NeoExlucky

(Trying to find a place for Time and Shimmer...)

[colour=#000000]Time smiles back at and offers a hoof. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Let's go, Darling." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time could use a party right now. He was very excited after his proposal.[/colour]

(Never gonna give you up, Never gonna let you down!)

[colour=#696969]"Heh, it was only a matter of time before Unicorns figured out how to fly." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said and humorously levitated himself up a few inches before he dropped.[/colour]

[colour=#000000](I think I'm gonna do one more RP and then end the Legacy storyline. Though I left a lot of lose ends. I mean The pocket watch is still gone and Time's not even freaked out about it yet.)[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time thought about what Carmus said. [/colour][colour=#696969]"I wonder what my suit's ability is?" [/colour][colour=#000000]He thought. He looked around at the ponies around him. He realized something though. Angel, Himself, and chry-...I mean leisha, were the only ponies left that were there from the very beginning, with the exception of Deity. The memorial had a picture of the heroes on it, on there was Flash and Gadget. He remembered some things he had done before he got here.[/colour] [colour=#000000](Flashback again!)[/colour] Time approached a grave in the courtyard, it was a small grey tombstone and when he got there he sat down. [colour=#696969]"Hey there Gadget. Things are really starting to look up for us. Swift Blitz is getting shipped to Trottingham here soon and I'm going to propose to Shimmer...I haven't touched your since you left but Swift keeps wanting to change it. I know you'd want the same thing but it just doesn't feel right to not have your room be there. I still haven't found my pocket watch but maybe it's for the best that I don't. After all I have a life here now. The store is doing fine and I do wonder about some of the other ponies I have met along my travels. Some pony named Echo Forte keeps ringing a bell. I...don't know why but it sounds familiar."[/colour] [colour=#000000]He sighed and got up. He had a sad look on his face but it quickly turned into a happy one when he looked at the rose in his hoof.[/colour] [colour=#000000](Flashback end!)[/colour] [colour=#000000](Also now it's time for Hipster Neo, "I got engaged before it was cool." XD)[/colour]

A sly smile spreads across his face. [colour=#696969]"Oh, well we can't ruin his fun." [/colour][colour=#000000]He says humorously. He kisses Shimmer again and turns towards the statue, never losing his smile.[/colour]

[colour=#696969]"Well...the future is unpredictable. We both know that our loved ones can be taken away quickly. We've been dating for a while and...well, I've figured something out. Life is short, we can never tell what will ever happen, we never know but I do know one thing Shimmer. I want to spend it with you...*Hands her the rose, the bottom of the rose glimmers and shines. On it there is a golden Band.* Will you marry me?" [/colour][colour=#000000]His heart thumps as he awaits her answer. This was it, one of the biggest and most important events of his entire life. The proposal to Shimmer. This would greatly shape his future. He knew this was what he wanted, he felt better with her. He felt actual happiness, something he hadn't felt since he was a child.[/colour]

Time walked next to his marefriend, Shimmer. He had been dating her for a fairly long time and he had something that needed to be taken care of. He gave her a very caring smile as they approached the statue, he took a deep breath as he turned to her. [colour=#696969]"Shimmer, I need to ask you something..."[/colour] [colour=#000000](Flashback!)[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time stood in a blue room, with a long workbench, a wonderbolts poster, and tons of tools on the light blue bed that was messily made. Swift Blitz walked by, then went back and entered the room. [/colour][colour=#800080]"Time...you know, maybe we could change this room into something else." [/colour] [colour=#000000]Time shook his head as he exited. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Gadget will always have a room in this house." [/colour][colour=#000000]He went to an end table, where a rose was sitting.[/colour] [colour=#800080]"You have a date with Shimmer?" [/colour] [colour=#696969]"Not just a date, the date."[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Oh, your gonna ask her the question?"[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Yep!"[/colour] [colour=#800080]"You know she might be a bit scared after you tell her the story."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I think she'll understand...Where are you being shipped to?"[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Not far, just trottingham."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"The raptors got you all figured out?"[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Well after I broke the sound barrier they were glad to take me places."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"I can't believe it's already been three months since you joined."[/colour] [colour=#800080]"Shimmer helped, you know."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time gives a happy smile, one he hasn't had since he was a foal. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Yeah...I know."[/colour] [colour=#000000](Flashback ends!)[/colour]

Sorry QuickLime...

(I have an idea, what about a date? At least for Shimmer and Time. The others, I've got nothing, including Swift, Lol.)

Oh my god, it been like 15 years since I've done a review. I apologize for that, I had finals for a bit then I was working over in the Sonic Fanon Wiki/RP site, then ended up in the powerpuff girls universe where they did nothing but beat me up and call me mojo or something...anyways, let's start the review! It's hard to remember that we didn't get introduced to the CMC until this late. This is a really good episode that I can actually enjoy from the CMC. It has some good humor, good relation to Applebloom, CUPCAKES, and Peppermint Twist. The characters act the way I think they should and do for a while. Though the adults laughing with the kids during the party because they were blank flanks seems a bit cruel and un-normal. The song is one of my favorites, but don't try making cupcakes with that recipe, you'll end up with Baked bads... The art was nice, nothing too out of the ordinary but the colour scheme for the ponies here were interesting. The story should also be marked as important as this is the second Time cutie marks are mentioned and are actually explained in this episode, something we needed for the Magical Mystery Cure. The characters of Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are jerks that do give off a bully feel that I like. This episode is a really good one and you can enjoy the CMC here for the first time. This episode gets a B in my grade book. Good story and concept, the execution was nice but it doesn't stand out from the crowd. Well now I have to write a review for Fall Weather friends, so I'll be back tomorrow. This has been Neo Reviews. Thanks for Reading.

On the one hoof my parents are Deaaaaddd...on the other hoof it's been like 2000 years since I was a foal...I think I found an Excuse! - A Time Traveling Pony who prefers not to say his name. (AKA NeoExlucky since Time is too awesome to hide behind a computer screen!) In all seriousness though if we were talking all species then I would say it's possible for you to be bullied, if you were a zebra living in a pony Town. I consider what happened in bridle gossip to be a form of Bullying. Then again maybe this is just for Ponies. I don't know, I'm gonna go eat cake!

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[colour=#696969]"Yeah...let's get going." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said as he blushed from Shimmer's hug. So flashbomb had a crush on her...in a way that makes sense. Flashbomb was close to Shimmer and he did revive her. If only Time had known...maybe he wouldn't be in this relationship, but would he have wanted to not be here? Maybe if the circumstances were different...[/colour] [colour=#000000](I'm okay with time change. I have an idea for the last post of Time.)[/colour]

Time was taken aback and blushed. [colour=#696969]"Hey...I don't get jeal...okay I probably would." [/colour][colour=#000000]He laughed a bit. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Hey Flashbomb...you said you remembered Hearts and hooves day...do you think..." [/colour][colour=#000000]His mind rushed with Echo, Pocket Watch,[/colour] [colour=#000000]infected Flash, Deity, and the lovestrucks. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Never mind." [/colour][colour=#000000]He gave a sloppy salute to him and went back to Shimmer, he kissed her on the head then turned to the ghosts, partially wishing Gadget was here.[/colour]

Time took Gadget's banner which Swift looked over with him. They stayed with Carmus, Spitfire, and Shimmer. The sight of Carmus kissing Spitfire made Swift Blitz sigh a bit. She looked to Time who, while levitating the banner nearby, was looking at Shimmer. Swift Blitz sighed again, then looked to the other ponies.

(Just for the record I forgot to say what rank Gadget was, my bad. He's a first lieutenant, about to become a lieutenant commander.) (EDIT: Was about to become a lieutenant commander.)

Time bowed his head as the proceedings happened. He didn't cry, he had done enough of that. On his right was Shimmer, and on his left was swift blitz. Over the past few days Time and Shimmer had gotten closer. He was unsure if the bonding magic would ever wear off, but he hoped it never did. Swift was still crying a bit. The household was much quieter now then, it was before. Time and Swift stayed there for a few hours but not once did they speak. Time couldn't handle the quiet and spent as much time with Shimmer and Carmus, but mostly Shimmer. Time wore his suit, it was refashioned into a funeral suit after it was nearly destroyed at hearts and hooves day. Swift wore a black gown that had a wrench in the pocket, one of Gadget's charms. The two stay very quiet. Time had noticed that carmus had a wing around Spitfire, and while Time couldn't do that, he wrapped his hoof around Shimmers.

[colour=#696969]"Maybe it was destined this way, though I do not know a cruel mistress who would have put us through...this." [/colour][colour=#000000]He said still looking in shimmer's eyes.[/colour]

Swift woke up next to the corpse of Gadeget. She knew what had happened almost instantly. She shook his body, but it felt hollow and cold. She tried again, but got the same emptiness. She cried for as she looked to the dead body of her brother...she lost those close to her again. ---------------- Time looked up at the Steel Mare. [colour=#696969]"Hey your awake." [/colour][colour=#000000]He got up and saw where she was looking. [/colour][colour=#696969]"We both lost our brothers today...do you think the chaos will ever end?" [/colour][colour=#000000]As if answering the question[/colour] Deity spoke up. [colour=#ff0000]"There is no such thing as harmony." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time looked to Diety for a short while then back to Shimmer. If he didn't say it now, there might not be a next time. [/colour][colour=#696969]"Even if it doesn't, I'll always, be here for you...there's....*Inhales a deep breath.* theres always room for love in chaos, right?"[/colour]

Frosty that is the most truthful thing I have ever read. -Time Spinner, Sundial, Gadget, Pocket, Swift, Echo, Diamond, and Neo

(Dang it Daboom...Now I'm depressed. Also I want Time to reflect on the entire Academy/HAHD saga, so let's say he passed out before Flash said goodbye.) Time's unconscious mind raced as he remembered everything that happened. He lived in the Discordian era, and grew up with a filly named Aqua. They grew up together in an orphanage and supported each other. Time got his cutie mark by defending Aqua from a Dragon. He somehow managed to pull off a Time Stop and stop all of Time for 15 seconds, after that he could only do it for 2 seconds. As they grew up they joined the royal sister's rebellion. Time, her, and another group of ponies went on an expedition to some ancient Ruins. He found a pocket watch there and it upgraded his Time Magic. He was able to stop it for 12 seconds now. When they went back Aqua developed Phymosis. The doctor's said she wouldn't make it and Time went out to find a cure. He met Jamora who sent him years to the future. For one year he lived in constant Depression due to Aqua's death. He found...Gadget? Was it Gadget or...Echo? In his dark room of a mind A red Pegasus with a Brown Mane and Tail appeared and started to speak to him.[colour=#008000] "You mean Echo. After a while of living in Ponyville. Hearts and Hooves day came up. I suggested that you [/colour][colour=#008000]find a mare. After a while of figuring out what happened you found Pocket Watch." [/colour][colour=#000000]A purple Mare in a Brown Newspaper boys hat continued. [/colour][colour=#800080]"The night started to fail as Discord had planted a chaos seed in the punch and got everypony sick, you included. You fought off several Lovestucks, including an infected Flashbomb, who in turn Fought of Deity. After Equestria was restored to normal you lost Echo and he was replaced with Gadget. You also lived in Canterlot from then on." [/colour][colour=#000000]A look alike of Time with no pupils and a red aura started to continued. [/colour][colour=#ff0000]"You imagined a sword and that sword was eventually extracted from your mind as you forgave yourself of your problems, so much that you and most of Equestria forgot what happened the night of Hearts and Hooves day. You allowed Gadget to go to the Wonderbolt academy but he was not noticed all that well." [/colour][colour=#000000]A Mare appeared with a strange resemblance of FlashBomb. [/colour][colour=#ff8c00]"Then,He was corrupted, he became a shadowbolt and was defeated. When he returned he started to have his visions. Lightning strikes twice. He thought that this meant I was alive and in a way I was. I watched over my child, and when I saw how much you cared for Shimmer, I infused you with as much Strange Energy I could. This is what caused you to have an overload of magic. Flash wanted you both to live, but I couldn't save Flash."[/colour] [colour=#000000]Finally a grey Pegasus appeared and spoke with a familiar voice. [/colour][colour=#0000cd]"Now, you need to move on. Don't worry about what you could have done, or what you should have done, focus on the future, take care of Swift and Shimmer."[/colour] [colour=#696969]"Gadget..." [/colour][colour=#000000]Time said in his mind.[/colour] [colour=#0000CD]"It's okay, I'll be with Lightning, and Lyria. Besides I have one last thing for you." [/colour][colour=#000000]A ball of energy came out of Time's chest and floated upwards. It sparked and shimmered and caused a large flash. Time was in Etheral Purple armor. This was his true potential, not an alicorn, not a being of evil, a Time Traveler. Gadget put a hoof on his shoulder. [/colour][colour=#000000]"[/colour][colour=#008000]Now[/colour][colour=#000000] [/colour][colour=#800080]Time[/colour][colour=#000000] [/colour][colour=#ff0000]please[/colour][colour=#000000] [/colour][colour=#ff8c00]Wake[/colour][colour=#000000] [/colour][colour=#0000cd]up.[/colour][colour=#000000]"[/colour] [colour=#000000]Time woke up to still see his hoof touching Shimmer's but he couldn't find Flashbomb.[/colour]

Time extended his hoof to the grey mare. [colour=#696969]"It'll be okay." [/colour][colour=#000000]He mouthed but couldn't say. He was exhausted. That bonding Magic took a lot of the Stallion. Plus it played with his emotions. The magic only worked one way, so if he had feelings for her then the only matter would be if she had feelings for him. He grasped her hoof. His suit, as if on cue, started to show two Heartbeats...his and Shimmers. They were exactly the same. After his helmet came off he noticed that the corner featured a sticker, it said "Eillen AI P-1" He was unsure what this meant but now he looked straight at Shimmer, and returned the smile she was giving. He noticed he was crying a bit, maybe this was because of Aqua...but he still smiled. After the he heard another voice say to get started he knew they were okay and he slowly passed out. [/colour] [colour=#000000](Okay I have to put this: my ad choices are: Time for Sleep, Numbness in Legs, arm pain symptoms, and Funeral Homes...well that escalated Quickly.)[/colour]

I think it is.