FluttershyGrimshy

Actually, that does help a LOT! Thanks so much for the ideas! Hopefully I can edit this just fine from my phone

Soul watched as Licorice's friend made an appearance. He could already tell that Wishbone seemed rather nervous about being in there. It made sense though. As Licorice introduced the two colts, Soul bowed respectfully. He chuckled when he saw Wishbone blush a little bit after Licorice explained that he was in fact a little nervous. "[colour=#cc0000]It's aight[/colour]," he said, flipping a section of his mane out of his eyes. "[colour=#cc0000]Don't worry, Wishbone. We had another colt come in here earlier, so you're not the first by any means.[/colour]" Of course, Timid wasn't the straightest colt on the block, but none of that really mattered to any of the hosts. "[colour=#cc0000]You'd actually be surprised at how often colts come in here[/colour]," he said with a small laugh.

Blizzy jumped up, flapping her wings and managing to hit her head on the ceiling of the bus. "[colour=#008080]Okay, ow[/colour]," she said cringing and rubbing her head with her hoof. She sucked in a breath and looked at Flash, still cringing a little from the pain her head was now feeling. "[colour=#008080]S'alright, Flashie. Accidents happen[/colour]," she said with a chuckle.

Welcome to Canterlot! If you're looking for a friend or someone to talk to, don't be a stranger Fluttershy's the bomb!!! And that's awesome that you like singing! Music is a huge part of my life Singing, violin, guitar, you name it!

Also, even though the divorce was a big event in Blizzy's life, the history section focuses a little too heavily on it. It would be awesome to hear a bit more about Blizzy and a bit less about her parents. Later in the app you say that Blizzy liked to be along as a foal. Maybe to get more about her into the history, you could tell us the story of when she started becoming more social? You don't have to if you don't feel like it, but that's just an idea on how to expand on that a little c: Okay, so just one last little thing- Cloudsdale's rain factory should be changed to Cloudsdale's weather factory, but it's totally cool to have her mum work in the rain section Blizzy's character summary is looking awesome!! Reading about her favorite bands made me giggle. The fog manipulation that her father did raise some question, but thinking about it, I don't see why a pegasus wouldn't be able to manipulate fog just the same as any other weather. I actually think that it's a really cool idea, and it seems extremely fitting for Haze to be from Las Pegasus!! It just really sounds like the kind of show that they would have there I know that it may seem like kind of a lot, but besides those it's looking fantabulous as far as I can see Asdfghjkl >.< I totally forgot about the snowflake thing! Alright, I'll go back and redo the cutie mark story. That might take some time though because now I have no idea what to do about her cutie mark story XD And I'll edit the history section to talk a bit more about Blizzy ^^" (And I'm glad you liked the band part ) Since I have school in a few hours, I won't have time to edit this right away.I'll try to edit it throughout to day, but most of it will have to wait until I get home, so bare with me XD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Okay, hopefully that fixes things. If there's still a problem with her cutie mark story, can you maybe give me some suggestions as to what I could do with it so I don't have to change her cutie mark or the part about her flying off? ^^" That would help me out a lot. (If there is still a prob with the cutie mark section, I think I might actually have something that could work, but suggestions would still be much appreciated ) Edit: -Changed Rain Factory to Weather Factory -Expanded the History section and added a picture -(Hopefully) Fixed her cutie mark story!

(Thanks, Slendy/Neo! XD That's awesome! This should make things very interesting >)

Fluttershy nodded at Time and left his office. "[colour=#ff6699]Oh, I hope nopony else has been taken by... by that horrible faceless thing[/colour][colour=#000000]," she said to herself with a shudder. "[/colour][colour=#ff6699]I should probably go check with my little friends in the Everfree and ask them if they've seen anything else strange and s-scary[/colour][colour=#000000]," she said, stumbling over the last word.[/colour] [colour=#000000]Soul howled with laughter as the boss frightened that pesky little mare and her odd green friend. "[/colour][colour=#cc0000]You really scared the hay out of them![/colour][colour=#000000]"[/colour]

Soul couldn't help but grin his trademark grin when Licorice greeted him. She really did seem to be different from all of the other mares he talked to. Soul opened his mouth, about to say something when another Host walked over. Shadow greeted the mares and then- are you kidding me?- kissed their hooves? It took a great deal of self control to keep from scowling or saying anything to Shadow when he kissed Licorice's hoof. He simply shrugged it off and approached the pony with the glasses. "[colour=#ff0000]Shadow, my man, what's going on[/colour][colour=#000000]?" Soul asked Shadow, holding his hoof out for a bro-hoof like he had for Scribbles.[/colour]

Alright, Stormy! It's ready to be reviewed

((Sorry I'm so late on this you guys XD I have a lot of stuff to make up and grades to bring up)) ((Also, I see what you did there, Stormy XD)) Blizzy was at a loss for words. In only a couple of hours, Blizzard had gone from finding the thought of socializing with anypony absolutely ridiculous to making several new friends and kissing the pony she'd developed a crush on several minutes before. She wasn't even weirded out! It was actually kind of... nice! She heard Flash say "[colour=#0000ff]wow[/colour][colour=#000000]," and she grinned and responded with, "[/colour][colour=#008080]Ditto[/colour][colour=#000000]."[/colour]

EEP! Your profile pic is Jolteon Can we be besties?!?! Welcome to Canterlot You sound like a very lively fun person to talk to If you're ever in need of somepony to chat with, don't be a stranger

((I'm definitely sure Knight did NOT kiss Blizzy XD))

Suddenly, Blizzy's mind went blank. She felt her emotions start to take control while she sat there, unaware of what was happening. Before she knew it, she was meeting Flash halfway, closing the space between them. Out of nervousness, her eyes clamped shut. She'd never kissed anypony before, so she had no idea how it was even supposed to go. ((Please excuse me while I drown in a sea of feels XD))

I'm aware that this app still needs a lot of work. I had to log off my laptop before I was able to complete all of the necessary fields and make adjustments. Also, I would like to request StarStorm as my RP Helper if that's alright

Roleplay Type: Mane RP Name: Blizzard Icewing (Blizzy for short) [colour=#000000]Sex: [/colour][colour=#000000]Female[/colour] Age: Young Filly Species: Pegasus Eye colour: Silver [colour=#000000]Coat:[/colour][colour=#000000] An icy blue. She has snow white freckles on either side of her face. Her nose is white, like it's been dipped in snow. She has a white triangular pattern going across the bottom of her hooves. She wears silver bracelets around one front hoof and the opposite rear hoof. Blizzy is often seen wearing a blue vest [/colour] Mane/Tail: Blizzy's mane is styled to make her look like a total rocker. Her mane and tail are white and sky blue. She has a medium length tail. Physique: Blizzy's a very decent height for her age. Though she was smaller than most when she was much younger, Blizzy grew to be slightly taller than average. She has a nice thin figure. Residence: On the edge of Cloudsdale during weekdays (Mother's house) Or in the heart of Viva Las Pegasus during weekends (Father's house) (Sorry ^^" Couldn't resist throwing the "Viva" in there) [colour=#000000]Occupation:[/colour][colour=#000000] Student in Flight School[/colour] Cutie Mark: [colour=#282828]Blizzy's cutie mark is a wintery tornado with snowflakes around it. Blizzy got her cutie mark by accident when she was a young foal. It was the same day her parents announced their decision to seperate. The heartbreaking news came from her mother, and was soon after confirmed by her father. Blizzy was so upset that she ran off, or rather flew off at top speed with her parents yelling after her with worried expressions. She ended up reaching speeds she never thought possible, and that's when it happened. Blizzy's anger made her fly faster and faster- until she crashed into a snow sculpture that a couple of foals had built. Realizing what she'd done, Blizzy apologized and promised the foals she'd rebuild the snow sculpture. Up until that point, Blizzy didn't know it was possible to be so artistic with snow. Blizzy kept her promise to the foals, rebuilding the sculpture, but she rebuilt it to be even better than the original! The small foals found themselves amazed with Blizzy's ability to create amazing art out of the powdery white snow.[/colour][colour=#282828] It was only when she finally calmed down and saw what she'd done that she became aware of her love of winter weather. Shortly after this happened, Blizzy noticed that her wintery cutie mark had appeared. After that, even when it wasn't winter anymore, Blizzy would tag along with her mum to the weather factory. While there, she'd usually go and watch ponies hand make the snowflakes and start taking care of details for the next year. Her super fast flying that day earned her a top spot on the Winter Wrap-up team at a young age. The winter colours of her cutie mark represent her love of the winter season, and the tornado part symbolizes her super fast flying abilities and incredible wing power.[/colour] History: Blizzard Icewing was born in Las Pegasus on the coldest day of winter. She was given her name because of the fact that she was born on the coldest day of the year, and at the time there was an ongoing blizzard. Her mother, Raini Daze, works in the Cloudsdale Weather Factory. Her Father works in Las Pegasus as an illusionist. He can create and manipulate fog, and over the years he's learned how to use it to create numerous illusions. When Blizzy was little, he would take Blizzy with him to many of his shows. When Blizzy when an older foal, she started to notice complications between her parents. (At this point in time, the three of them had moved to the outer part of Cloudsdale.) As time went on, the situation worsened and Raini suggested she and Blizzy's father split up. A week after deciding to go through with it, the two told Blizzy, and she got her cutie mark that same day. This was about the time when Blizzard began to develop a sense of social isolation. Simply put, the whole thing left her rather bummed out, and she didn't want to bother anypony outiside of her family with her troubles. When she was in school, she would put on a smile and act like everything was a-Okay. When she would return home, she'd usually end up locking herself in her room, blasting music and reading. On school trips, she'd opt for the back of the bus, and was content as long as she had her headphones and some music. After everything went down, Blizzy's father packed up and moved back to Las Pegasus. Raini and Blizzy remained in Cloudsdale with Raini working harder than ever at the Rain Factory. When asked who she wanted to live with until the split was finalized, Blizzy almost immediately chose her mother's side. She was all too hurt by what her father had done. A month after this, the split was finalized, and Blizzy would start spending weekends in Las Pegasus with her dad. Blizzy's relationship with Raini never really felt the impact of the separation. In fact, as Blizzy got older, Blizz and her mother began to develop a best-friend type relationship! They did more mother-daughter things together and Blizzy finally broke away from shutting herself in her room all the time. She was starting to explore the outside world a lot more, even making trips to Ponyville every once in a while to hit up the local music stores and chat with other music loving ponies. Eventually, Blizzy was able to work past her social isolation. As she grew older, Blizzy not only grew closer to her mother, but she began to realize that being totally alone is so, well, lonely. Her opinion on the matter changed one day during flight school. Blizz was stretching in preparation for a test run through an obstacle course (emphasis on "test"). She was patiently waiting for her turn to run the course when an older filly she recognized from her class approached her. The filly introduced herself as Skyla Nightwing. Not knowing what else to do (as well as not wanting to be rude), Blizzy introduced herself as well. Soon, the two were talking and laughing about the funny flying stories they were telling each other, and before Blizzy knew it, it was her turn to run the track. Skyla caught up with Blizzy on the way home from flight school that same day, and Blizzy began to realize that she actually enjoyed being in the company of another pony. After that, Blizzy and Skyla became best friends and are practically inseparable. Blizzy's life now is a lot more stable. She enrolled in flight school after the split-up and is in the process of trying to start up her own flight team. As a foal, Blizzy tended to be extremely distant towards anypony and everypony, and disliked the idea of making friends. Now, however, Blizzy has many wonderful friends (including Skyla) that she says she couldn't live without, and she's more comfortable meeting new ponies. Character Summary: Blizzy is very much a tomcolt. She always tries to look her best and loves to accessorize, but that's about as far as her feminine side goes. Blizzy loves hanging out with the guys, discussing which bands are the edgiest and loudest, and having burp-offs. She's not afraid to get her hooves dirty and loves the outdoors. In a group of ponies, Blizz will be the one to come up mischievous plans that other ponies might find a bit dangerous or risky, and they'd probably be right. Basically, she's the pony you don't want to invite to any high class Canterlot event. Why? Because she hates the idea of being "prim and proper." She marches to the beat of her own drum. She'd rather be loud, be proud, and be herself and not have to hold back than be subjected to a strict standard of social class life. She's also the kind of pony that'll try anything once. In the past, Blizzy had an extremely hard time making friends. In fact, she wasn't to fond of the idea of making friends. Now, she likes making a new friend from time to time. Blizzy has a couple different talents, one of them being she has no problem at all being herself. Her main talent is her insane artistic abilities when it comes to snow sculpting and anything wintery! Blizzy's also extremely good at playing drums (so she kind of literally marches to the beat of her own drum.) And of course, let's not forget her fast flying abilities! A lot of Blizzy's motivation comes from her friends and her mum (and her dad, though she'll rarely admit it), and what drives her motivation is the fact that she's very persistent. She keep at something until she's able to get it right. One of her biggest dreams is to have her own flight team someday soon. She wants to create the fastest flight team Equestria's ever seen. Blizzy likes snow, moderately chilly weather, flying at fast speeds, free falling (she loves the adrenaline), taking risks, rock music/ garage band music, her Hoof-Beats (headphones), and drumming pony-style, as well as anything that makes her come off as a tomcolt. She also lovess accessorizing, i.e. her blue vest and hoof bracelets. Her favorite bands include (but are not limited to) The All-Equestrian Rejects, The Mane, Colts like Fillies, Hoof Eleven, Bowling for Hay, Secondhoof Serenade, We the Alicorns and Fall Out Colt. Blizzy dislikes extremely hot weather, classical music (unless it's classic rock like The Beastie Colts), and ponies who think they're so much better than everypony else. Blizzy has her strong points, but she has her faults as well. She's extremely stubborn, and while she's become so much better at socializing with other ponies, she can still act extremely distant at times. Blizzy has terrible organization skills. She often acts and speaks before thinking about what she's about to do or say, and that can and has gotten her into trouble. What most ponies don't know about Blizzy is what she fears. What Blizzy fears more than anything else is being alone again. While she used to love being alone when she was a foal, Blizzy came to realize that being all alone isn't such a good thing. She fears that there will come a time when she has nopony to turn to for help, comfort, guidance, she fears losing her friends and family and just being completely alone. She also fears that she'll fail at accomplishing her goals and dreams and let everypony she cares about down in the process. She's also afraid of spiders and intense silence.

FLUTTERSHY IS THE BOMB.COM! Heya, Icebeam! Welcome to Canterlot! If you're looking to make some new friends, don't be afraid to drop by and say hi!

"Haha, you have to- wait what?!" Blizzy asked In surprise as she realized what Broken had dared Flash to do. The icy pony felt her coat turn a bright red. True, she hadn't had a crush on him for that long, but in all honesty, her heart was beating a mile a minute at the thought of Flash kissing her. Would she ever admit that? No, probably not. Even so... While all of this as going on, somepony on the bus passed out. Blizzy heard the loud thud followed by several gasps, but all she was able to think about was Flash's dare.

Another new pony friend? HUZZAH! Let there be cake! Cake is good, right? I like cake Heya! Welcome to Canterlot (Not gonna lie, I almost typed Ponyville for some reason XD Woopsy daisy!) Hope you enjoy it here! And if you're in need of a friend, never be afraid to drop by and say hi!

HI! HAVE CAKE! *flees* Sorry XD I'm kinda really hyper tonight. ANYWAYS. Welcome to Canterlot, my good man! I hope you have a splendid time here!

And on this day of the new pony's arrival, everypony shouted a loud "HUZZAH!" and Grimshy yelled to everypony far and wide, "LET THERE BE CAKE!" XD Yeah, I have no idea what that was. Either way, welcome to Canterlot! Hope you have fun here, and if you're looking for a friend, don't be afraid to stop by and say hello!

Welcome to Canterlot, Diz! If you're looking for a friend or somepony to talk to, don't be a stranger

((Hey, whoever's turn it is to do the truth or dare, make sure to include Gear and anypony else who hasn't had a turn yet! We don't want anypony to feel left out ))

"Hm? O-oh, yes, sir. I /am/ part of the investigation team." She knew that he must've been wondering how the hay a timid scaredy mare such as herself ended up being recruited to the investigation team. Even /she/ wondered that from time to time. All the time actually. But, she digressed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Who's there? WHO'S THERE?" Soul bellowed, followed by more insane laughter. The laughter went on for a few seconds and then stopped. It was another minute or so before Soul finally answered, making his voice carry so that it sounded like his voice was coming from all directions of the forest. "Why, I'm your worst nightmare."