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  1. NeoExlucky
    So I wouldn't say this is a direct reply to Lux's Character Evolution post but it does work as this Post's kick starter and Split's this up into 2 parts. So as a pony of Equestria I have learned a few things about the relationships with my fellow ponies. Now this is something you have to be kind of delicate about. As you have learned from Ms. Sparkle often a personality doesn't define exactly what their friends would be at least with a little push. However sometimes it can cause a make or break friendship. Okay so Twilight became very good friends with Dashie, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack. However this probably wouldn't have happened if Celestia didn't push Twilight to go to Ponyville which would cause the events of season 1 episode 2. However when Trixie appears in Boast busters they are far from friends. Then Twilight tricks her to take off the alicorn amulet and after they become good friends. There is a bit of a pattern here and they both involve character Evolution and Their relationships with each other. First of all their is Twilight who learned and evolved from Boast busters to Magic duel. Both in her magic, and in her personality and understanding. Twilight isn't the only one as even other characters have evolved though only a little bit. Applebloom learned not to be ashamed of being a blank flank yet she still hasn't learned what her talent is. There also is Luna who we first saw in The season 1 premiere but didn't see again until Luna Eclipsed. When we did her hair had changed, she got her Royal canterlot voice again, and she wanted others to forget about Nightmare moon. Characters in the show can develop like crazy and that is something I'd love to see in the future possibly in RPs. One thing that Neo has been talking about with me is my future evolutions and some I am crazy excited about but others I'm could care less for. (I HATE WINGS!!!) It can be difficult to evolve your character with some RP's and this is why this is a two parter. Join me next time in Sincerly, Time Spinner where I will tell you how to actually Evolve your character in a RP.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

    (P.S. I watched the first episode of Teen Titans Go and while it's not that good Turns out Raven and Robin are Bronies. Just something I wanted to share.)
  2. NeoExlucky
    Let's get this finished up Bronies! Today let's talk about the relationships between characters and such. As well as how to evolve characters. Plus a general connection between relationships and Evolution in a character that I forgot to cover. Now in the MLP universe complex characters don't really happen but at the same time they do happen. One thing about each character is that there is a general emotion about them that we would go off of as a first impression. This is something that should definitely be minded in an RP. Give your character an emotion about them that isn't something too boring. This seems hard but if you were to compare it to real life it's not. Now this is way different in between WOE and FFA/Crossovers. In FFA let's say your character went through a type of hardship. In this case we'll say that they saw their parents die. Your character wouldn't fully recover from this. Depending upon how long it has been since that moment your character would have a different personality. For example 2 months from that event your character won't fully recover and will suffer a lot from that moment. A normally happy foal would turn dark and serious and possibly depressed. Now if it were a much longer time, like let's say 2 years, your character will have recovered but will suffer side effects. Perhaps flashbacks, or even item sensitivity. Let's do me next. I blame myself for the death of my best friend Aqua because I was never able to find a herb to cure her. Now there is one RP in which I still suffer from this as it takes place only about 4 months after I was sent to the future. I do suffer from culture shocks, needing a guide so I don't mess anything up and social problems. One thing that I try to keep in almost all my RP's is the importance of my pocket watch. While my pictures don't show it I have an obsession over the pocket watch, not because it holds a dark power but because it acts like my safety blanket. This is a sign of a side effect however there is more. Time recovers a bit too quickly from his problem as the academy shows me making Gadget my brother as well as becoming a bit more sociable. This is due to two things, for one Hearts and hooves day was a great evolution for my character and two I'm also insane. Insanity is something that you could suffer from that would cause you to recover quicker but at the cost of you sometimes doing something crazy, in this case having another personality. Now in WOE this is different as nothing truly bad happens in WOE that you could truly suffer from besides a death from old age. Still maybe your character is a little cocky and thinks he's better than anypony else. Then they should show that in whatever they do. This would be something that truly makes a character a character. However they would need a reason behind this.
    Moving on we can now talk about how to do evolution in RP. Here's a tip, DON'T BET ON ANYTHING YOU DON'T KNOW! If you think your going to make an RP centered around you for evolution it won't get far. Character evolution would normally happen through other RP's that may or may not directly link to your character. For example maybe the academy RP made your character a wonderbolt. You can decide whether to keep that or not in other RPs but if there is a direct sequel for this one then it would remain. Perhaps you don't know it yet but the RP is something that you should really get a fell for and maybe every once in a while change who your character is. This is truly how to do evolution is to just go with the flow in it. You will almost never find a way to give a character an RP centered around them. This maybe because a lot of character's like to make their character's relevant, like a resident evil game. We're each playing through a campaign and everyone to us is a side character but to someone else you may be the side character to them. However if you take this away not many people will like it.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  3. NeoExlucky
    Okay, after a long hiatus let's get to some cleaning since I have backed up reviews in my word document of reviews.
    Winter wrap up is an episode you can't help but love. The episode starts with Twilight waking up to help with cleaning up winter, and she puts on a winter saddle, which is kind of interesting. Anyway the episode is really good but it does have a few problems here and there.
    The animation of the episode is great, all of the snow being moved, the contraptions the earth ponies have, and the ice being broken looks great as does the animals and the baskets/nests. Everything here looks very nice and some of it looks like it has a lot of detail.
    The song, winter wrap up, just makes my ears melt. (That's a good thing.) As this is really the first song where everypony has gotten to sing and not just Pinkie pie.
    Characters act mostly like themselves but there is one pony who doesn't, Twilight. Unlike how she's been portrayed before she never was so excited to socialize with the other ponies in getting the area cleaned. However this may be because of organization and if so then she does act like she should. The other cast of the mane 6 have jobs that seem to go along with their characters. Applejack working on the farm, and fluttershy helping the animals seems obvious, but we also have Rainbow dash on the weather team, something we haven't heard nor seen from since the first episode, plus Pinkie pie ice skating to cut up the ice, which seems like a job suited for her. We also got rarity making the baskets/nests and that definitely is a good job for her and something we'll see in the future of the reviews.
    Overall if your going to show an episode to a non brony this one is a great choice, it has music that's quite catchy and good, great character portrayals, and some fantastic animation. This episode is really good and for a minute you may forget that this is a show about pastel ponies. I give the episode a B+.
    Alright now we're going to do something a bit different.
  4. NeoExlucky
    Surprise! I'm actually doing this now! I'll be judging each game based around a few categories that your about to see. So with that let's get started!
    Story: You start the game with Professor oak telling you about the world of pokemon and after you name your character and rival (Who will later be known as red and blue.) you get to actually start. When you head downstairs from your bedroom your mum will tell you that professor oak is looking for you. After trying to walk in tall grass he will take you to the lab and you can pick your starter...unless you have yellow like I did then you get pikachu. Anyway that's when you start your journey of collecting all of the badges in the game and catching all 151 pokemon in existence. (Not anymore!)
    Overall the story is great. It's not all that large or diversing and because of this there are little room for plot holes. All of it makes sense and there are very subtle hints to something bad that happened before we get to play. I love all of it.
    Gameplay: Simple, yet addictive and fun. As anyone would tell you it's like rock paper scissors but with more types of weapons. They do this in such a way that I think that it should be really boring but it is most defiantly not. Excellently done. Though it should be noted that at this time if you have a psychic type, you ca pretty much destroy anything.
    Mechanics: Types are very interesting and adds a lot of diversity between pokemon. I love the items, badges, and casino in the game.
    Pokemon: The pokemon here feel very fresh and new. I feel like a lot of effort was put into each one.
    Secrets: Several secrets here. From the offical ones like mewtwo and mew to the non official ones like missingno and lvl 100 nidoking. Also if you have yellow you can teach pikachu surf and play the surfing pikachu game.
    Rival: Blue/green is am amazing trainer that you can't help but hate. He's very pompous and is a total jerk. I do feel sad for him at certain times like at the lavender city tower but then he goes back to jerk mode. Quite the character.
    Personal information: Pokemon yellow is one of the first games I remember playing. I have lots of memories with it and I love every second of it. Yellow will always have a very special place in my heart and in my controller. No it's not my favorite but it doesn't have to be. The game itself is quite interesting and there are tons of things you can do. If your in the mood for nostalgia then go play these games, that is if you can find a copy with a working battery.
    Overall the game tries it's hardest to be an RPG every gamer can enjoy and clearly it's work payed off. I give the game an A-, it's very good in a lot of ways but it does seem to lack a few things such as the americans getting mew without cheating. This has been Neo reviews, Thanks for reading.
    (Also most of this was for red,blue, and yellow. I live in america so I have never been able to play green.)
  5. NeoExlucky
    First and foremost I want to make a gigantic point about WOE so that evverypony/Brony/Pegasister/or whatever thing you are understands. I LOVE WORLD OF EQUESTRIA! The concept to play in an environment that could possibly be cannon in the show is awesome and it holds so much potential for it that all I can do is teem with Excitement. (However Neo can't ever find an RP that we both agree on.) Plus Time 2.0 has offered a lot of Experimentation on my self as a character My traits, My relationships, my personality, Etc. Truly it is a fantastic place to Roleplay and I would recommend it to almost everypony here. It's got it's greats, it's goods, it's 'Oh my Celestia this is amazing's but it also has it's bad's. I understand it's purpose and I completely know why it's here but I do Like FFA and Crossovers a bit better since I can be Original Me. Let's take my experiments of myself for example. When in an FFA/ Crossover I love being able to use my powers and find an event in which I react a certain way, that I love. I can do that exact same thing as 2.0 in WOE but then I have to remember if that's how I act. Recall that Legacy (Storyline of Destiny, Neo's series on Youtube that doesn't exist yet.) has me using my Time travel powers and has a different personality of Myself. Some things such as Nevermore (My raven.) and Diamond Dust were easy to figure out what I would do with those two in Legacy, but then there's some other things like my admiration for Twilight Sparkle in WOE but in Legacy I hate her. There's also some other things like not being able to play as a Hippogryph. (Who Neo was going to make my Rival.) Though I don't think I've ever seen one in WOE or the show, so I guess that makes sense. Either way I still love World of Equestria and just to prove it we're going to talk about one of the reasons I love it. Let's compare the Three Me's. Beta Time Spinner, Original Recipe, and Time 2.0.
    This is what they try to keep out:

    Beta Time is literally the most OP thing ever. For one in this form I don't have a limit to my Time Travel at all. I can go Forward, Backwards, and Stop Time for whenever I please and their are no dire Problems that happen...Ever! Plus My magic is Better than Twilight's, I'm faster than Rainbow Dash, and more fabulous than Rarity. THIS IS THE DEFINITION OF OVER POWERED! I also don't like wings...that's about it. Oh right, I forgot one other thing, that cutie mark is terrible. Moving on.

    This is Time 2.0 and what WOE houses. Ponies that could be in the show as another Character. I love that this makes sure there aren't any ponies that are OP. This is something that I really enjoy. No being as powerful as the main characters (Unless you play the main characters.), no depression stories, and no 'I'm a traitor to my own kind' type of pony. The only down side to this for me is that I like the options of the depression stories. Neo and I love to read and if the story can vary from an 'all smiles' that is awesome! Though the pony would have to have scars of the story. See in the Legacy story I grew up in the Discordian era, where Discord rule. I also couldn't save my best Friend and she died. (I was also in love with her.) Now I've technically had three years to get over yet I still will have repercussions of it. I distance myself from others, (With the exception of Gadget.) I have emotional break downs at times, I can sometimes suffer from Culture shock, the list goes on. While in some of the cannon RP's now, I have gotten over this (For now) but if a pony has a certain story their personality should reflect this and with the world of Equestria staff I think they do a good job as no pony seems to be Depressed for no reason, or really happy after they lost their entire Family. Now this brings us too...

    Ah, me in the fullest extent. I have powers that others don't but they are turned down. I can only Stop time for 12 seconds or Deity takes over. I can only do it once a day and after I do it almost all of my magic is down. Techinically in Destiny I have to learn how to do up to Twelve Seconds, before than the max is Two seconds. The point is that after the spell is cast I can't do much as a unicorn after, and I also have no strength so can't use that. This version of me is my favorite because it shows there's a secret but If I use it something bad could happen. I do understand why I can't be me in WOE. (Besides when would I need to stop time there?) I am glad that WOE did help turn Beta Me. Just remember that if you think the rules of WOE are too much, they're there for a reason. Otherwise we'd all be Alicorns with the powers of Discord.


    Sincerely,



    Time Spinner

  6. NeoExlucky
    Oh my god, it been like 15 years since I've done a review. I apologize for that, I had finals for a bit then I was working over in the Sonic Fanon Wiki/RP site, then ended up in the powerpuff girls universe where they did nothing but beat me up and call me mojo or something...anyways, let's start the review!
    It's hard to remember that we didn't get introduced to the CMC until this late. This is a really good episode that I can actually enjoy from the CMC. It has some good humor, good relation to Applebloom, CUPCAKES, and Peppermint Twist. The characters act the way I think they should and do for a while. Though the adults laughing with the kids during the party because they were blank flanks seems a bit cruel and un-normal. The song is one of my favorites, but don't try making cupcakes with that recipe, you'll end up with Baked bads... The art was nice, nothing too out of the ordinary but the colour scheme for the ponies here were interesting. The story should also be marked as important as this is the second Time cutie marks are mentioned and are actually explained in this episode, something we needed for the Magical Mystery Cure. The characters of Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are jerks that do give off a bully feel that I like. This episode is a really good one and you can enjoy the CMC here for the first time. This episode gets a B in my grade book. Good story and concept, the execution was nice but it doesn't stand out from the crowd. Well now I have to write a review for Fall Weather friends, so I'll be back tomorrow. This has been Neo Reviews. Thanks for Reading.
  7. NeoExlucky
    Warning may have spoiler if you haven't watched the episode!
    Puns! Puns everywhere! There to you left! There to you right! Holy horseapple! I should quit horsing around! Suddenly celestia! Okay let's start the review.
    Alright, fall weather friends is an episode that I forgot was so good! It's one of the few episodes that made me think "I love this show!" the night I turned into a Brony. Let's break it down for you;
    The story goes like this, Applejack and Rainbow dash are having a horse shoe throwing competition and they're just having a grand old time. The two have a bit of a conversation about it and they go into an iron pony competition that goes up, then spirals down. The rest well...it gets a bit RACEY afterwards. Ha, ha, ha...okay back to the review.
    The animation of the episode is petty top notch, with all the things that get shown off when Rainbow dashes, from place to place or when the leaves fall. It's pretty nice and I haven't seen be this good since Episode 1+2!
    The characters stay true to themselves and are just a blast to watch. They make it so much more interesting and Twilight's little bits are always great. I love some of the banter between Pinkie Pie and Spike, it always makes me chuckle.
    The story is simple and sometimes it's kind of lacking. We pretty much just skip to the events whenever Someone finishes the last one and this isn't something I like but I won't count it off for it. Still it was something I could see happening between these two characters.
    The voice acting of Ashleigh Ball was superb. I loved the quality of it and it out shined almost all of aspects of the episode.
    The lines for the characters were decent. It was good, better then Ticket Master, but there wasn't anything too outstanding of it, so I can't really mention anything that FELL into the WEATHER of my FRIENDS liking. See what I did there...I'm so Punny! Anyway the puns in there were actually what made this episode feel interesting.
    Anyways this is a very good episode for season 1 and it's one that, while other are better, always makes me smile and feel better about myself. It's really good and I love it...though it falls into the top 45% for me. I give this episode my exluckiest rating of an B and I give it a highlight of Season 1! It's good for it's time but if you were to put it against episodes like suited for success or Sweet and Elite, or even Lesson Zero and Magic duel, it would fall a little flat. This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!
  8. NeoExlucky
    Now we come to one of the arguably best episodes of MLP itself. I prefer another set of episodes but lets get on with the apocalypse!
    Alright so the story is that Twilight goes to Rarity's to get a dress fixed that she says she is going to wear to the gala. Rarity takes it too far and makes everyone of the Mane 6 dresses. The story was really good at exploiting Rarity's Charity (Rhyme Time) and showing us how rarity acts to certain things, especially her wallowing. It's one of the goo things about this episode.
    The animation of the fashion show (Take 2) is beautiful and well done. Plus the animations for the song Suited for success is really good too. I liked it.
    The characters here are very true to themselves and it makes me smile at some of their comments, like rainbow's "And fluttershy's freaky knowledge of Sewing." Which makes a few thoughts fly through my head and make me chuckle...NOT THOSE THOUGHTS!
    Voice acting was done superbly. Rarity's wallowing, The cheers of the crowd, and hoity toity's voice were excellent!
    The song of Art of the Dress, is really good and is one of my favorites. I think personally that it still holds up against the other, songs in the show, it doesn't beat winter wrap up or Celestia's Ballad but it was still well done.
    The lines were...okay there were a few bad one. My least favorite is the "I don't like it, I love it!" line that Rarity does. While it came off right it's always a line that I hate. However the other lines in the episode like Pinkie Pie's comments were nice and some Spike's comments were good too.
    So rarity joined the cast of the ponies I like here and the song was fantastic as well as the story. So I give this episode my Reviewer rating of a B+. Well done and excellent. Wow this one was short. Well either way, This has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!
  9. NeoExlucky
    So...was rarity technically an alicorn during this episode? I've wondered why this spell isn't used more often, or why we never hear about this event again....wait...why does doctor whooves have wings?
    Okay so the story is pretty much this; Rainbow Dash is going into a competition known as the young fliers competition. Only Fluttershy can go with her though, since only pegasi can walk on clouds. However through the use of two spells, the rest of the mane 6 are able to walk on clouds, and Rarity, through the use of the other spell, gets wings.
    Now what do I think of the story? Well...it's pretty simple. Personally I don't care for the story that's in place here. Several things I do want to point is how she could do the Sonic rainboom, have thousands of ponies see it, even ponies in Manehatten and Canterlot, all as a foal, then it just disappears. As said by the 'bullies' it's just a myth, furthermore if the trick is that impressive, wouldn't rainbow dash only get better from there? These just seem like giant plot holes that don't make any sense. Also I do want to talk about the 'bulllies' for a second. For one why were they all bullying her in the first place? Another question, where we're the mares? Wouldn't they be in on the fun of making fun of Dashie? Why were they all guys? It's things like these that kind of remind me that this is a show for girls. The only thing I can think of is 'girl power!' yet it just feels wrong. I hate gender things like this, it's why I don't like some of the lines in ticket master. Applejack did say 'Aint that just like a boy' I absolutely cannot stand gender inequality.
    On the other hoof, Animation is top notch and exceeds my expectation. The Sonic Rainboom and Rarity's wings look stunning.
    The characters do seem to act like themselves which is exactly what I'd ask for in any episode.
    The voice of everypony was quite nice and you can tell that a lot of the actors had fun with their lines.
    Dialogue is okay. Like I said some lines do remind me of a kids show but most of the time it's alright.
    So this episode, while many like it, I don't care for it all that much. Cannon wise it's a good episode but, it's just not my cup of tea. I can't talk much about this episode but it does add to another episode down the line a bit. Overall this episode was okay, I give this episode a 7.3 out of 10. I think it needs a bit more work. Well this has been Neo Reviews, thanks for reading!

  10. NeoExlucky
    Hmm...something's not quite right here...I don't know what but for some reason I feel weird about this episode. I like it but and it was a really good episode, good song, great characters, believable story, but why doesn't it sit right? Oh well let's do this!
    The story is this, Rarity's working on an order and Sweetie belle wants to help but Rarity won't let her. Fluttershy comes in with Rarity's cat (I can't spell her name.) and the rest of the CMC come in after a bit of banter betweem Rarity and Fluttershy. They talk about a sleepover, Rarity says they can't and Fluttershy offers to help them.
    I have to say that this story is really interesting. I don't hate the CMC yet so this episode makes me really happy. The story reminds me of when I was younger and used to have sleepovers with my best friends. Anyways I like the overall story and I do believe that it makes the characters stay true to themselves.
    Animation was stunning, the cockatrice turning ponies to stone, to the animations during the song, all to Fluttershy's 'stare' make this episode really good. Best of all it only gets better from here.
    The characters seem okay here. The CMC are just like they always are, Rarity is like Rarity. Fluttershy and Twilight seem off to me. I don't know how but the stare, doesn't feel right for fluttershy. Maybe because she says that she can't control when she does the stare but does control it on discord in keep calm and flutter on. Twilight...I don't know. She doesn't seem right but...maybe it's the rock.
    Voice acting was normal. Nothing to outstanding for the show now.
    The Song "Hush now, Quiet now' is really good. I wish there was a real lullaby version of it and not just that one part because I would love to hear it. What we got was good though. I love the song, plus it gives us some insight on Sweetie belle as a character.
    The lines well...they flowed really good for CMC and fluttershy but some of the lines that rarity did felt odd and a bit different.
    Well this episode was an overall success. It seems to stay in the grey more than it should and if it was given a bit more of a push, I'd put it in a top ten, alas it isn't. So overall I give this episode a 7.5 out of 10. Needs just a tiny bit more work. Well now that's done here's your daily comic from Time Spinner!
    (The stage has been set...)
  11. NeoExlucky
    Has anyone seen Time Spinner? I've been looking all over and I can't find him...oh well...let's go do this review, he probably got lost in the internet aether. (Where I live.)
    The Show Stoppers is a nice episode that you can either love or hate. It's one of those episodes that I do enjoy though. The story goes like this:
    The cutie mark crusaders are finding their cutie marks, and establishing a tree house that will become it's own landmark, after a few comical failures Twilight (and cherilee) suggest entering a talent show, which can only end in queen and failure.
    I like the stories flow, it's very connected and well thought out, even for a CMC episode. It has that flavour of care put into it and it really seems to show. My favorite part might just be talent show's song. The references and animations were very charming.
    The animation throughout the episode was pretty good. It had a few times where it could have been better but it was alright now.
    Characters are pretty believable. Nothing bad about them so nothing to really say.
    Voice acting for the CMC was...wow. Knocked by imaginary socks off my feet. Very well done.
    The CMC theme is a song, so I should review it but...it's also a joke song. So...what do I do? For a joke song it was pretty good and got me to laugh at a few parts.
    The conversations just kept coming and some of them were pretty good. Nice job Script writing team!
    The episode is pretty good for a season 1 episode, still not my favorite but it was pretty good. One I would recommend a non-brony watch. (If they knew who the CMC were by now.) So with all of this in mind I give this episode my reviewer rating of 7.9. Just a little more work and...and...I'm sorry but am I getting bad at this? It's just...everytime I review something it makes me feel depressed, like I'm failing and not doing a good job. It's not just reviews either, I feel like I've lost my touch in RPing. I just don't feel that same spark I did when I RPed for the first time. Ever since the academy chapter 3 ended, I've not felt that same way...maybe I should just...maybe it's time I...

  12. NeoExlucky

    OC origins - Gadget

    By NeoExlucky,

    Hello one and all! Neo here with my first entry in explaining OC's and the like. What with Lux being (I think) done with her characters right now, I've decided to bring my third favorite character on the list. (Behind Time Spinner and Aselia.) So what exactly was the inspiration for Gadget you might ask? Well...my little brother. Time Spinner was my ponysona, so it would make sense that when my little got his ponysona, he would be related to mine. Of course that destroys the whole backstory of Time Spinner but I did find a way around that with the introduction of something called a time loop, but we'll talk about that when we get to Time.
    Now if you've been keeping track of all of my real OC's we have eleven, soon to be twelve, and all of them except Time Spinner will show up, re-designed, in Canterlot Chronicles. I'm going to hold off on Time for a while, a LONG while. Anywho Gadget will be the next to get an app there, once I decide his purpose for it and once I get to work with my little brother. Gadget's personality has remained reletivly the same, no matter where he goes. He's always somewhat of an idiot and has been an inventor of sorts, even though he's never showed this off in any role-play. Since I really have no idea how to go about this, Gadget will be done in the style that Lux has done. So inspirations:
    1. My little brother- The way Gadget acts is pretty much the way Gadget acts in RP. It makes sense that it would be this way. The same thing goes for the relationship that me and my brother have. He's a lot more of a socialite and I'm more introverted. I always end up going to some crazy place with him and I do have that "I hate you all" attitude that Time Spinner can have with most ponies. (Or will have when he get's re-designed.)
    2. Building- Gadget's talent is inventing, and around the time that I had invented Gadget, I was in love with building things, and the like. During the time of Gadget's creation, I had built a replica master sword, Mickey's keyblade, and a ceramic pedestal thing that I'm not quite sure where it went. Anyways I thought it would be a great idea to make a character who loved to build while I loved to build. However since I kind of...lost interest in that I have yet to show that attitude, but that will be shown of in canterlot chronicles.
    Other information:
    Gadget makes appearances in other timelines that I have created based on Roleplays, stories, and even songs. He is three roleplays short of beating Time Spinner for most roleplays. Gadget, like all of my characters, has a theme song which is Ciela's theme.

  13. NeoExlucky
    (Warning the following is a true review written in a roleplay style. The following characters are Gadget and discorded Neo. Be warned that while this is written to further the review storyline but is also written still as a review.)
    Come on Neo look, a dog and pony show, it's like one of your favorite episodes of the entire series.
    What?! I think not! This entire show is stupid, not fun, and made for girls, why would I, a busy 16 year old need to watch a dumb girl's cartoon!
    Look, Aselia said this is the only way to get you back, so we're doing this review.
    These reviews are stupid too. There is absolutely no reason for them to exist.
    Oh my Luna...
    The story is probably my favorite part of this episode, it's easy to follow, very believable and it reveals to us a new species that are quite interesting to roleplay with. Spike and Rarity are out collecting gems with Rarity's new and improved gem finder now with 20% less rocks, when suddenly they are ambushed by a bunch of Diamond dogs. Spike goes to collect the other mane 6 for help and Rarity uses her wits to outsmart the diamond dogs. Like I said, easy to follow and very nice. Neo what do you think?
    It's stupid! The writers finally decide to tell us Rarity's special talent when we're almost finished with the first season! The idea behind it is stupid since no one bothered to mention diamond dogs, and Spike's being over ignorant as usual and trying to court with Rarity when everyone knows that she's already friend zoned him a long time ago.
    Anyways...
    Animation is very top notch in this episode, what with the diamond dogs and their antics, the unicorn magic being used, and the caves that looked dazzling. The Voice acting and Dialogue were nice too, adding some really funny lines for the characters, and were delivered nicely.
    Yawn...boring, boring and boring.
    *Sigh*
    Spike and Rarity, the stars of the episode, are developed a lot in this episode, from finding out Rarity's talent, too learning how far Spike will go for Rarity, the episode does a nice job of showing off these qualities between the two characters and while the other characters aren't represented all that much, it's nice to get a look at these two for a bit. I'm not even going to ask Neo his opinion since, it's clear what he'll say.
    Now to me this episode is really important, mainly because this was the episode that caused some ideas to spark in Neo and helped with certain aspects of my development.
    Quite the mistake I made. I hate making characters.
    The episode is nice and manages to do everything right, for an episode with no song. I give this episode a 9.5/10. The reason it's only 9.5 is because the episode, while being very good, is one that I feel could have been expanded upon more. Plus it's never really got a callback made to it, which I think it should.
    I give this episode a 1/10 because it's a stupid episode that is boring and is filled with so many plot holes!
    Ugh, Neo no, let's just go. Next time Change Swipe and Time Spinner will be reviewing here.
  14. NeoExlucky
    I want to look at another character creator that I find does a pretty good job of making pony OC's. Legends of Equestria released their character creator and I figured I'll review it. Anywho let's get to the review.
    The good:
    Ponies are in 3D. I can't tell you how long I've awaited this.
    The mane styles, cutie marks, and tails all look pretty good, oh and that's another thing.
    There are a huge amount of cutie marks in this creator. While many of my characters don't have their cutie marks in it, they are still going to add stuff, so that's good! I really like the cutie marks we have though, there's a scroll that I settled on in there that makes me think of reviews, so Time Spinner with a scroll cutie mark is me...I guess. There's other's on there that are cool too and actually if we used our cutie marks on our profiles, most of us could do it. There's a really big leaf, a compass rose, a peace sign, a quill, etc.
    Color's are easy to pick from since we get a giant color wheel and we can mess with the brightness of said color.
    It's free, so that's good!

    I'm happy to say that there are only two real problems I have with this creator so far, I'm sure they'll be fixed but I'm reviewing it now, so it's going to get those as bads.
    The bad:
    There's an ad right over the pony when you play it in normal mode. It's not there in full screen and you may be asking "Neo, if it can be fixed that easy, what's the problem?" My problem is that no matter what I do, I can't get a picture of the pony because that ad always shows up. I'm sure there's something I can to block the ad but I'm reviewing this without help from another program.
    Sometimes when I'm clicking on one of the arrows It takes me out of full screen mode. It gets annoying after a while of it happening but I tried it on my other computer and didn't get it at all so maybe it's just this one. I don't know.

    Anyways I really like this creator. If I could just get a pic of it, it would be my profile. I'm super excited about Legends of Equestria and I can't wait to see what else they are going to have in store for us. With all of this in mind guys, this get's my reviewer rating of 8.5/10!
  15. NeoExlucky
    (Warning: The following review contains words written in character to an on going problem here at Neo's internet house. The words of Time Spinner are written in this manner however the words of Change Swipe are written as Neo's true thoughts. Enjoy...)
    Warning, the following review is about a stupid problem that doesn't even make any sense with characters that seem incredibly annoying and a stupid, lady gaga knock-off!
    Time Spinner, that's a horrible thing to say. Come on the episode wasn't that bad. It was actually pretty good.
    Just what was so good about it?
    You know what? Let's just review.
    Now in this episode Rarity has a dress that she is making to show for a client named Photo Finish, a famous pony who knows about fashion...I guess. Rarity 'hires' Fluttershy at the last minute and Photo pays all of her attention, not to the dress but to Fluttershy. She takes Fluttershy and makes her a star while Rarity begins to get jealous of her.
    The storyline is...well it's okay. Part of it makes sense but for the most part I don't really care for it. I mean yeah it's good for getting us from one place to the next but I don't think it's a highlight of the episode.
    Plus it's stupid. The show was still being made for little girls at this time. right? So how would anyone be able to relate to making a dress and having their best friend become famous?
    "I don't think that was point..."
    The animation was also okay. Fluttershy walking down the catwalk for the last time in the episode sure was...interesting. However nothing else really made me go "Wow, that was pretty cool!"
    Pinkie pie jumping out of random things really upset me. Wouldn't it be better if it was like NOT A PONY?
    Rarity and Fluttershy are both shown to be really good friends in this episode. In fact I'd say they have the closest relationship we've seen so far in these reviews. We learn a lot about Fluttershy's kindness, her anger, and her shyness that we already knew about. We learn about Rarity's jealousy in this episode too and we learn that Fluttershy and Rarity go to the spa together once a week.
    All of these could have been skipped over and no one would care. Besides everyone knows the best ship is...
    Yes?
    I mean...Ships are stupid in this show, why would anyone ship anypony together. Further more when I ship it's better. I put a pony in a box, tape it up, and mail it to china. That's how you ship.
    Dialogue and voice acting are very good in this episode and dare I say it, it's the best part of this episode.
    It's terrible.
    Time did you like any part of this episode at all?
    ...Yes...Fluttershy is very adorable...but it's only in this episode, none of the others...
    I feel if you want to show someone the ponies and introduce them to the show, don't start with this episode, but do make it one of the first to watch. With everything in this episode it's really hard to dislike but I don't think it's enough to make it the best episode of Season 1. This episode gets an 8/10. Needs a hint of work, a teaspoon of sugar, and a dash of rainbows to make it better but it's still one of my personal favorites, still not my total favorite though.
    Can we go now? This internet Aether is starting to make me dizzy and I don't like it.
    You don't like Spinning, Time SPINNER?
    (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ I'm done...
    Time, wait! Oh uh...┬─┬ ノ( ゜-゜ノ) Don't leave me behind!
  16. NeoExlucky
    Now I don't know if you guys know this or not, but I love mega man. I didn't actually start playing it until recently and I even asked you guys which ones I should play, until I said "You know what, play all the megamans!" So pretty much all in the classic series (Minus 8), plus megaman x, x2, and x3. I also love rping and I thought, "Hey, I already do Sonic, and ponies, and Zelda recently, why not try a mega man roleplay?" So I searched the interwebs only to find that the last post made in a mega man rp site was back in 2011. Now that just can't do, can it? So I kept looking and figured I should start a mega man rp wikia. Now I'd need help with a few things because I am in no way, shape, or form admin material. Anyways, I haven't started it yet because I wanted to ask something, how many of you would Roleplay in the mega man world?
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