ClockChime

I've had a story in my head for a while, and like most of my stories it's steam punk. A group of ponies awaken from stasis in a long abandoned complex, with only whisps of memories as to who they are. the complex is dark and dyeing, power running out. The air is ancient, though free of mildew, all living things turned to dust millennia ago. This place was inhabited one, thriving even, but nothing of that remain. There is evidence of a fight, a long forgotten battle. There are skitters in the dark, probing eyes watching from the dark. Your mission is to escape and find out what happened here. Apply here: Player List: Chara name / player / job 1)Clockchime / Clockchime / engineer 2) Spin Art / Frost137 / Weather Patrol 3)[colour=#282828]Starfire[/colour][colour=#282828] / hitman61live / Pegasus Scientist[/colour] 4)Blackboard / Cainiam / History Teacher 5) 6) 7) 8)

Wait a second... Who's at the top and bottom of this list?

Cool, bear in mind this is my first time rping here and I haven't RP'd in a while so I may be a bit rusty. So what's the scene?

Might I be pinkie pie?

Oh, uh thanks... Thought I'd have to do another rewrite. Okay then on to rping, as soon as I get my home wifi in.

No problem, I need to work on my patience. I didn't spend terribly long on it, only 5-6 hours My writing is terible, so I can remove it if need be. I can expand on personality but I'd need to know what's missing

And now I feal like a jerk. Ehhh free for all sounds realy chaotic, if anybody can jump in or out the story just turns sour, I've had a lot of experience with that, free for all has never worked for me.

congrats...

hehehe granted, mmmm hope so Waiting is getting realy boring... Might just leave at this point

she has come no farther, this is who she was from the begining i'll have my editor take care of it.

erhem... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO worst show on the planet.

well might as well put this up. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/55021/The-Clockwork-Alicorn-Book-One%3A-Charms read and enjoy

discord of course, have to stick with chaos

1-eeeeee when i'm more awake i'll expand the history, and mybe i'll mix it but as of yet i'd rather keep the story and list type history seperate 2-i do screw up spellling i will never be able to do this write, with out popping it into a spell check program and even then i miss stuff mrrrrrrr i hate tweaking edit: okay history extended, i certainly hope for the last time, anymore and i'm forceing things into the charector wich i dont want to do.

okay total rewrite, hows this?

ohoho, tuche mmm true i was experimenting with being a bit darker for simplicities sake i'm just going to s**** the whole idea the uncle bit was ripped from her orignal storyline of one of my fic's, in which her uncles were flim and flam but thats a no go here so ya and i have a stronger defenition of sad then mostto me this story is cheery (over exageration ) her original dynamic was that of a pony who'd been abondoned so many times, that she finds ponies in need and saves them and becoming freinds Okay, working on history now, not gonna be a story this time

Cool, so far it's just a pain, I don't like making artificially happy chara. I'm going too expand it tonight when I'm not mobile. Edit:okay started working

Hmmm realy? That's realy weird and rather unlikely why would they do that?

I have the supposed source of the leak. Aparently a hacker from /mlp/ in 4chan hacked the hubs site and pulled it from there

Okay let's see XYa I will swap the data part, XAs for the cutie mark bit, I guess I'll have to work that out, it breaks the cardinal rule of writing "show don't Xtell" XHmmm depression... I'll have to work with that. Was meant to be more cold then depressed. XI'll have to tweak her age, I thought filly was older then that. And ya history and again show don't tell XTweaking antisocial to cold I know it's over done, that's why I added the dead grandfather and abandoning uncle. Again raising age I'll toss it to my editor Hehe,I was trying to do rule 2 "make an excellent character, and make them suffer" hope that works out Edit:using this quote as a check list btw

what do you mean? Blend?

Hehe I keep forgetting I changed my name here for RP sake my name is actualy Claw Gerber that is what I'm known as everywhere else