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    Neo Reviews: Snowdrop

    By NeoExlucky,

    Let's begin the marathon of hatred, 4 pieces of fan content , 4 reviews, 1 Neo...joy...
    I know I said we'd be doing Button mash this week, but I really wanna hurry, due to the review I have planned after this, so with that in mind, let's tear this idea a new one, what's worse, this thing is personal...
    Snowdrop is absolutely awful. It's about an terrible filly, with a stereotypical archtype, and is just...bad. Let's start with the easy part, the good. The animation isn't too shabby here, and the voice acting is also quite nice. If I have to say something good about this, I'll give it to these two things. Now the animation is the best part of the fan-content, and the voice acting is...mostly good. Most of the children aren't all that good, but some of the other characters are pretty good.
    Now then, let's talk about the bad part of this episode, everything else. Everything is just...let me try and make some sense of it.
    The storyline, really ties into the character of Snowdrop who has such a stereotypical archtype that isn't even played out well. Normally when a character has an archtype, it can be played out well, but Snowdrop's isn't. Snowdrop has what some of my friends call, "The Disabled" archtype, which comes from her blindness, but she's mary-sue, so she's even more ridiculous. Let's check things off.

    Has a disability that should keep her from doing things, but doesn't seem to do anything?
    Said disability causes people to look down on her?
    Gives something to a canon character and becomes "Like a sister" to them?
    Never accepts help, even though her character shows no signs of being headstrong?
    Somehow creates something that really doesn't need to have a backstory?

    This character just makes no sense. She has all these traits that she shouldn't have in her character. There was a fanfic I read once, that I won't say the name of because it was VERY nsfw. The character was called Jenna, and she was in a zelda fanfic. Jenna was a normal merchant, best friend of Princess Zelda, considered a daughter to the king of hyrule, and was married to Link. So a mary-sue. She shares many qualities with Snowdrop, and she is the reason I can look at this kind of character a bit more in depth. Two friends of mine, they go by ObsidianDragon, and Quill (Not Quillhart) read this with me, and if they ever read this, I want to seriously thank them for showing me the fic.
    Back on topic, the story made no sense at all, and I personally think that the reason why people like this, is because of the people behind. If you were to make this a fanfic, by someone who had just found the fandom, the story would have been tore apart and never would have gotten this popular. I absolutely HATE Snowdrop! So you know what? With all this in mind, this piece of fan content gets my reviewer rating of: 3/10, it's just horrible.
    Well now that that's out of the way, I have a lot more to work on. This weekend I wanna tackle something that has eluded my gaze until now, Dusk's Dawn, I'm told it's bad. Yay... Well, I have to go force myself to watch something. So Ladies and Gentlemen, have a good evening, stay safe, and take care.
  2. NeoExlucky
    I want to look at another character creator that I find does a pretty good job of making pony OC's. Legends of Equestria released their character creator and I figured I'll review it. Anywho let's get to the review.
    The good:
    Ponies are in 3D. I can't tell you how long I've awaited this.
    The mane styles, cutie marks, and tails all look pretty good, oh and that's another thing.
    There are a huge amount of cutie marks in this creator. While many of my characters don't have their cutie marks in it, they are still going to add stuff, so that's good! I really like the cutie marks we have though, there's a scroll that I settled on in there that makes me think of reviews, so Time Spinner with a scroll cutie mark is me...I guess. There's other's on there that are cool too and actually if we used our cutie marks on our profiles, most of us could do it. There's a really big leaf, a compass rose, a peace sign, a quill, etc.
    Color's are easy to pick from since we get a giant color wheel and we can mess with the brightness of said color.
    It's free, so that's good!

    I'm happy to say that there are only two real problems I have with this creator so far, I'm sure they'll be fixed but I'm reviewing it now, so it's going to get those as bads.
    The bad:
    There's an ad right over the pony when you play it in normal mode. It's not there in full screen and you may be asking "Neo, if it can be fixed that easy, what's the problem?" My problem is that no matter what I do, I can't get a picture of the pony because that ad always shows up. I'm sure there's something I can to block the ad but I'm reviewing this without help from another program.
    Sometimes when I'm clicking on one of the arrows It takes me out of full screen mode. It gets annoying after a while of it happening but I tried it on my other computer and didn't get it at all so maybe it's just this one. I don't know.

    Anyways I really like this creator. If I could just get a pic of it, it would be my profile. I'm super excited about Legends of Equestria and I can't wait to see what else they are going to have in store for us. With all of this in mind guys, this get's my reviewer rating of 8.5/10!
  3. NeoExlucky
    This...this was amazing. I can't tell you how much I love turnabout storm. Unlike most fan-made content I've seen, Turnabout storm just got better and better. I was puzzled at the start, and tried to figure everything out all the way through to the end. I laughed, and I cried. Even now I'm crying as I write this review out to you guys. You know I've gone through some pretty bad times recently, with stuff IRL, things on the Wiki I frequent, and few other things I'd like to keep private, I haven't had something make me feel this better in a long time. Turnabout Storm is, out all of my two years of going through this fandom, my favorite fan project of all time. I think I have good understanding of fan made projects now, and it's thanks to this that I have that. I think it's no surprise that I give this my one and only 10/10 on this quest to review things. However I want to open a bit more, and after all my job as a reviewer is to discuss my opinions on the subject at hand, isn't it? So let's delve deeper into this master piece.
    Most cross-overs I've seen aren't that good. No matter what fandoms are crossed, how they're written, or even who worked on them, I've seen some pretty bad stuff. Sometimes I think that some things could cross with MLP easily but never in all my life did I think that phoenix wright could work like this. I was wrong. The story was enchanting, it drew my in and I couldn't stop watching. I began when part two had been out for quite some time and waited till just not when I finished part five. The episodes never lost their quality and I think they just increased as they moved through the episodes. You can tell that a lot of work and dedication was put into this series. From the voice acting, to the story telling, to the writing. I wouldn't change a thing. No the characters don't sound like their TV counterparts but is that really something we need? The music was put in the right places, the tone was set very clearly and affected me as I watched it. Including cheering loudly when Phoenix said objection. Everything was done right and I love how this turned out.
    The artwork did change while they went through the series. At first it was all official art but they also used their own drawings of Phoenix and the judge later down the road, they also did they own art for different scenes in the last two parts. One thing I want to talk about is the cliche here. The story of Trixie's redemption has been the plot of many fanfics and other fan projects. Not only her but another character's redemption story is also brought up in this series and is a classic story for fanfics I've read. Normally I don't ever think of these as good but this series, I can't express how they managed to do these things right. The stories that are used here may be cliche and over-used, but this series somehow makes it not all it appears. There is more to it than that. The characters of Trixie and the other one do have feelings, what is it like for them to go through this? Yes we see how the good guys see it but maybe Trixie isn't a bad guy. Maybe she's just gone through some rough times. This series really made me feel for the characters, for Twilight, for Phoenix, for Trixie, for Rainbow, almost every character made me feel something for them. Even characters with an affinity for hands.
    I don't know how much more I can tell without sounding like a prancing fan boy. In fact this review probably already makes me seem like that right now, but you know what? This series deserves these praises. The entire thing blew my mind. The suspense, the awe, the sadness, the humor, all of it was like it was coming out of a real Phoenix Wright game, and maybe that's why I like it so much. Like I said at the begging, this series gets my rating of a 10/10.
    I highly recommend the project to any one here. If your a fan of Phoenix Wright, you'll love this. If not, you might still love it. I'm going to post the link to the videos down below but do be cautious. It's a 7+ hour series. I'm also going to mark it as NSFW since the series does have some evidence that is hinted at to be NSFW but they never show you anything except a black picture. I imagine that it's Rainbow Dash biting her hooves but I don't know for sure.

    Well then, this is NeoExlucky, Reviewer of ponies, signing off. Have a great evening, everypony.
  4. NeoExlucky

    OC origins - Gadget

    By NeoExlucky,

    Hello one and all! Neo here with my first entry in explaining OC's and the like. What with Lux being (I think) done with her characters right now, I've decided to bring my third favorite character on the list. (Behind Time Spinner and Aselia.) So what exactly was the inspiration for Gadget you might ask? Well...my little brother. Time Spinner was my ponysona, so it would make sense that when my little got his ponysona, he would be related to mine. Of course that destroys the whole backstory of Time Spinner but I did find a way around that with the introduction of something called a time loop, but we'll talk about that when we get to Time.
    Now if you've been keeping track of all of my real OC's we have eleven, soon to be twelve, and all of them except Time Spinner will show up, re-designed, in Canterlot Chronicles. I'm going to hold off on Time for a while, a LONG while. Anywho Gadget will be the next to get an app there, once I decide his purpose for it and once I get to work with my little brother. Gadget's personality has remained reletivly the same, no matter where he goes. He's always somewhat of an idiot and has been an inventor of sorts, even though he's never showed this off in any role-play. Since I really have no idea how to go about this, Gadget will be done in the style that Lux has done. So inspirations:
    1. My little brother- The way Gadget acts is pretty much the way Gadget acts in RP. It makes sense that it would be this way. The same thing goes for the relationship that me and my brother have. He's a lot more of a socialite and I'm more introverted. I always end up going to some crazy place with him and I do have that "I hate you all" attitude that Time Spinner can have with most ponies. (Or will have when he get's re-designed.)
    2. Building- Gadget's talent is inventing, and around the time that I had invented Gadget, I was in love with building things, and the like. During the time of Gadget's creation, I had built a replica master sword, Mickey's keyblade, and a ceramic pedestal thing that I'm not quite sure where it went. Anyways I thought it would be a great idea to make a character who loved to build while I loved to build. However since I kind of...lost interest in that I have yet to show that attitude, but that will be shown of in canterlot chronicles.
    Other information:
    Gadget makes appearances in other timelines that I have created based on Roleplays, stories, and even songs. He is three roleplays short of beating Time Spinner for most roleplays. Gadget, like all of my characters, has a theme song which is Ciela's theme.

  5. NeoExlucky
    Hello there! Welcome to Open an OC, where I'm going to talk about how to make OC's and things that have to do with OC's. This episode we're going to talk about the types of OC's. Well cover what exactly each character means and what you really have to do with them later. Let's begin.
    The Logo OC

    Meet NeoExlucky, an OC from the fandom of reality. What is his purpose? To stand there and look pretty. That's it. Logo OC's don't really have a purpose, their just a character you create to represent something. The Rules to a Logo OC are that they just have to exist and be drawn. You don't even have to name them or do anything else with them after that. Best (or worse) of it all is that their looks don't even really matter. For example another Logo character is Philsterman10's OC.

    Why does his look not matter? Well he's an Alicorn OC, but no one cares. That's really what a Logo OC does. They stand there, look pretty, and do nothing else. Now they don't always have to be just that, for example the third type of OC could also be a logo Character.
    Mind Character

    A mind character is a character you create with your own cannon and with whatever you want. They could if you wanted, be used in roleplay but the only thing stopping them is the cannon and you. You need to know everything about a mind character from what their favorite cereal is to their favorite voice actor. This is rider, My vocaloid OC. He's in love with Hatsune Miku, both his parents work at Nintendo, he's a 15 years Old, etc. Every character was at one point a mind character. Mind characters normally are just a few steps away from being our third type of character.
    Fan Character

    [colour=#000000]The best of all the characters, a fan character is a character you know everything about and have done something with, you made a Fanfiction with them, did a roleplay, whatever! You know everything about them and hopefully you haven't made a character everyone hates. This is a Fan character. Time Spinner is this example and he's great at what he does, he's also one of my logo's as a representation of me and was also once a mind character, but I don't like to talk about that. Time Spinner's been there since the beginning an I've never looked back. This is a character that everyone should have. Maybe even make up how each character knows each other and so on. I actually have a tie in for all of my characters and how they all tie in together but we'll talk about that at another time.[/colour]
  6. NeoExlucky
    Surprise! I'm actually doing this now! I'll be judging each game based around a few categories that your about to see. So with that let's get started!
    Story: You start the game with Professor oak telling you about the world of pokemon and after you name your character and rival (Who will later be known as red and blue.) you get to actually start. When you head downstairs from your bedroom your mum will tell you that professor oak is looking for you. After trying to walk in tall grass he will take you to the lab and you can pick your starter...unless you have yellow like I did then you get pikachu. Anyway that's when you start your journey of collecting all of the badges in the game and catching all 151 pokemon in existence. (Not anymore!)
    Overall the story is great. It's not all that large or diversing and because of this there are little room for plot holes. All of it makes sense and there are very subtle hints to something bad that happened before we get to play. I love all of it.
    Gameplay: Simple, yet addictive and fun. As anyone would tell you it's like rock paper scissors but with more types of weapons. They do this in such a way that I think that it should be really boring but it is most defiantly not. Excellently done. Though it should be noted that at this time if you have a psychic type, you ca pretty much destroy anything.
    Mechanics: Types are very interesting and adds a lot of diversity between pokemon. I love the items, badges, and casino in the game.
    Pokemon: The pokemon here feel very fresh and new. I feel like a lot of effort was put into each one.
    Secrets: Several secrets here. From the offical ones like mewtwo and mew to the non official ones like missingno and lvl 100 nidoking. Also if you have yellow you can teach pikachu surf and play the surfing pikachu game.
    Rival: Blue/green is am amazing trainer that you can't help but hate. He's very pompous and is a total jerk. I do feel sad for him at certain times like at the lavender city tower but then he goes back to jerk mode. Quite the character.
    Personal information: Pokemon yellow is one of the first games I remember playing. I have lots of memories with it and I love every second of it. Yellow will always have a very special place in my heart and in my controller. No it's not my favorite but it doesn't have to be. The game itself is quite interesting and there are tons of things you can do. If your in the mood for nostalgia then go play these games, that is if you can find a copy with a working battery.
    Overall the game tries it's hardest to be an RPG every gamer can enjoy and clearly it's work payed off. I give the game an A-, it's very good in a lot of ways but it does seem to lack a few things such as the americans getting mew without cheating. This has been Neo reviews, Thanks for reading.
    (Also most of this was for red,blue, and yellow. I live in america so I have never been able to play green.)
  7. NeoExlucky
    So...the reason I'm not doing my Review is because I need to make sure I'm not biased with it. That's it.
    Anyway so today I went and Auditioned for my show choir at my school and there a three things that make me wonder if it's good or not. Let me explain it below.
    1. He brought up how one of my teachers wrote that they liked me for a teacher evaluation however then he said I had a D in her class. (I don't have a D anymore but still. It's a problem.)
    2. He wrote for my ear accuracy test. (I have no idea what that means.) That I had a 3.5. This confuses me.
    3. Let me explain with a RP conversation. Green is me, Purple is him.
    [colour=#800080]"Sing ba ba ba ba." [/colour]
    [colour=#006400]"Okay, Ba ba ba- ba." [/colour][colour=#000000](Ba- is crescendo.)[/colour]
    [colour=#800080]"You added a bit of decoration to that."[/colour]
    [colour=#006400]"Is that a good thing?"[/colour]
    [colour=#800080]"No it is not."[/colour]
    [colour=#000000]So yeah, those may or may not have killed me. Either way I'll post what happened next week. Flutteryay.com[/colour]
  8. NeoExlucky
    Now I don't know if you guys know this or not, but I love mega man. I didn't actually start playing it until recently and I even asked you guys which ones I should play, until I said "You know what, play all the megamans!" So pretty much all in the classic series (Minus 8), plus megaman x, x2, and x3. I also love rping and I thought, "Hey, I already do Sonic, and ponies, and Zelda recently, why not try a mega man roleplay?" So I searched the interwebs only to find that the last post made in a mega man rp site was back in 2011. Now that just can't do, can it? So I kept looking and figured I should start a mega man rp wikia. Now I'd need help with a few things because I am in no way, shape, or form admin material. Anyways, I haven't started it yet because I wanted to ask something, how many of you would Roleplay in the mega man world?
  9. NeoExlucky

    Sundial

    By NeoExlucky,

    I said I wouldn't do it...
    I said I dislike Alicorn OC's...
    I said that I Time was a terrible Alicorn OC...
    I've done something Terrible.
    Okay so maybe it's not that bad but I did it. I made an Alicorn OC and I made her in a way that isn't too bad but is still kind of bad. She not only is the romantic interest to Gadget but is also Time Spinner's archrival. Due to this the Two HATE each other and for good reason.
    In Time's backstory he was promised by Luna that he would become a prince after Celestia and her took over. So in this way, He would become the Alicorn of Time control, However he was thrown to the future. (The day before the season 1 premiere to be exact.) Due to this anotehr pony would have to step up to hold Time together and cause all Time travelers to exist. Time traveling ponies are small in number though and in the legacy story, (My official Timeline of my OC's and holding the main story of MLP true as best as possible. I will release it soon.) In the Legacy story there is Time Spinner, Doctor Whooves, and Sundial. (That have been met.)
    Gadget can't ever remember his past and that's because Time took his memories with his time loop. However Gadget was romantically involved with Sundial and as a result she is looking for him. Now onto her. She became an Alicorn a few years after the diarchy began.
    Here is her as an application.
    Name: Sundial
    Age: Young Mare
    Species: Alicorn
    Cutie mark: A Sundial.
    Sundial got her cutie mark after discovering her ability to control Time.
    Backstory: After find out her gift, Sundial learned her powers should be used for good, and she often did just that. At one point in her life she was approached by Princess Celestia and was turned into an alicorn for her power to control time. She kept track of it and cared for it. Eventually she came into a battle before Nightmare moon took over Luna and was erased from history for 300 years. Afterwards she grew up along with Celestia teaching her what happened in her absence and discovering a few things about Luna and Celestia's past. As she grew older she met and Pegasus named Gadget and fell in love with him. Later in their life though something happend. Gadget disappeared from Time itself. Nopony but the alicorns and a soon met fellow Time traveler with a brown coat knew who he was at all. Now she hunts for him, trying to find a lover and wanting to destroy the pony who cause this to happen to her lover.
    and her looks:

    Anyways's Happy Friday!
  10. NeoExlucky
    Hey there Everybody, Neo here! Time Spinner's sick so I said I'd take over and boy is this one big! This is a thank you to everybody who helped me in my RolePlay life. This was done in a random order and the amount of people is large so if I miss you I'm so sorry! I know that as time goes on their might be more people to thank so if I miss you here, you'll probably be in the next one. So let's get started.
    QuickLime is someone who has helped me almost since the beginning. She helped me with my first App of Time Spinner in Crossovers and ever since I have been a fan. From creating characters to the blogs that she writes, she always does something that I never regret reading. She also inspired me to write this article and is someone I look up to in the community. We both share the fact that both our usernames have two Capital letters in them. She always loves to help others and is really good at it. It's something I would love to do in the community. Plus one of my favorite animals is a raven which she's the queen of.
    StarSwirl is next on the list. Starswirl helped with the creation of Time 2.0 and never once got frustrated. He loves science (Like I do.) and is someone who I know if I ever have a question about the community I can ask him. Star Swirl caught on to the Samurai Jack references that are in Time's Backstory that no one else brought up. He's really good at what he does and his avatar picture always makes me laugh.
    StarStorm also helped with Time 2.0 and is someone I have roleplayed with. Her characters or scamps as she calls them have always been very good and even provided a Love interest for my character: Pocket Watch, despite all the love triangles going on in the RP. It was also one of my favorites though Left Behind was never finished.
    Rosewind is someone that I'm sure has no idea who I am but I'm thanking anyways. She's always doing so much for us and is the admin I see all the time, everywhere I go. She's also I hear a really good friend and seems like someone I would love to RP with but she might get frustrated with a newbie like me.
    QueenChrysalis747 is someone I've roleplayed with for a long time. He does a really good job as Chrysalis or Liesha in our latest RP. I love the character and he's not bad at Roleplaying either. All through out our time he taught me about redemption of characters, something I may decide to use in my next RP. If I remember correctly he also took part in my first RP Hearts and hooves day.
    Quillhart was a user who I don't know the fate of. He also took part in Hearts and hooves day but I don't know if he is still on Canterlot anymore. I haven't heard from him in a while but he did get me to start on my youtube channel and I will never regret it.
    Lovinity is someone who is supposed to be lower on the list but I put her up here since I also don't know her fate. She may be somehwhere else but I have not seen her in a while. She made Hearts and hooves day and if it wasn't for that RP I may not have been on Canterlot for as long as I have been.
    Saronyx is a newcomer to my group of thanks that I wasn't sure would make it but his portrayal of Shimmer and Velocity were simply outstanding, and according to the legacy timeline, Time Spinner is engaged to Shimmer. He did a very good job with these characters and I think I can call him a friend out of this group of misfits we are!
    I couldn't forget my friend Frosty, the artist of my Profile pic and a great person I have known. Whether she's going through hard times or not she is an amazing friend and I enjoy RPing with her, she's also the voice actor for Swift Blitz!
    ShadowBolt is another friend of mine who does a really good job RPing and voice acting. While being the voice of Deity he is also a good friend of mine and has an amazing accent. He is someone who helped me a lot with Destiny, which still has not been released...I need to find more voice actors...
    |||D3LTA||| is one more that has done a lot. Whether he's RPing as the artist Silver Star or as the photographer of the wonderbolts, Angelsnapp, he does a really good of it. He's someone who has done a lot and has been their since the beginning.
    FrostFauna is another one who did a really good job of all the cutie marks in the heroes of the legacy bar below, except Time's. He is a good friend of mine and the only other one besides Frosty to give me a cutie mark. Actually he gave me 3 of them! He's a great artist of Cutie Marks.
    Now the last one wasn't on the randomizer, I decided to save him for the end because I really do think he's a good friend, probably the best friend I've had here on Canterlot. His name is Daboom444. While also being their form the beginning of Hearts and hooves day he also is a sweet roleplayer and was the first person to tell me that I was doing this whole Roleplaying thing right. He's made the academy series which tugged the Legacy storyline right along and caused a lot of good things to happen. He's a great RolePlayer and is one of the best people I've met here, though your all great.
    These are the people I have to thank but I'm not done yet. You, yes you reading this I also have to thank. If you weren't reading this then I don;t know if any of this would happen. It's because people see and enjoy my work that cause me to write these things and it's because of you guys that I can do this. Thank you.


    Sincerely,



    Not Time Spinner but close Enough, NeoExlucky

  11. NeoExlucky
    (Warning you are about to read a post written by a pony by the name of Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    So in my last entry I told others about sending your apps into world of equestria. Soon I will be in as well. (Though I'm much more snarky.) While that is all find and dandy a thought came to Neo's mind. He said he wanted to tell the origins of the OC's he plays as and to give tips on designing new OC's. While I'm sure other people have done that, Telling you all the origins of myself and my friends will be interesting. So here we go!
    Time Spinner: Hey that's me! Well, where do I begin? I started a very long time ago. I think if I remember correctly it was around a year ago when I was first imagined. Some where from december-march Neo was watching the show and I know it was a few episodes before super speedy cider squeezy 6000. Neo thought it would be a great idea to make a pony version of him. As such he went to the internet to see if he wasn't the only one and sure enough yaplap had shown up on youtube. If you don't know Yaplap is a hilarious brony on youtube and has an OC named solrac. Anyway Neo started writing ideas down and he made me. Except it wasn't me. I started as an alicorn, with the ability to control Time and Space and used magic to hide my wings. Terrible idea right? Luckily Neo came to his senses eventually got rid of the wings and space part, as well as limiting my time magic but still letting me keep it. Then there were differences in backstory and a few other things and eventually I was a mare.It wasn't until later that I went back to being a colt as I was a ponysona for Neo. Eventually Neo found pony generator and drew me there and started to write a fanfic about me that would soon become hated and rewritten and re released twice and rewritten again but not released once. Right around when Neo quit fanficing he found canterlot.com and well here I am.
    Echo forte: If I ever need to have a wingman or a bro by my side, Then it will probably be echo. As seen in the entry pic, Echo is a red Pegasus and is the OC of Neo's best friend. Echo started as being able wonderbolt who quit but that was too awesome so he became a normal Pegasus. Echo actually went through very little changes after that. He will soon appear in a series Neo is starting on youtube along with me and my brother gadget. He will also play a big roll in a soon to be series Neo is starting here on canterlot. (Also expect another blog by him.)
    Gadget Spinner: As I am the ponysona of Neo, Gadget is the ponysona of Neo's brother. Gadget only really exists due to a temporal loop I started with a Time spell that went horribly wrong. Not much to say here except the fact that he is an inventor and used to be called gizmo...That's it.
    Pocket: Pocket watch is the thief of equestria. In her original back-story she is part of a group called the collecters, who steal objects of interest and sell them to a client. She is a master of infiltration and is actually Bi-sexual. (though at first she was a lesbian.) Anyway, Pocket is a rival/romantic interest for me. However she causes me a lot of problems through out the series. She was inspired by a picture of a thief. Not much else to say...
    How to make an OC:
    One of the great things about an OC is the personality. While yes, being powerful and being a genius would be nice, Even I am not a genius and am not too OP. (Though I can be in some cases.) The main thing though is the personality. One of the nice things to do is too base an OC off of a person or even an Item. Neo, Neo's best friend, Neo's brother, and the picture were all inspirations to make the OC's Neo has. Another good idea is to give the OC a set personality or traits. That way if your character goes against these with there own purpose then it will show a lot of pain or growth. Another thing that Neo did with me was he made me rich with detail. Give your character a lot of detail. Make us feel like we could know how it is to hang out with the great and powerful Time Spinner, or the Silent and smart, Echo forte. Your OC can be a lot of things and often times other RPers won't object to it. (Unless your in World of Equestria.) Also it can be really fun to hide references in the backstory of your OC. I am a combination of Samurai jack and the Legend of zelda: Majora's mask. Neo says making an OC is really fun and I would reccomend it to anypony but please no alicorns. If you ever need help with a backstory feel free to message my owner Neoexlucky or even comment below.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  12. NeoExlucky
    (This is a joke)
    Once upon a time, there was a band of pirates! A crazy group made from a bunch of users here. There was QuickLime, BrambleRose, Bellosh, Steeleagle, and Dio! There used to be Rosewind, but I think they locked her in a treasure chest with a bunch of really bad cupcakes that imagination made, also he was there too. Finally they all sailed aboard the S.S. Raridash, a ship with a lot of promise and with a lot of evidence to prove that it was a great thing!
    However the crew members had some very odd quirks. The leader of the crew, Dio, wanted to live forever. Bellosh had an odd fascination with evil, albeit fashionable, hats. QuickLime enjoyed taking these hats from Bellosh and hiding them all over the ship, for him to find three months later. Bramblerose loved to eat Imagination's cupcakes, even though everyone else thought they tasted like worms. Imagination had a back room on the ship that no one else went into. I mean I assume that's where he kept his wood working stuff because at random times in the night you could hear a chainsaw in there, then some screaming, and then silence. Steeleagle believed in spontaneous combustion because unlike those so called "scientists" Steel knew the truth.
    Anywho the band learned of an ancient relic known as the chest of Rosie wind, a chest full of glorious items so unique and mind blowing, your face would implode upon setting your eyes on it. So obviously the pirates went after it. They ventured all over the land looking for any sign of it, and meeting some interesting fellows. Like a robot-man who only wanted to love, a naughty Gazelle who was queen of a city for a bit, some random guy who told really weird stories, a lady with witch powers, and of course, The duke of cinnia-bon.
    After searching for so long, they came across a town of talking muffins, who gave them the chest, which they took back to the S.S. Raridash crew. They opened the box and what do they find? Nothing, because the destination wasn't the treasure but the journey, the people the met and helped, that was the trea- just kidding they found Rosewind in the box. They stood around, slightly confused for a second and opened the other treasure chest, and what did they find? Rosewind. So for a matter of three seconds there were two Rosewinds in the world. Then a tsunami came and the Rariddash ship sank. That was the end of the S.S. Raridash, oh and then it exploded and came back as the U.S.S Rarity. Then everyone exploded.
    The End.
  13. NeoExlucky
    Hello weary traveler, why don't you sit around my comforting campfire, I'll spin you a tale from my collection of odd stories and offer you some hot chocolate as we begin. Now then are you all settled? Are you comfortable with where you sitting? If not take a chance to get comfy, and we can begin. Now let's see...what story do I pick...Ah, let's talk about the internet aether. Now the internet aether is an enchanting story that can get a bit complicated, so keep your wits about you. Now then, let's begin.
    A long time ago, about one and a half years, there was a boy. His name was NeoExlucky. NeoExlucky was fairly interesting boy, with too much time on his hands and an odd obsession with writing stories. He enjoyed the works of many authors and once had a dream of becoming one. Alas he lost his desire to become a writer and instead focused on other things in life. However one thing seemed to spark his creativity, something so odd that he had to keep it hidden that he watched this from judging eyes. This thing was My Little Pony. Now due to the nature of this site, I'm sure that doesn't seem so strange to you. After all for you to be here says much of your tales and experiences. Anyways, NeoExlucky had always found creativity when watching the show, he found many interesting bits of information that he felt he could expand upon. This started a series of unpublished tales and the creation of a character that would cause some problems for him. NeoExlucky soon invented a character inside of his mind that starred in many of his stories. This character's name changed a lot during this time, along with several other features and traits about him but this character would soon be known as Time Spinner. NeoExlucky's stories started to be fairly reasonable but began to get odder with every tale he finished. Eventually he had a series of stories to tell and he wanted a way to share it with others who enjoyed My Little Pony. So he found Fimfiction, a website where anyone could post stories about anything and this was where NeoExlucky posted his story called My Little OC: Time Spinner. He was very proud of this story, in his mind he thought that everything about it was perfect. In reality though, it was one of the worst stories he had ever written. It was met with mockery and scorn from the eyes he once thought were un-judging. He became very upset with the reviews his story got and he deleted the story off of FIMfiction and trashed Time Spinner. He was furious, blaming the character for his mistakes and problems in the story. Every piece of evidence that Time Spinner ever existed was deleted from his computer, and NeoExlucky hoped to never see anything about him again.
    Over the course of three weeks, his emotions changed from anger to sadness as when he deleted Time Spinner, he deleted a piece of himself. Time Spinner held a piece of him, much larger than that of any character he has now, with two exceptions but we'll get there soon. NeoExlucky didn't know what to do with himself, he wanted to bring Time Spinner back but everything about him was deleted. One would think that NeoExlucky would remember those things but he suffered from terrible memory and only remembered bits and pieces of things. If he was to bring Time Spinner back, it would be a new one, in a place he hoped no one would know who he was. Of course he didn't know where that was, or where to find anything like that.
    NeoExlucky had all but given up on Time Spinner, picking up the pieces he had from his memory and trying to flesh out more detail in him. At one point he came across something magical, the pony generator. To actually see his character was a true gift for him, as he had only written down details of what Time Spinner looked like. He got to work, and quickly picked up how to use the pony generator. In no time at all he had created the Alicorn, Time Spinner. He looked at his character with a happy smile, glad to see something so great...until he decided that the wings might be a problem. NeoExlucky had read stories of Alicorn characters that were met with bad reviews, and it was through this fear that NeoExlucky dropped the wings. Time Spinner was finished. NeoExlucky used a snipping tool to cut Time Spinner out and edit him a bit in Paint, when a strange message came up, like an error message. This message was different though, it asked him "Do you want to join the internet aether?" This strange sort of made him ponder what it could have been. Maybe it was some virus or maybe the computer was just acting up. Still the internet aether seemed like an interesting place and it was with a click of the mouse that brought this whole story into proportion. As NeoExlucky clicked yes, something happened with a large TV he kept in his room. It didn't work, it wasn't even brought in, but it started to flicker and lights started to appear in a swirling motion over the screen. It got brighter and brighter until Plop, a grey unicorn, with a wine red mane and black glasses fell out of the screen. It stood still for a few minutes before it got up and looked around at the unkempt room, then to NeoExlucky, who proceeded to scream in astonisment.
    "Who- who are you?" NeoExlucky asked.
    "My name is Time Spinner, I'm your character, Celetisa your room's a mess. Seriously you should take better care of your things." The unicorn scolded.
    "Wha-how...what!?"
    Time Spinner merely rolled his eyes. "You joined the internet aether, when you do that you need a character to use from there. That's me."
    "Bu-...why?"
    So Time Spinner told him the ways of the internet aether, how only other internet aether users could see his character, how there was an internet aether room where he could create more characters, and that he could explore the internet when he was inside the aether. One of the best things was his watch. Most internet aether users had some type of object from aether to use with his or her characters, and NeoExlucky's was a watch. While wearing the watch, NeoExlucky could snap his fingers and say the name of a character to let that character's powers flow into him. He could utilize the magic Time Spinner had, but he also had to deal with having the personality, the restrictions, and the responsibilities of Time Spinner. This was only one of the blessings of being a user of the Internet aether, while he was exploring, NeoExlucky found a golden city known as Canterlot, where other internet aether users met with their characters to interact with one another.
    Through this city, NeoExlucky created a vast list of characters, from villains to siblings and everything in between. He even found other cities like it where he created other character from other franchises. Places like the wikia city and Realms of Hyrule. While he created interesting characters, none of them really had much of an interesting character story, and none of them were as close to NeoExlucky as Time Spinner was. That is until Aselia was created. Now there is another user on this site name QuickLime, who wanted to start a band of pirates for the new roleplay type: Canterlot Chronicles. When NeoExlucky found this he quickly got to work on a version of Time Spinner for this but soon it changed to a new charater named Aselia. Aselia changed just as much as Time Spinner did. She started out as a thief and changed into a scholar with a knack for potion making and though Aselia never made it as a pirate, NeoExlucky felt very close to Aselia. He worked very hard on her and he loved the character he created. She was similar to Time Spinner by being a smart unicorn but she had a bit of sass to her and her story was not as...boring as Time Spinner's. She become one of the lead characters in NeoExlucky's arsenal of characters and developed a sibling bond with Time Spinnner.
    Then there came the most recent character into NeoExlucky's possession, Octavia Melody. After an attempt at a certain cast character, NeoExlucky was wanted to try for a new character who was part of the cast, and after a long time of angst, worry, anxiety, and excitement, Octavia was given to NeoExlucky. She was an interesting character in the fact that she was always Prim and Proper. Time Spinner, held such an odd personality and Aselia held a sassy genius personality that this was a bit of a change, but one that NeoExlucky was glad to have. With all of these characters NeoExlucky created a group called the leading three, the leaders of his characters, Octavia lead the World of Equestria characters, Aselia lead the Canterlot Chronicles characters, and Time Spinner lead the Free for all characters. These were his favorite characters he had ever had a hand in creating and with all of these things that had happened to him, he was glad that he had failed in writing stories, for if he hadn't he may never have found Canterlot or gotten any of these characters.
    So you see traveler, the internet aether is a very confusing place, but when it comes to you, it can lead you to magical places filled with adventure and experiences just ripe for the picking. You must be the one to take the first step into it and when you come to the ledge of adventure, do not be afraid to leap. Thank you for reading this story, we hope to see you again here in story time with Neo. Have a good evening.
  14. NeoExlucky

    Theory on Alicorns

    By NeoExlucky,

    (You are about to read a blog written by the pony; Time Spinner. This is Important. XD)
    As many of you know I stand against alicorn OC's as many of them are so super overpowered. Now while this is true, could anypony become an alicorn? Well...that might be true. So I;ve been reading a few things about alicorns and a few new things did show p. For example Cadence became an Alicorn a lot like Twilight did except with love instead of friendship and Cadence used to be a pegasus. Well this has taught me that one could become an alicorn just by learning about a specfic thing and perhaps having to be watched by one of the princesses. Now would this mean a Unicorn with Oh I don't know...the ability to control Time be able to become an alicorn. I HATE THAT! Why would that make any sense. I could see Twilight being the first unicorn becoming and Alicorn but Cadence used to be a pegasus? Actaully...I don't doubt that. Some of that does make a bit of sense for Equestria standards. Not to mention I've done some crazy things I shouldn't be able to do so here is a theory I want to think about.
    Can A pony become an alicorn because they know a lot about something? So...I could become an Alicorn, since I know how to manipulate Time. I mean I wouldn't but could like an Earth pony could become an Alicorn because they know a lot about like...justice? I don't know, I think they might as long as one of the current alicorns could become an alicorn. I also wonder if Celestia and Luna were born alicorns or if they were some other species? That's all I've got for now...I'll probably come back to this after Neo and I learn more about the Alicorns so yeah.
    Don't forget to app into a kingdom hearts crossover that is actually part of My backstory right here; http://www.canterlot...interest-check/
    (Also can anypony tell Neo how to make a character log? He's being stupid...)


    Sincerely,



    Time Sinner

  15. NeoExlucky
    I've been waiting to announce this for the longest time. It is with deepest apologies and sincerest regret that I announce that I will no longer be reviewing episodes of My little pony Friendship is magic. Now this doesn't mean that this blog is going to be thrown into the garbage can, far from it, in fact there's going to be a lot more of it around!
    Something that I really enjoyed, was reviewing turnabout storm, and I never felt anything like it when I reviewed the official episodes. However, to try and re-capture this moment, I will now begin reviewing fan-content. This will require a bit off tweaking with my normal way of reviewing things, but all in all, I will still be reviewing. So expect a review of some type of fan-content this friday, or next week. I'll review anything, except for fanfics, which I may do at a later date. I can't wait to get started!
  16. NeoExlucky
    (First of all First post! Second of all while I haven't been an RPer for long I have noticed and learned a few things.)
    (Warning you are about to read a post written as Time Spinner not Neoexlucky. That is important! XD)
    So one of the things that is really common with Bronies and pegasisters is an OC. Yourself or a character you made as a pony. Making an OC can be very easy lately as all you have to do is google a few things and play with the Pony generator then *poof* you have your OC but how do you know if your OC is a good OC. Granted some of the rules about it are obvious like No alicorns or something but there are some things. Your OC/ RP character has to be able to be presented in the world of equestria. How do you do this? Well here in Canterlot all you have to do is submit an application and wait for the Mods to say something. However I have seen some OC's that would make you think' Really'? Now while those were made by a close friend of Mine *cough* Neoexlucky *cough* but I don't want bronies and Pegasisters to learn this. I have noticed that eventually I will probably be hit with the OP hammer as I am pretty powerful. I mean I can stop Time granted it's only for twelve seconds and I can't control it but still I am powerful and will probably end up being re-made again or stay in the FFA/Crossover section for that. If I had to suggest anything to any RPer looking to send in an APP to world of Equestria it would be this. Don't think that it will be approved as soon as it is in. Often times when you send it in, it will need work. Now that's not saying the character is bad mind you and in fact might be great as a main character of His/Her own series but this is My little pony and the mane six are the main characters here. World of Equestria would be like an adventure of normal ponies with normal powers. Just be open to the ideas the mods and helpers give. It's not bad advice and could truly help your character. They might (Hopefully not with me.) Suggest to make a new OC just for WOE. While this is good advice, just submit to the changing of the character if you really like that character. Also unless your character is like the ultimate good guy then their personality should remain the same as I don't see a reason the Mods would object to it. Also a dark background (Which I have. .-.) probably won't fly in the world of equestria. So if your character saw his entire family die in some gory way, your probably going to have to change that. Remember that equestria never has anything too dark. I should also mention to stay out of Time travel. (Leave it to the professionals like Me and doctor whooves.) It gets really confusing and unless your really good at it the reader will be confused. Not to mention that even if your good at it, the mods will probably still say no. (:'|) Truly it is difficult to be accepted into WOE and I would recommend you to have a few posts under your belt. I would say maybe parasprite or 20% cooler. (About 400-500 posts.) That's all I really know. If you have a comments, concerns, questions, or etc. Post them below and Neo will get you favorite Time traveler to answer them. Have a good adventure RPers.


    Sincerely,



    Your favorite Time Traveler: Time Spinner

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