AceOfSpades1309 Posted September 2, 2012 Report Share Posted September 2, 2012 Roleplay Type: World of Equestria RPName: SeraphinaSex: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: UnicornEye Color: BlueCoat Color: Sky BlueMane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Both her mane and tail are a mix of white and bright yellowPhysique: Average built for a mare her ageCutie Mark: A red heart, with an arrow through it, surrounded by white and yellow hearts. The red heart represents her kind heart and little hearts surrounding the bigger heart represents all the foals she wants to take care of. And the arrow means she will always protect her foals from harm.Origin/Residence: Born and raised in Manehatten, moving to a different town for the summer to intern with anypony who accepts her intern request.Occupation: A college student majoring in Early Foal Development; has sent out requests to different school teachers and daycare owners asking if she could intern with them for the summer.Motivation: Wants to open her own day care center for foals back in her hometown of ManehattenLikes: Taking care of foals, watching the clear night sky, especially with a full moon.Character Summary:Born in Manehatten, Seraphina was mostly raised by her grandfather, her parents always being busy trying make ends meet. They weren't neglectful, just tried their hardest to make sure she got what she needed.Seraphina never was mad at her parents for their lack of time with her. She enjoyed her time with her grandfather. Their favorite activity together was watching the night sky, especially when there was a full moon out.One day when Seraphina was filly, she was walking home from school, when she found a young foal, lost and alone in an allyway. Knowing she just couldn't leave the little foal by herself, she convinced the foal to come with her to the police department.Even after delivering the foal to the police station, she refused to leave the foal by herself, wanting to make sure the foal was alright. When the foal's parents finally arrived to pick up the foals, they thanked her very much for tender love and caring. It was at the point when she got her Cutie Mark.Even though she's great with foals, she was a shy pony. Not as shy as Fluttershy, but shy nonetheless. She also has some self-esteem issuses, due to nopony, or nocolt rather, taking an interest in her in high school.Because of this, she doesn't think she herself is pretty, even though a few ponies keep telling her she's beautiful. So she mostly focuses on her goal of opening up a daycare center for foals.She took an Early Foal Development class right out of high school. The class required a year of interning at either a school or day care. So she has sent out letters to different teachers and daycare centers, requesting internship.She will be moving to whatever town accepts her intern request, at least until her internship is over, after which she hopes to return to her hometown of Manehatten and finish her college courses so that she can finally open up her daycare center. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TemplarFrost Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Born and raised in Manehatten, moved to Ponyvilleto intern with CheerileeI'm no helpstaff, but I am pretty sure that you are not allowed to have relations with Canon characters. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceOfSpades1309 Posted September 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Thank you TemplarFrost, I've changed it to make sure she has no connection with Cheerilee. I've also finished the rest of the character summary, so I've changed it to the final application. Hopefully it gets accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted September 6, 2012 Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 Hi Ace!Looking over this app, I like this character and the overall positive tone!The cutie mark story is brief, but very touching!All of the fields have been properly filled out,One point I am a bit confused about though. You say she's basically a student-intern. Does this mean she's still in 'Grad School' and interning during the 'summer' or has she finished school and is looking for her first teaching job?I know this is a minor point, but I'm curious about that. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceOfSpades1309 Posted September 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2012 She's still a college student, yes. She's doing this to earn credits to finish her degree and get her certificate. Gonna fix it to make it sound better. Thank you so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flutterscotch Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 She seems all enthusiastic like a young college student kind of just starting out in the world should. It would be nice to see how she deals with troublesome or mischievous foals, it would further cement her personality, but I don't feel it's strictly necessary to approve this And just as a design nitpicky suggestion, simplifying the cutie mark design just a little bit (no black outlines, and maybe fewer outlying hearts) would make it more cohesive and in line with the art on the show.Nice work, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceOfSpades1309 Posted September 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 My reaction to my app begin accepted:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9DoEAnb_bWY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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