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( ok. ) the wagon draws to a close at the center of town. an executioner stood there with a large axe. a priest starts talking as the prisoners were unloaded. " as we commend your souls to etherius... "

( please do. )

bronzeshine sat up a little higher. if he was responsible for the people here than he would have to remain vigilant. he tried to comfort hearth as best as he could without speaking. but he did whisper into her ear. " when I say go you run as fast as you can. it may take a few minutes but be ready. " bronzeshine looked at the final member of the wagon. ( can you invite someone? )

bronzeshine surveyed the guards around him. to escape know would require split second timing, special supplies, and total synchronization with all four of the members on the cart. witch without a specially trained team, was almost impossible. " don't worry. we'll see were they are taking us and once we reach the destination we will escape as a group. " the guard driving the cart says. " shut up back there! " then went back to his work.

bronzeshine put his hand on her shoulder. " oh come on. I'll get you out of here, that's a promise. " bronzeshine didn't talk to her about her family. mostly because he hardly knew his. he jut figured that if they focus on the task at hand. everything would fall into place.

" oh. um... " bronzeshine rubbed his neck. he should have expected depression on a prisoner transport. he scoots a little closer his shackles rattling loudly. " ever since what? "

" that's good. " bronzeshine knew about her head. but out of curtacy didn't mention it. " I wouldn't suppose you have anything that can help us out of this predicament? " he looks at her horn. " like a knife, magic, or some friends who are setting up a ambush? " said bronzeshine. he was almost certain that she didn't but it never hurt to have all of your options in order.

" oh for what? looking at me? that's fine. " bronzeshine tried to shake her hand but his chains were to tight. " I wish we could have met in a more favorable situation. but fates fate. are you ok? "

( you'll be a valuable addition. waiting for one more player. you can still rp in the wagon. )

all of the prisoners sat in a wagon with a four person space. they were chained together at the ankle's. bronzeshines hands were shakled rather than tied as he had earlier snapped his ropes and attacked one of their unicorn captors. ( the empire in this case will be replaced by the unicorns, nords Pegasus, you do not haved to be a unicorn to be in the empire but most are part unicorn. some with the Pegasus stormclokes ) bronzeshine had finally given up braking his shackles and turned to aurora. " so why are you here? "

( your application is good. but has one flaw. illusion is in your major and minor skills. we will leave the wagon when we have either 3 or 4 players. )

A long time ago. Equestria was filled with great peril. Nobles bickered, clan wars raged, and crime was rampant. Celestia and Luna have yet to be born for several hundred years. We need hero's. equestria needs you! Applications Name: bronzeshine Race: Pegasus Skyrim race: ( half and half with your pony race. ) Nordic Major skills: ( choose 3 from here http://www.uesp.net/wiki/Skyrim:Skills ) heavy armor, two handed, smithing Minor skills: ( choose another 3 from here http://www.uesp.net/wiki/Skyrim:Skills ) block, one handed, archery. History: bronzeshine was born into an evil family of thieves and cultists. He spent most of his life training and he few known freinds. But he himself is not evil. He is a force of good. An amazing warrior and smith. Dream: to liberate equestria and be forever remembered in the history books. Every pony starts at their execution.

Thank you.

has this started? if so then were can I join?

( is this anthro? ) bronzeshine stood there with his rifle. he was inspecting the area around him for his one true fear, rad scorpions. when he sees the friendly pony he waves at her and approaches. " what brings you to this part of the wasteland?

name: bronzeshine species: Pegasus specialization: tie jutsu history: born an orphan. he had always had powers that were not chakra related. because of this he was set back in his chakra development. so he has honed himself to near super human limits. like many ninja before him. ninja way: to always do right no matter what. bronzeshine walked into the assignment office to be placed in a team. he passed by the skin of his teeth through tie jutsu alone. today was the day were all of the junior ninja were assigned their teams and teachers.( correct me if I called them the wrong thing. ) he had a seat though the groups had not been chosen yet. he talked to the pony next to him, and that pony was you. " hello. my names bronzeshine, who are you? " ( bluestreak and pyro blaze made applications to. if they want to play then I will have to ask them to resubmit them. )

Name: bronzeshine Gender:male Pony race:Pegasus Non-pony race: turian Mass Effect class: infiltrator What they were doing before being sucked into the mass effect universe: making a set of armor in his smithy. hey guys! I love mass effect so I hope I can join.

" pony ville is under siege! grab a weapon and help me out. "

the history's intricate as any other. but he needs a key event, something that made him who he is. also traits. history of any kind can be spiced up with a defining trait. i.e. super greedy, always helps others, is manipulative. sometimes history is unconnected to there personality. also on a side note. your spelling needs some work, I don't say this often because I am not the worlds best speller. but pleas look over your post's and make sure you can read it. I sometimes have to read them over three times before I understand it. no offence have a good day.

"well. we could check the body's of Luna's guard and there rooms. we could track down were they dragged celestia to."

" ok so I think we should follow the trail left by the kidnappers. "

( don't worry about it. ) and just like that it was over. she could now shape shift into any number of small animal. " sorry. it's like a band aid, if you do it quick its over in an instant. lets get to business shall we? "

bronzeshine comes out of his smithy with a cart full of weaponry for any pony's who want to fight. " form your ranks on me! arm yourselves! " he was in a set of armor that he made himself. nothing amazing, but better then nothing. he drew his sword and settled into a fighting position.

" ok then. hwwwya " black smoke comes out of bronzeshines face from every hole. hit fly's strait into her nose has the information and power was forced into her mind. it hurt quite substantially.

( I just got rid of that bad post up there. you were right. ) " up here dumb nuts! " said bronzeshine grunting as if he was attacking her as to make the illusion seem more real.