SonicRainboomGirl Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 Hi there! I posted this on FimFiction today, and it's gotten a bit of attention. I'm lovin' it SO, if you want to read it and/or critique it, here it is!http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39208/Shy-Kisses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PurpleBird Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 Awwe. I thought that was quite cute to read! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronynumber299 Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 I loved it it was beautiful.And did I hear a Bon Bon and Lyra version coming?Huh huuuuuh?No but it was awesome I'm still smiling.I now want to do a shipfic somebody already gave me a character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 It was very sweet.I think you could easily break out some chapters and tell a lot more of the story. I got the feeling that there was a lot more happening in your head than made it onto the page...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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