NeoExlucky

Time Spinner moved towards Shimmer and stood next to her. [colour=#696969]"Deity, you need to return." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity gave a quick sigh and moved next to Time Spinner. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Well this has been an interesting journey."[/colour] [colour=#000000]EDIT:[/colour][colour=#000000] (Saronyx could you send me a pic of Shimmer and velocity Please? If you don't have one could you just send me appearance stuff about them. I'm sure I could make both in Pony Generator. Those are the only two I need to finish this pic of my timeline.)[/colour]

I'm on the front page!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I also forgot to thank the owner of the website. Without them we wouldn't be here, so thank you Mayor of Canterlot!

Hey there Everybody, Neo here! Time Spinner's sick so I said I'd take over and boy is this one big! This is a thank you to everybody who helped me in my RolePlay life. This was done in a random order and the amount of people is large so if I miss you I'm so sorry! I know that as time goes on their might be more people to thank so if I miss you here, you'll probably be in the next one. So let's get started. QuickLime is someone who has helped me almost since the beginning. She helped me with my first App of Time Spinner in Crossovers and ever since I have been a fan. From creating characters to the blogs that she writes, she always does something that I never regret reading. She also inspired me to write this article and is someone I look up to in the community. We both share the fact that both our usernames have two Capital letters in them. She always loves to help others and is really good at it. It's something I would love to do in the community. Plus one of my favorite animals is a raven which she's the queen of. StarSwirl is next on the list. Starswirl helped with the creation of Time 2.0 and never once got frustrated. He loves science (Like I do.) and is someone who I know if I ever have a question about the community I can ask him. Star Swirl caught on to the Samurai Jack references that are in Time's Backstory that no one else brought up. He's really good at what he does and his avatar picture always makes me laugh. StarStorm also helped with Time 2.0 and is someone I have roleplayed with. Her characters or scamps as she calls them have always been very good and even provided a Love interest for my character: Pocket Watch, despite all the love triangles going on in the RP. It was also one of my favorites though Left Behind was never finished. Rosewind is someone that I'm sure has no idea who I am but I'm thanking anyways. She's always doing so much for us and is the admin I see all the time, everywhere I go. She's also I hear a really good friend and seems like someone I would love to RP with but she might get frustrated with a newbie like me. QueenChrysalis747 is someone I've roleplayed with for a long time. He does a really good job as Chrysalis or Liesha in our latest RP. I love the character and he's not bad at Roleplaying either. All through out our time he taught me about redemption of characters, something I may decide to use in my next RP. If I remember correctly he also took part in my first RP Hearts and hooves day. Quillhart was a user who I don't know the fate of. He also took part in Hearts and hooves day but I don't know if he is still on Canterlot anymore. I haven't heard from him in a while but he did get me to start on my youtube channel and I will never regret it. Lovinity is someone who is supposed to be lower on the list but I put her up here since I also don't know her fate. She may be somehwhere else but I have not seen her in a while. She made Hearts and hooves day and if it wasn't for that RP I may not have been on Canterlot for as long as I have been. Saronyx is a newcomer to my group of thanks that I wasn't sure would make it but his portrayal of Shimmer and Velocity were simply outstanding, and according to the legacy timeline, Time Spinner is engaged to Shimmer. He did a very good job with these characters and I think I can call him a friend out of this group of misfits we are! I couldn't forget my friend Frosty, the artist of my Profile pic and a great person I have known. Whether she's going through hard times or not she is an amazing friend and I enjoy RPing with her, she's also the voice actor for Swift Blitz! ShadowBolt is another friend of mine who does a really good job RPing and voice acting. While being the voice of Deity he is also a good friend of mine and has an amazing accent. He is someone who helped me a lot with Destiny, which still has not been released...I need to find more voice actors... |||D3LTA||| is one more that has done a lot. Whether he's RPing as the artist Silver Star or as the photographer of the wonderbolts, Angelsnapp, he does a really good of it. He's someone who has done a lot and has been their since the beginning. FrostFauna is another one who did a really good job of all the cutie marks in the heroes of the legacy bar below, except Time's. He is a good friend of mine and the only other one besides Frosty to give me a cutie mark. Actually he gave me 3 of them! He's a great artist of Cutie Marks. Now the last one wasn't on the randomizer, I decided to save him for the end because I really do think he's a good friend, probably the best friend I've had here on Canterlot. His name is Daboom444. While also being their form the beginning of Hearts and hooves day he also is a sweet roleplayer and was the first person to tell me that I was doing this whole Roleplaying thing right. He's made the academy series which tugged the Legacy storyline right along and caused a lot of good things to happen. He's a great RolePlayer and is one of the best people I've met here, though your all great. These are the people I have to thank but I'm not done yet. You, yes you reading this I also have to thank. If you weren't reading this then I don;t know if any of this would happen. It's because people see and enjoy my work that cause me to write these things and it's because of you guys that I can do this. Thank you. Sincerely, Not Time Spinner but close Enough, NeoExlucky

Dang it QuickLime, you made me tear up.

Yay, I'm awesome! Your comment made my day.

[colour=#000000]He looked down.[/colour][colour=#ff0000][she thinks she can save me..."] [/colour][colour=#000000]He thought to both Spitfire and Time Spinner.[/colour]

[colour=#ff0000]"I made this decision Liesha. I made the choice of evil, I took everything I had and gave it up. Maybe theirs a happy end for spirits and changelings, but there is no happy end for Demons." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity sighed as he looked to the all grown up Mare but he still saw as a little filly.[/colour]

*Singing* Yay! I'm not alone in the reviewing community on Canterlot!

(Sorry for not responding today guys. I went to my county's fair and forgot my phone. ) Deity shook his head. Did he look sad? [colour=#ff0000][i will hear from her? It's already been proven that Liesha could take her down in her weak form. If she tries, Time is finished. I take his body and my power is complete! But is that what I want? [/colour][colour=#ff0000]She's right. When I chose Evil anything good is gone. She doesn't understand what its like to be all alone...to not taste food anymore, to not be able to feel cool breeze on a hot day, to...to not ever be able to feel love.][/colour] [colour=#000000]Time approached Deity. [/colour][colour=#696969]"What the hay was that? You aren't allowed to do that to Celestia! Imagine what would happen if she got out of control, if a nightmare moon version of her exists, we're done for!"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity didn't reply.[/colour]

Deity stared Celestia in the eyes. After she had finished her tirade, he laughed a bit. [colour=#ff0000]"You see? Your not so much different then a demon!" [/colour][colour=#000000]He turned around and moved towards Spitfire. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][You can tell that stallion he doesn't have to do that. I don't know for sure if I die when you die and frankly I don't want to risk it.] [/colour][colour=#000000]He laughed again. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"I won't kill you Celestia, the legacy mentions 13 lights and you, no matter how frustrating that is, may be one of them. Though the past-" [/colour] [colour=#696969]"Deity!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said as he looked over to the being in his argument with Celestia, causing Deity to sigh a bit. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Fine, you've made your point, Time Spinner!"[/colour] [colour=#FF0000][He doesn't know we're connected, yet? Does he?][/colour]

You have a point there, I never thought of it that way...

Deity was taken aback for a second then sent another thought. [colour=#ff0000][Good, he'll know why he's scared. That's just what I want...][/colour] Deity looked to Celestia and with the most disrespectful, evil, and disgusted look ever. [colour=#ff0000]"Is the princess upset about her Choice? Boo Hoo, cry me a river! This Shield of yours has one flaw that I know of and their is one other thing. If I go out, so does Carmus, Spitfire, Time Spinner, and Shimmer. My life is full darkness, whether you exorcise me, harmonize me, or even banish me to the moon. I won't survive. Even if you try to disconnect me, Time and Spitfire's bodies are too weak to live without me. I support Time and Spitfire, who are linked with Carmus and Shimmer. You want to kill me? I have nothing to live for. The real question Celestia is if your willing to let history repeat. Are you willing to kill innocent ponies for your gain? It's always been a skill of yours to do things like this." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity looked Celestia straight into her eyes.[/colour]

(Is okay.) [colour=#FF0000]"Crazier things have happened, Your majesty." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity said. He also said Your majesty like it was a disease. He turned back to Spitfire. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][Yes. I can hear everything you do. Whether your crazy or not, well I can't answer that. Now comes the most delicious part of my job.] [/colour][colour=#000000]He moved towards Spitfire and grabbed her face with his hooves. His eyes staring straight into hers and sending wave after wave of terror. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][At any moment you slip up, I can take over. If you get too angry, I will take over and control you. If you get to sad, I will control you. If your emotions ever step out of line, I step up and this isn't something you can fight. It took Time Spinner 6 years to develop enough control to stop me, your going to have so many problems.] [/colour][colour=#000000]He stopped as he sensed a hollowness in her head that felt like it was connecting to somepony else. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][You learned to project my thoughts to that Stallion, didn't you?][/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity turned to Celestia. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Oh there's a cure but your not going to like it."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time Spinner drew two circles in the dirt. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Time has two sides, like a day has two sides. In the day everything is so much better. Ponies are happier, you can see, and foals can run around and play. Time has an AM side like that. Where the manipulators control much better and stand up for the right thing. Then there's a night. Where everything is darker, foals are scared, and anything can happen. Time also has a PM side like that. Where the manipulator is evil, and blood thirsty. Time controls the manipulator, once their chosen if they don't have both sides...Time gives them one. Mine was the fallen Prince now known as Deity. He normally takes control whenever my negative emotions get out of control. Now I can hold him back, as long as I don't wear a Pocket Watch." [/colour][colour=#000000]He wipes the dirt circles and draws another figure. One that looks like Nghtmare moon. Next to it is Luna and on the right side is the nightmare forces. He points to Luna. [/colour][colour=#696969]"It's like this. I'm Time Spinner." [/colour][colour=#000000]He points to the Nightmare Forces. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Then there's Fierce Depart." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time then points to Nightmare Moon. [/colour][colour=#696969]"When we're combined we are one, deadly force, with my abilities, and his restrictions or lack there of, we are Deity. However since Fierce became a Demon in exchange for full power he became Deity, all he was missing was somepony with power. Like my Time magic or Spitfire's speed and Strength."[/colour]

While I agree with you in the fact that High school crushes do exist and I am glad that they didn't disregard this. I was just upset about how they portrayed love. It's not a 'as soon as I see them I'm in love with them' kind of thing in High school, things take time. Spoiler Alert! To be fair though I do love that they foreshadow him as the only non crystal pony guard.

Forgot about that. Thanks QuickLime!

Warning: May contain Spoilers. You have been Warned! Well last night me and my girlfriend went to go see Equestria Girls. (Her idea, not a brony. This is how much she loves me!) What did We think well I'll tell you in our review of Equestria Girls! The story's like this: The Mane 6 + Spike go to the Crystal empire for I think a Princess Summit but it's never actually addressed. While staying there Sunset Shimmer steals Twilight's Crown and goes to Earth...or is it Equestria 2.0, Equestrarth? I don't know. Anyway Twilight has to go after her, get her crown back, and do it all in under three days OR THE MOON WILL FALL! and by that I mean the portal to Equestria will fall. The art style of the show was pretty good. It reminded me of Adventure Time, Regular Show, and Littlest Pet Shop. While this is good and all I prefer the normal art style. It's not bad but could have been done a bit better. The animation was really good. Better than most of what we've seen in the show. The swirls, and clicks, and dust, and explosions, and all the other stuff was animated amazingly and done very well. I loved every bit of it. The characters were okay. I noticed that some of the things that had to be changed since they were humans and I'm okay with that but sometimes I think it could have been done better. Mainly Pinkie Pie but that's about it. Don't get me started on 'Brad', I totally hate that Guy! Look I love shipping characters together and all (Ship it like FedEx.) but Brad is ridiculous. They pull the 'love at first sight' card which isn't supposed to happen. He literally appears in two scenes then asks Twilight to the Dance. They don't even speak to each other that long. How does that work? The background characters made me squee like a fanboy everytime I saw them. Vinyal Scratch appeared a lot as well as the CMC but Octavia was missing, as was Derpy and Doctor Whooves. Their are two scenes I want to talk about here though. There is one scene were Sunset says "like the last girl who thought she was better then me." Which make me automatically think Trixie. Then I hoped Trixie would show up. She did and I died. Twilight's trying to get something out of a vending Machine and Trixie shows up and says. "The great and Powerful Trixie will now get a snack!" Then she puts a coin in the vending machine and does just that. I died laughing. The other scene is of pictures of Sunset Shimmer which I swear are references to villains before. The first one is just her smiling and acting innocent which reminded me of Discord in Keep calm and Flutter on. The second one is an evil smile which reminded me of Queen Chrysalis disguised as Cadence and the last one is her laughing manically which was king Sombra. I love this. There's even a reference to Nightmare moon were Twilight is talking to vice Principal Luna with the windows shut and it's really dark. She's acting like a villian and as soon 'brad' walks in the lights go on and Luna is a good guy again! I can't tell if it really is a reference but I'm going to say they tried. The music was okay here. I mean they were pretty catchy but I think Magical Mystery Cure did a better job at this. I don't really remember any of the songs. The story was easy to follow and was filled with High school Drama. Ironically as a High school student I could't relate to most of this. I could to the introduction of each group but nothing else like that happens at my school. It was pretty bad at doing this and was quite sad. The Voice acting was amazing and I really loved all the voices, especially Rebecca Shoichet who did a magnificent job as Sunset Shimmer. Dialogue was really good here but there were a few lines that made me remember this is a show for little Girls. Still Good Job! Let me just get this out of the way: BRAD IS THE WORST PONY/HUMAN EVER! I know his real name is Flash Sentry but I hate it! They make this character unlike Twilight a lot but then they somehow start dating? How does that work? Now Equestria Girls isn't a bad Movie, I've seen far worse and after you get past Brad it's really good to see all the references (Transformers!) and just have a good time. You may even meet a few more Bronies in your community. I do know that there was this one guy at the end of the movie who yelled "Rainbow Dash is best pony!" and then Someone else goes "No it's Applejack." Then "Vinyl Scratch is best!" Then I go "That's a weird way to say Twilight Sparkle!" then we all laughed and it was a good time. As much as I could try I can't hate this movie. It's MLP and it was done very well. Almost every factor that came out of this movie was good and I'm considering Buying this movie. A quote that My girlfriend says all the time is "Innovation Requires Risk." and I think that it did a good job at being innovative. I give this movie a B-. Well done but could be better. Work on the music a bit more, and make Brad better done and it works. It also get the Neo Seal of Awesomeness! This has been Neo Reviews, Thanks for Reading.

Deity scoffed. [colour=#ff0000]"Yes, one can just ignore the presence of a Demon on a pony, so easily." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked to Spitfire. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][Hello Spitfire. My name is...Deity. Before you go thinking I'm just a figment of your imagination, both Time Spinner and Celestia as you know can see me as well. I'm a demon, a demon of yours now.] [/colour][colour=#000000]A sly smile spreads across his face. [/colour][colour=#ff0000][i can hear everything you think, hear or speak, I can see everything you see, and too a certain degree, feel everything you feel. I came from the spell Time used. He needed to link you to two opposites, you little boyfriend was love and I was hatred. And no, you can't just make me go away it doesn't work like that. If all goes according to plan you won't have to deal with me that much anymore but until then...we're going to get along just fine.] [/colour][colour=#000000]The thought of Time being able to speak to her this way went through his mind but was proven false quickly as Time has no connection to Spitfire, just Deity, and a weak one at that.[/colour]

(Mind talk means Spitfire can talk to Deity!) Deity moved towards Spitfire, and Carmus. [colour=#ff0000]"So, your my new Subject now...Interesting. It's been a while since I flew last." [/colour][colour=#000000]He looked towards Celestia. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"I certainly miss my former abilities, Celestia."[/colour] Time looked to Shimmer. [colour=#696969]"You seemed to be confused about the whole event before. Do...you need me to explain?"[/colour]

Deity stared off at the mare he was saw as a foal. He foalsitted her with Luna and now Liesha was like a little sister to him. He sighed heavily [colour=#ff0000]"I'm going somewhere. Don't ask about it." [/colour][colour=#000000]He told him as he continued to walk forward and moved towards a new pony to talk too, Princess Celestia.[/colour] [colour=#000000](Needs to start after Spitfire and Carmus start their talk with her...)[/colour]

Time nodded to her. [colour=#696969]"I'm fine now." [/colour][colour=#000000]He stepped next to her and leaned his head a bit. She knew Deity scared her, or at least did something to her. If they were connected who knows what she felt when Deity took over. Time couldn't imagine seeing the one you love change into a monster. What would he do if he saw her change into something evil? Probably not react well.[/colour]

[colour=#696969]"He was...an old friend, a good guy who made bad decisions." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said. [/colour][colour=#696969]"I don't even know for sure who he really is, I call him Deity. Maybe you'll remember who he is one day."[/colour]

[colour=#ff0000]"Hmmm..." [/colour]Thoughts of Luna and Fierce playing with Liesha flashed as he took a deep breath and slowly Time's body began to return to normal. His pupil's returned and his cutie mark and coat returned to their normal state as Time looked over to Shimmer. [colour=#696969]"Are you alright, Candy Cake?"[/colour]

[colour=#ff0000]"You fool I'm..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity blinked, his whole voice became a bit softer, for deity, and his posture changed a bit. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"It's me Liesha, I'm Fierce Depart, remember?"[/colour]

[colour=#000000]Deity[/colour][colour=#000000] looked away, a small wet spot appeared on the ground below him, was Deity Crying. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"You sound just like...no, nopony ever wants to ruin things but they do. You ruined me, Jamora to Time, Nightmare forces to Luna, everything is just a false promise." [/colour][colour=#000000]His ears had perked as he somehow overheard a conversation over the spell of Time's. A connection that connects every pony togehter...as long as the two ho...Carmus was a host but who opposed him? It was deity himself.[/colour] [colour=#000000](Time's mind.)[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"WHAT DID YOU DO!?!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity slammed Time's 'body' into the wall.[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I did what I had to do."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"YOU'VE CONNECTED ME TO A MORTAL OF NO POWER! A PEGASUS OF ALL THINGS!"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I needed the life essence of a mortal, Carmus, and the life essence of a somepony with a strong willpower...I needed hatred."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity threw Time to the other side of the mind-room. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"YOU MADE ME HAVE DEATH!"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Carmus took that. Since Liesha gave me the magic to do it, she didn't get anything and since I pulled the spell off I lost a lot of energy. Carmus took physical illness, injuries, and Death itself. You...took everything else."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity approached the still lying down body and snarled. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"What can she do?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"When your not hosting me she can hear, see, and touch you, like Celestia and I interact with you normally. Like you she's immune to some basic magic and...she...hasaccesstoyourwholebeing."[/colour] [colour=#FF0000]"What does that mean?[/colour]" [colour=#696969]"Well in the future she may feel some type of connection to a pony she doesn't know, she may have your memories, she's...well I don't really know all of the hits we took."[/colour] [colour=#ff0000]"WE TOOK?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Well you took..."[/colour] [colour=#000000]EDIT: (Forgot something!)[/colour] [colour=#000000](Real world.) [/colour] [colour=#000000]Deity looked over to the familiar Alicorn who was asleep. His horn glowed red for a second as if asking fr permission. It shook the Alicorn. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"Wake up Liesha!" [/colour][colour=#000000]Deity called.[/colour]