good with it and get the spot on the winter wrap up team? We can always come up with something else if you don't like the idea. Hope this helps!!
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    No worries, Korok!! Take all the time you need
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    Silvie!!! Of course you can join, scamp!!! I love Dawn, even if she tried stealing Star's girl when the janitor attacked Umm, please don't catch the bus on fire and be sure sure to ask if you can set somepony's mane on fire ahead of time, but you can TOTALLY be a stowaway if you'd like!!!! Would you like to be in Shade's luggage? XD
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    ((Okay scamps, we have two three new players!! Sketchy, Shadow, and Dawn (who is a stowaway and reveal herself shortly) who are all looking for a chance to hop in Oh GAWHD Licorice must be mentally deficient to leave all of these kiddos behind XDD))
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    [colour=#800080]"Heehee!!" [/colour]Shade found it hilarious when Slick put the sock on his ear, letting it just hang over his face like it did. "[colour=#800080]No-no-no-no-no, it goes on you hoof silly!!"[/colour] Shade was doing her best to control her laughter, but it just wasn't happening!! She bit her tongue to keep from being cracking up TOO loudly as Slick pulled her pink little sock up over his hoof. [colour=#800080]"Oh my gosh, Slick!! [/colour][colour=#800080]You're my hero of the day for this!!"[/colour] Her chuckles finally died down after another minute. [colour=#800080]"Violet!! We can't make him wear it the WHOLE trip.. What would happen when we go to the beach? But, you can certainly wear it and be part of our little group if you want to Slick! You should at least put ONE more on though, because only wearing one sock looks kind of silly." [/colour]Shade slipped her green one off, just in case he wanted to. [colour=#800080]At least a green one is a LITTLE more manly... Kind of...[/colour]
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    Right now if you'd like!!! You can hop in too if you'd like, Shadow! Just pretend like you two have been there the whole time ^^
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    Davroth drew something adorable, and Tales has sent in her line!! .....But, reading the posts above me.. I guess that that's already been said, eh? XD
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    [colour=#ff0000]Where IS she?! First block has started already!! Maybe I should go try and find her..[/colour] A frantic Wishbone started to reach for the music room's handle, only to pull his hoof back. [colour=#ff0000]No.. What if they don't like colts coming in?[/colour] Wish's ear perked up, hearing the unmistakeable hoofsteps of non-other than his first-block teacher, Mr. Fritter, coming down the hall. [colour=#ff0000]"Eep!!"[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]Gotta hide, gotta hide..[/colour] He reached for the handle at lightning speed, entering and closing the door behind himself so fast that his tail barely made it in. [colour=#ff0000]Wow!! Kinda crazy to think that this was once a music room..[/colour] A new-to-her host, Shadow, had introduced himself to the three, giving each a polite kiss on the hoof. [colour=#008080]Everypony sure is pretty friendly around here...[/colour] It looked pretty routine for him, getting up from reading his book for introductions and after simply returning to it. He might be fun to get to know later, but for now, Licorice wanted to spend some more time with Soul. [colour=#008080]"So, Soul-" [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Licorice!! There you are!!"[/colour] She was interrupted by a small, grey pony who trotted her way.[colour=#008080] "Bonezy!!"[/colour][colour=#ff0000] "Yeah, hi!! Did you not hear the bell ring? It's first period like, right now." [/colour][colour=#008080]"There's somepony I would like you to meet.." [/colour]Licorice started, completely ignoring her friends concern. [colour=#008080]"Wishbone, this is RedSoul Eclipse. Soul, this is my friend Wish. He's just a little nervous because he's never been in here before."[/colour] Wishbone blushed a bit. [colour=#ff0000]Well you didn't hafta tell him that..[/colour]
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    No worries Harrington ^^ Cool mug!! Besides, who doesn't love AJ?
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    Slick had used Shade as an example, putting a hoof on her shoulder and saying how harmless fillies, like her, were, and that he would trust her. [colour=#800080]Aww..[/colour] Shade found it really sweet how he was standing up for fillies like that, but didn't say anything about it out loud. [colour=#800080]"Do you like them?" [/colour]She held up her front two hooves- one pink, one green. [colour=#800080]"I guess that socks aren't really necessary, but they're kind of fun!" [/colour]Shade giggled, not surprised at all that Slick had never tried them himself.[colour=#800080] "Would you like to? You can wear mine!" [/colour]She started pulling one of her socks off- The bright pink one. [colour=#800080]"Cmon, Slick!! It'll be fun!!" [/colour]She giggled more, hoping he'd do it.
  21. StarStorm
    *Claps* Grimshy, this character is amazing!! You used plenty of rich detail, really giving us a feel for you character. She sounds adventurous, and like a ton of fun!! And who doesn't love a good tomboy? Okay, so there are a few things that will need changed before I can send her up for senior staff to look over and approve. I apologize in advance because this but this first edit will be kind of a biggie. The cutiemark story really isn't going to work how it is now. As they show us in Sonic Rainboom, each snowflake has to be hoofmade. Even though I really like the story, accidentally creating a blizzard just isn't a possibility. The mark itself looks awesome though!! You did a great job creating it :3 Also, even though the divorce was a big event in Blizzy's life, the history section focuses a little too heavily on it. It would be awesome to hear a bit more about Blizzy and a bit less about her parents. Later in the app you say that Blizzy liked to be along as a foal. Maybe to get more about her into the history, you could tell us the story of when she started becoming more social? You don't have to if you don't feel like it, but that's just an idea on how to expand on that a little c: Okay, so just one last little thing- Cloudsdale's rain factory should be changed to Cloudsdale's weather factory, but it's totally cool to have her mum work in the rain section Blizzy's character summary is looking awesome!! Reading about her favorite bands made me giggle. The fog manipulation that her father did raise some question, but thinking about it, I don't see why a pegasus wouldn't be able to manipulate fog just the same as any other weather. I actually think that it's a really cool idea, and it seems extremely fitting for Haze to be from Las Pegasus!! It just really sounds like the kind of show that they would have there I know that it may seem like kind of a lot, but besides those it's looking fantabulous as far as I can see
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    [colour=#800080]"Eeep!!"[/colour] Shade squeaked, quickly raising her back hooves from the now greener, stickier floor and up over Bluemoon. [colour=#800080]"Gearlock, I think !!" [/colour]The purple little pony listened as Slick asked if Violet and herself would like to sit by him and Knight, but not TOO close to Knight. She looked down at the apple flavoured, slushie filled floor. [colour=#800080]"Suuurrreee.." [/colour]Shade accepted the invitation, hoping that it was a good move. [colour=#800080]"I guess if Knight sits by the window we won't have to be RIGHT right next to him, only kind of."[/colour] She plopped her plot down next to Slick. Something about sitting by him just made her smile. It was Flashbomb's turn to ask somepony truth or dare, but he seemed distracted. [colour=#800080]I guess I'd prolly be kinda distracted too if I had to somepony I really liked..[/colour]
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    -More review, the first one being at the top of the page- There is a giant game of truth or dare going on. Because of dares and questions, Puzzlebeat admitted to his crush on Shade, and then later Pocket was dared to kiss somepony by the end of the trip. Pocket revealed that she only liked girls, although is now questioning herself on that. Pocket dared Shade to kiss either kiss her or Puzzlebeat, Shade's choice of who. She chose Pocket, causing Puzzlebeat to grow cold with depression. Shade and Pocket both tried to comfort him, but it didn't work so well. The group stopped at a gas station, but not much notable happened besides Slick daring Knight to try and hit on the group of three filly fillies- Shade, Bluemoon, and Violet. As we're all still little kiddos, Knight is still in the "girls are icky" phase, which isn't good for Violet, because she has a crush on him. Still, he tried to copy his dad and said something like "Wanna sit on my lap and talk about the first thing that comes up?" causing Shade to run out of the station screaming "Eww!!" and Bluemoon to actually accept the offer. Shade ran into Pocket, who was talking with a large group of ponies outside the bus, and Pocket asked to talk to her. They started to, but when Shade admitted to liking the kiss Pocket ended up kissing her again!! Also, while they were in there, Shade and Bluemoon bought socks from a sock machine, and so Shade Bluemoon and Violet all decided to trade and miss match with each other Back on the bus, Flashbomb and Blizzy started crushing on each other. Due to a dare, Flash just kissed Blizzy and they both liked it!! Gearlock is being more social, moving to the back next to Slick and Knight. Bluemoon actually DID sit in Knight's lap, causing him to push her off thinking it was gross. She teased him and sat up next to him again and he backed up into Slick, who teased him about being afraid of the little filly and he got upset and called Slick mean and left to a new row. Shade and Violet were plotting for how to date Slick and Knight, (even though Shade kissed Pocket she's had a crush on Slick since the beginning) and decided that their first order of business was to get Knight to like fillies, so they took it as an opportunity to be nice and apologize for what'd just happened. Everypony else was apologizing, too, and Knight and Slick resealed their friendship with a bro-hoof. Knight is still pretty upset, though. Pocket tries to comfort Puzzle, which doesn't go so well. Broken has recently joined the story, but is already taking part in truth or dare and being social. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!! Welcome welcome welcome to the rp, Zora!!
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    No worries, Weesh!! I will totally start posting and letting everyone know once someone has sent off their line or drawing
  25. StarStorm
    I would love to be your helper, Grimshy!! ^^ I'll have to wait until you write some more on her before I can give you a thorough review, but you're off to a great start
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