Looking like a fantastic application so far, only one or two criticisms to mention. Has his experiences during his foal-hood effected him in away? Does he not like to talk about his family? Does being an Earth Pony hinder his performance as a cook making cook slower or more clumsily? It would also be nice to see his personality come to life as well because so far it is describing his past life, so just place things like his possible interactions with other ponies and other things like his viewpoint towards his condition (whether he likes to avoid the topic, finds it awkward when it happens when he's talking to another pony or is in public). Anyway besides that, this application is looking really good it's refreshing to see a pony from somewhere different *puts hipster glasses on* those other places are far too mainstream for me ... so yeah, goodluck can't wait to see this application passed.