Monochrome

((It's not a dog, it just acts sort of like a dog.))

It looked at him and eagerly approached him, like a playful puppy meeting someone new. "Oh, yes, I forgot to mention my experiments. This adorable little creature is Physical Dementia, one of my earlier creations." Mech remarked.

Once they had gathered enough of the odd blue plant, they returned to Mech's mansion. Bronzeshine immediately noticed something strange. A small creature stood by the door- a creature that could only be described as looking like the front halves of two foals sewn together at the stomach.

Nopony?

I have to say, Slenderman doesn't really scare me. My friend is completely paranoid about him, but I am really unaffected by the idea of him, even after a few episodes of Marble Hornets.

I must say, as a complete newbie at critiquing histories, I'm not quite sure what to look for in a good history. However, personally, I really like Errare. (Rp with me sometime, maybe? ) My only issue would be that, although you are entitled to your own crack pairings/fan shippings/whatever you want to call them, I'm not too keen on the idea that she is the daughter of Discord and Pinkamena. Also, could you elaborate on how exactly that dimension changed her eye color?

Oops, sorry! XD I forget WAY too many things. Let me look over that one more time, will respond soon.

I'm thinking of making a diamond dog oc, but I'm not at all sure what would be considered canon for them. Help?

Fix what? I meant the character, the spelling, and the all caps in what the link led to. XD

Xera nimbly scales the stone giant just before it fell, realizing that a wooden staff wasn't going to do much against something made of solid rock. She tumbled off of the giant and landed on her feet. The wolf shouted something, and Xera looked around. Her? Her who? She looked around, confused, and as her undead companions grew in numbers to secure the behemoth wouldn't move, she noticed an old woman. She wound her way through the growing crowd of creatures and grabbed her, lugging her to a safer spot near the foliage.

@ Shinygear's last post (Sorry, on phone, quote button doesn't work): Oh my glob, WHAT DID I JUST READ?! *head explodes* That link, I mean. O_O

spontaneously

Oh, cool, I never noticed that! Awesome.

Xera looked up at who had just approached her, who seemed to be a wolf of some sort. He asked for help, and Xera glanced at the stone behemoth before nodding and baring her wooden staff. She rushed at it, surprised to find that creatures were heaving themselves out of the ground around her and mobbing the giant. Did I do that? she thought as the undead creatures rushed, albeit a bit slowly, beside her into battle.

What? Batponies? Why have I not heard of this?

Xera watched as the rabbit scrambled away in a panic, and immediately knew that something was very wrong. She unsheathed her staff and slowly peeked through the leaves, only to see what appeared to be two people fighting a stone giant. Xera tried to step back, but tripped and tumbled forward into the clearing instead.

(Great! Thanks~) Xera slowly awoke, finding herself in a gnarled old tree. She stretched out her large black wings and smoothed down her tail feathers, which stuck out of a neatly cut hole in her simple white dress. She couldn't seem to remember anything, and she decided her first order of business should be to find out where she was. She slowly stood up, noticing that a staff was strapped to her back in a leather sheath. She slid it out of the sheath and slowly examined its smooth wood surface, which thickened to a gnarled spiral at the top. She put it back and fluttered down to the ground, a bit clumsily. She noticed something moving through the foliage. "Hello?" she called, hoping whatever it was would not be hostile.

Must be one awesome person, judging by the profile pic.

((Ooh, changing my element to darkness because, hey, ravens are associated with bad luck and death, so why not let her raise the dead? ))

((Name: Xera Gender: female race: raven weapon type: staff element: how does this work? Like in Avatar? If so, air. personality: mischievous, fun-loving, but can be very serious when needed ))

Kumquats

"Yeah, sure! I'm starving!" Monochrome said cheerfully. "Is the kid coming with us?" she added with an apologetic half-smile to the little unicorn.