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Invasion: The Fall of Equestria ('Revolution' Part Two OOC: Closed. Please refer to new OOC)


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The Invasion has begun!

Prologue:

Six years ago, the land of Equestria was changed forever. Months after the infamous Royal Wedding fiasco with the Changelings, the common populace of Equestria became dissatisfied under the rule of the Princesses. The Principality had finally started to display weakness, and many ponies were finally realizing the problem with their current government. At first, small politcal groups began to appear from the many corners of Equestria, each pushing for a new change in government. Many suggestions were sent to the Princesses...all of which were denied. After a time, the parties began to become aggravated by the deliberate ignorance of the Principality, and separatists started spreading propaganda against the current rulers of Equestria. Difficulties between the Princesses and the common rabble grew to such a degree, that full-separation ensued.

The cities of Manehatten and Stalliongrad were the very first to attempt a succession from the rest of Equestria, forming their own internal governments and forming an alliance with each other for survival. It was at this point that the Principality finally took action. Gathering two separate armies, Princesses Celestia and Luna moved to the cities in hopes of regaining control. When negotiations failed...they resorted to brute force. The order was given to exterminate any who got in their way, and resulted in what would later be named the 'Great Purge'. With the destruction of Manehatten and Stalliongrad, what the Princesses had hoped to extinguish only fueled the flames of anger within most of Equestria...setting the stage of events that would lead to the Principality's destruction.

It was during this time of strife that a mysterious organization known as the N.E.O. (New Equestrian Order) first appeared. They preached and spread ideas of revolution, recruiting and expanding their influence across the continent. Before long, their strength had grown so great that they willingly waged war against the Principality...with the Changelings as their new allies. The leader of the N.E.O., Red Fox, led the charge against the Princesses with knowledge and power few others possessed. It became the rallying general of the Revolution, and it was the Red Fox's actions which brought an end to the old Equestria. Several battles ensued, creating scars on Equestria's landscape that would never be healed, one of which included the destruction of Ponyville and the annihilation of what used to be the Everfree Forest (now the Everfree Wastes, a dust-ridden badlands). After six months of struggle and bloodshed, the Revolution came to an end with the pillaging of Canterlot, and the execution of the Princesses.

Five years had passed since then, and Equestria has never been stronger. Under the leadership and guidance of the G.E.F. (Grand Equestrian Federation, formerly the N.E.O.), the scarred nation prospered and grew, technology advancing at a rapid rate and industrialization inevitable. Despite the stability that the G.E.F. brought, there were others who were still loyal to the memory of the Princesses, and they were resolute against the newly-formed government. The R.L.F. (Royal Liberation Front, made of former R.E.A. mostly) spear-headed the fight against the G.E.F., and once more the nation was a battleground...if in a more secret, cell-like sense. Tensions rise, and the battle for control of Equestria begins.

'Part 1: Revolution' Story Recap:

The struggle begins as members of each faction began to proceed with their plans and operations; the G.E.F. search and root out several R.L.F. in a massive operation, severely damaging the loyalist group. Meanwhile, a mysterious group known only as 'Freelancer' began to raid secret G.E.F. scientific facilities, leaving no trace of their attacks or even of their presence. However, they were eventually discovered when the Red Fox and it's right-hoof stallion, Chronarch, arrived at a latest raid. Using his time-altering magic, Chronarch revealed the Freelancer unit which had attacked. With this revelation, the Red Fox sent young Shade Corps agent Applebloom to do recon on the organization.

Shortly after, the general of the R.L.F., Free Quickhoof, escaped from Nightwatch Prison within the G.E.F. capital of Equinia (which lies on top of where Canterlot once existed) with the help of the warden, Big Macintosh. With his escape, he searches the city for Princess Cadence, who is rumored to still be alive. He finds her at the home of an old stallion named Gladius (who had once been an old friend of his) with the Changeling Queen, Chrysalis. Forming an alliance with the Changelings, the R.L.F. general helps Gladius and Cadence escape Equinia, so that they may meet up with the R.L.F.'s second-in-command, Commander Applejack, at Neighagra Falls. It is revealed that Gladius had been the one who had executed the Princesses, but had done so only to save the lives of Ponyville's citizens, and that the Princesses had asked him to do so. They arrive at Neighagra Falls, while the Red Fox returns to Equinia and summons the seven Chancellors which served as governors across Equestria...Rainbow Dash being the Chancellor which handled Equinia's affairs.

Once the Chancellors convene, the Red Fox reveals itself to be none other than...Twilight Sparkle, former student of Princess Celestia. With her finally out of the shell of the Red Fox, she sends a message out on all communication channels in Equestria, announcing that the Red Fox is dead and that peace negotiations were to occur between the G.E.F. and the other factions. Three days later, the L.E.H. (Last Equestrian Hope), R.L.F., and G.E.F. factions convened at Starlight Hill, a sanctuary of peace and perfect place for negotiations. However, during the negotiations, Equinia is attacked by an unknown force...and almost totally destroyed. The factions rush to the city in need, only to find it filled with unnatural fires, and each work together to put out the fires and save as many lives as possible. Twilight's adopted foal, Azure, is presumed dead or kidnapped by the same perpetrator of the 'Equinian Apocalypse'. In order to save the city, Rainbow Dash took a magical artifact from the Federation's hidden cache and used its magic to extinguish all the fires...but fell into a coma due to the massive amount of energy used.

Two days later, a mysterious stallion known as 'The Prophet of Redemption' emerges, and begins to rile up the populace to go against the Federation and the other factions who remained in the ruined city. He then summons the leaders of each faction...and reveals to them the identity of the creature who had caused the destruction; an Alicorn relative of the Princesses named Pierrot, and that he planned to conquer Equestria in search of something known only as the 'Goliath' so that he may rule the world. The Prophet's real name was Lunar Cross, former guard captain of Princess Luna's personal guard and one of the founders of the Federation (and rumored ex-lover of Twilight Sparkle). He disappears, and the factions separate momentarily to prepare.

However, the invasion had happened sooner than they believed...far to the north, where the Changeling Royal Hive stood, was soon attacked by one of Pierrot's many armies (which had been taken from the Crystal Empire). Led by two of his children, Despair and Misery, they destroyed the Royal Hive and nearly wipe-out the Changeling race. With the resolution of this battle, Chrysalis and the few survivors disappeared, and Despair laid dying. Their original goal was to obtain the Tartarus Gate beneath the Hive, so that they can gain entrance and control of the Underworld. Now, Misery has activated the Tartarus Gate with her brother's blood...and the war begins.

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Applications and Information in the post below.

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Hello, everyone! Part One of the 'Revolution Trilogy' has finally ended, and as a result Part Two will be open very soon. In this new chapter of the story, there will be all kinds of new struggles, drama, romance, and violence...mmm...yummy violence. Anyway, there will be some special new additions to the second chapter, Invasion:

1. Brand new Character Bios which will be displayed on this OOC. This way, character information can be organized easily and available to the current RPers. Plus, this would leave space for more to be added later!

2. New Faction details and Sub-Factions will also be added, so that there is a wider variety of positions and subtypes for new players to join.

3. Special Story Arcs will be created for players to sign-up for and participate in, some of which can be hosted by fellow RPers! Each Story Arc will significantly impact the progress of 'Invasion', and can influence the main plot as well. Anything can happen.

4. With the new Sub-Faction system, players can now form their own 'squads' for use during the 'Invasion' conflict. Since this is a full-scale war, there are bound to be many missions and battles that will occur, each with their own endings. This is linked to the Story Arcs, and there can be exclusive Story Arcs for certain 'squads' who ask for it.

5. Pierrot, the main villain, also has need of a few allies...would you care to be one of them? The hunt for the Goliath is dangerous indeed, and the ignorant Equestrians stand in your King's way. Aid the Heir to the World in his quest to conquer Equestria...and obtain the power and wealth of your dreams.

Next come Applications, and here is what I am looking for:

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Race:

Faction:

Sub-Faction:

Place of Birth/Starting Location:

Physical Appearance:

Cutie Mark (If available):

History (Back Story):

That is pretty much it so far. If you'd like to add an illustration to it, please do :) we have a comic-artist working on this, and I'm sure he would appreciate any aid with that.

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Members of the Grand Equestrian Federation (G.E.F.):

Twilight Sparkle: Former student of Celestia and once the Red Fox, she is the commander-in-chief of the G.E.F.. Before the Revolution, she and a friend had traveled to an ancient ruin for research, and while there she had released the Old God, Herald, one of Discord's siblings. Herald showed Twilight a vision of Equestria's destruction in the future, and in order to prevent it, she made a deal with him, becoming the Red Fox and leading the Revolution. She is now free of the deal, and has full control over herself once more.

Rainbow Dash: An old friend of Twilight's and Chancellor of Equinia, she serves as a general and governor in the G.E.F.. She is the swiftest flier in Equestria, and (surprisingly) has displayed skill in political maneuvering.

Chronarch: A unicorn who once lived in Equestria 500 years in the past, he was imprisoned in a time-warped cell by Celestia, and was later released by Twilight during the Revolution. Being the long-distant ancestor of Twilight, he also has prowess in magic (although focused on time and space), and serves as her right-hoof stallion and Federal Archmage.

Draxis: A changeling Hive-lord who managed to break himself and his hive away from Chrysalis' hive-mind with the aid of the Federation, he and his brood now serve as loyal allies of the G.E.F. and he himself acts as the captain of the guard in Equinia. However, that may change soon with the upcoming war. He and his hive felt none of the effects of the Royal Hive's destruction.

Draco: A pony/dragon hybrid, he works alongside Draxis in protecting the citizens of Equinia and maintaining order. Recently he has been training with the L.E.H. so that he may fully learn his draconic abilities.

Members of the Royal Liberation Front (R.L.F.):

Free Quickhoof (Deceased): The former commander of the R.L.F. and rumored ex-lover of Luna, he had committed suicide shortly before the Royal Hive destruction. The reasons as to why are currently unknown, but it is speculated to be related to Luna.

Applejack: New commander of the R.L.F. and ex-member of the Mane Six, she took command along with Colonel Striker when Free passed away. Now, she and her faction prepare for the battle against Pierrot.

Lavender Bloom: Younger sister of Free Quickhoof and member of the Eternium Brigade, she was kept as a secret by her brother so as to protect her during the G.E.F./R.L.F. conflict. Witnessing her brother's suicide, she blamed it on Twilight Sparkle, and as a result harbors hatred for the unicorn.

Star Striker: A fierce, emotionally scarred warrior who had once been a member of the R.E.A., he had lost his love during the Revolution, and had ever since harbored a hatred for the Red Fox. This hatred transfered to Twilight when he found out that she had been the Red Fox. However, those feelings of hate have gradually changed into something else; love, perhaps? Or desire? He now serves as co-leader beside Applebloom of the R.L.F. after Free's death.

Members of the Last Equestrian Hope (L.E.H.):

Karrthus (Spike): Main leader of the L.E.H. and a hellkite dragon, he was once Twilight Sparkle's best friend (still is?) and views her as his adoptive mother. He had gone his separate way with Scootaloo when Twilight 'disappeared' during the Revolution. Finding a disorganized L.E.H., he transformed it into the faction it is today.

Kaalia (Scootaloo): Fellow leader of the L.E.H. and Karrthus' lover, she was transformed into a dragon/pony hybrid when she had been healed of a fatal wound by Karrthus. Alongside him, she serves as the main trainer and leader of the Dragon Knights.

Members of the Freelancers:

The Director: A figure shrouded in mystery, he is the head of Freelancer. Little is known about him except that he is an equine and male. More information may be known amongst Freelancer Agents, but not much more.

Agent Virginia (Applebloom): Former Shade Corps agent, she had changed sides shortly after being captured by Freelancer while spying on their facility. No one knows why she switched sides, for she keeps it to herself. However, it is rumored she has a lover amongst the lower agents of Freelancer.

Agent 4-6-9er (Harmony): A fighter-pilot in Freelancer, she is a flying ace and veteran of the organization. She is paired often with Agent Virginia for missions, and flies a Freelancer Dropship.

Members of Salus Umbra:

The Oracle: Unicorn Grand Master of the Sun and leader of the organization. He has been alive for thousands of years.

Salmhofer: Changeling Grand Mistress of the Moon, she is second eldest and serves as the Oracle's voice.

Malzahar: Zebra Grand Master of Magic, he gathers both knowledge and magical power from around the world.

Ki'Tal Earth Pony Grand Master of Water, he roams the oceans and rivers as a guardian for the mainland. Twin brother of Vo'Tal.

Vo'Tal Earth Pony Grand Master of Fire, he safeguards the places under the earth. Twin of Ki'Tal.

Azrael: Griffon Grand Master of Wind, he is the best fighter and military expert, as well as the guardian of the skies. He is wrapped entirely in enchanted steel armor.

Lienna: Pegasus Grand Mistress of Life, she looks vaguely similar to Fluttershy (but isn't), her duty is to keep the world alive and growing, something that has become difficult due to the fading energy in the earth.

Shining Armor: Unicorn Grand Master of Death, he watches over the Underworld and sends the dead to their rightful place. He is the elder brother of Twilight and former husband of Cadence, and was once captain of the Canterlot Royal Guard.

Members of the Crystal Empire (Pierrot's Forces):

Pierrot: Son of the Alicorn King and elder brother of Celestia and Luna. He has become driven with ambition, searching for the 'Goliath' left behind by his father in the hopes of ruling the world. He is invading Equestria, believing the 'Goliath' lies in waiting there.

Misery: Daughter of Pierrot and sister of Despair, after the destruction of the Royal Hive, she used her brother's blood to activate the Tartarus Gate, bringing forth an army of formerly-dead monsters, reviving her brother in the process. Now, she is referred to by the Chevaliers as 'Mother'.

Despair: Son of Pierrot and brother of Misery, after the destruction of the Royal Hive he had died in the battle with Chrysalis. Now, revived by his sister as a Chevalier, only two things drive him; revenge on Chrysalis, and the desire to make his sister's wishes come true.

Luna: Former Princess of Equestria and younger sister of Celestia and Pierrot, she has been brought back from death as a Chevalier, and serves as a general in Pierrot's armies. Similar with Despair, her goal is the fulfillment of Misery's wishes and revenge upon Twilight Sparkle, who had ended her and her sister's lives.

(More bios will be added in the future)

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The Grand Equestrian Federation (G.E.F.): Established shortly after the demise of the Principality, the Federation has served Equestria as a defensive army and uncorrupt political system. While the Federation has helped the regrowth of Equestria exponentially, non-ponies are often disregarded as unimportant compared to actual ponies (except in the recent few weeks). Originally formed from the New Equestrian Order, they have maintained order within Equestria since the Revolution, and act as Equestria's main military body. Leadership is by Twilight Sparkle and seven Chancellors (One of them is Rainbow Dash).

The Shade Corps (G.E.F.): An elite special forces unit created by the Federation, they are the result of extreme conditioning and superior combat training, as well as magical enhancement. Shade Corps agents are characterized by their lack of emotion, incapability to feel pain, and their total loyalty to the Federation. Created by Twilight Sparkle when she was the Red Fox, they were first used as body guards, but eventually grew into a spy-network and black ops organization. After the 'Equinian Apocalypse', most of the Shade Corps was destroyed, and as a result they resorted back to their old positions as Twilight's body guards.

The Moon Guard (G.E.F.): A specialized group of unicorns that are trained to master both technological weaponry and advanced magic, they act as the official super-warriors of the Federation. Recently created to battle against the Pierrot threat, they are taught and funded by Salus Umbra as a gift to the Federation. The Moon Guard now serve as the fore-front commanders and unit leaders for the G.E.F.'s combined forces.

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The Royal Liberation Front (R.L.F.): Created from the remnants of the Royal Equestrian Army after the Revolution, this group of Principality loyalists have waged a war of attrition against the G.E.F. for five years. Now, hostilities have been drawn to a close due to the danger presented by Pierrot. They are led by commanders Applejack and Striker (for Free had committed suicide only a short time ago).

The Eternium Brigade (R.L.F.): Another gift from Salus Umbra, these highly trained soldiers act as the most devoted and particularly brutal fighters against the Crystal Empire. For the Brigade, each mission is to be completed...or die in order to succeed. Often considered martyrs, none can match their ferocity at the battlefront.

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The Last Equestrian Hope (L.E.H.): A mixed group of ponies and civilized dragons, they were once a very vicious and hyper-aggressive faction, but now act in the search of peace for Equestria. During the G.E.F.'s reign, dragon hunts were conducted to be rid of the violent creatures, but a few remained among the L.E.H.. Unlike the R.L.F., they hold nothing against the G.E.F. save a few policies, for they agree that the Princesses had to be dethroned, and that many dragons had to be sent away from Equestria. They are commanded by Karrthus (Spike) and Kaalia (Scootaloo).

The Dragon Knights (L.E.H.): A unique group of half-draconic ponies, they possess many of the powers and traits of dragons, while retaining some-what equine shape. They are powerful, intelligent, and highly skilled, and almost always use old-fashioned weapons instead of firearms. Salus Umbra had created special armor plating for the Dragon Knights that not only enhanced their powers, but also gave them the ability to transform into full dragons.

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The Freelancers (F.L.): An extremely secretive organization that had existed only a short while before the Principality's fall, they are the most technologically advanced (if smallest) faction in Equestria. Like the G.E.F., they are a very pony-supremacist group, and as a result only allow equines into their confines. First a scientific experiment, they emerged from the ashes of the Principality and grew into a super-cell of agents, all under the command of the mysterious 'Director'.

The Agents (F.L.): Freelancer's top agents and super-soldiers, there are only fifty of them at a time (for each agent is given the name of a state within the United States, odd eh? :3 Ex. Agent Virginia). They are highly trained, professional spies and killers, each with their own specific strengths and weaknesses. They serve as the back-bone and intelligence within the Freelancers.

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Salus Umbra (S.U.): A faction as mysterious as the Freelancers, but ancient in standing and greater in power. Created after the death of the last Alicorn King, their purpose is the safeguarding of the world and, in doing so, protecting the Goliath. While they have no knowledge of where the King had hidden it, they know all the secrets of the mysterious artifact. Consisting of all races, they are diverse and possess massive influence. Recently, they purchased a Bund outside of the city of Equinia to serve as a visible base of operations, forming an alliance with the other factions. They are led by the ancient unicorn known as 'The Oracle', and seven other Grand Masters (One of whom is Shining Armor).

The Grand Masters (S.U.): The collective leadership of Salus Umbra, they represent all of the natural elements of the world; the sun, the moon, magic, water, fire, wind, life, and death. Possessing near-godlike strength, each is incredibly powerful. However, they are only immortal in the sense of aging...they can still be slain. Only one of them (eight in total) was alive during the Alicorn King's reign, and as a result the other seven look toward that one (the Oracle) as their primary leader. With the recent events caused by Pierrot, they have decided to emerge and take action against him.

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The Crystal Empire (C.E.): Once allies and friends of the Princesses, the Crystal Empire had forsaken the ties it had to Equestria upon the deaths of Celestia and Luna, and had welcomed the rule of Pierrot (whom they believe to be the rightful ruler, since he is the Alicorn King's son). It is ironic that Equestrians saved the Crystal Empire from King Samba...only to eventually be destroyed by the ponies they rescued. Irony is what Pierrot enjoys. With his arrival, their entire empire has become prepared for war, and massive armies await at the Alicorn's beck and call. With his arrival, Pierrot had brought in dragons who had been chased out of Equestria, using them for his own purposes.

The Highborn (C.E.): Members of Pierrot's immediate family, they include his numerous sons and daughters, all whom struggle with each other for the throne they will one day inherit. They serve as commanders and tacticians for the war effort, and each have great individual strength. It is rumored that the destruction of Equinia was not by Pierrot himself...but by one of his younger foals. A recent, non-Alicorn member had been added, but as to who it is remains a mystery.

The Chevaliers (C.E.): With the opening of the Tartarus Gate, the alicorn Misery had used its magic to revive a numerous amount of dead creatures to serve the Empire, one of them including her own brother, Despair. Vicious, clever, and supernaturally strong, they gorge themselves on blood for strength and are capable of turning into nightmarish monsters. The only sure way to kill a Chevalier is to cut off it's head. While many were revived, only a few had become true Chevaliers, and now they serve as guardians to Misery (the one who resurrected them) and those she wants protected.

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Story Arcs:

The Rise of the Chevaliers: Consists of the events prior to the mass revival from the Tartarus Gate, and first reveals these wicked horrors.

(Open for joining.)

Blackened Sun: Another of Pierrot's armies has been spotted along the Strand, riding bizarre metal battleships and invading Equestria from the south. Either they are stopped on the coast, or the Strand will be lost.

(Open for joining.)

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Awesome sauce. Pure, delectable awesome sauce. Count Lavender in, want me to write her another app as she is new Val?

I would appreciate that :) thank you very much, TBB.

Also, bwahahaha! Perre Noel has been changed to Salus Umbra, which is latin for 'Salvation in Darkness/Shadow'

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I love how you didnt know that [colour=#282828]Père Noël was santa claus XD[/colour]

I took Spanish, German, Latin, and Japanese...but not French. Can't say why, but I guess it would have to do with the experience I had while visiting Paris...not a good time. They are so RUDE! -clears throat- ...anyway, definitely better to have Salus Umbra than the 'santa claus' thing XD

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I took Spanish, German, Latin, and Japanese...but not French. Can't say why, but I guess it would have to do with the experience I had while visiting Paris...not a good time. They are so RUDE! -clears throat- ...anyway, definitely better to have Salus Umbra than the 'santa claus' thing XD

I'm well aware that the french (france) are very rude. *mumbles* never asking for directions again

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I'm well aware that the french (france) are very rude. *mumbles* never asking for directions again

AGREED! I swear, I was in Paris with my cousin, and we were asking for directions to the Eiffel Tower...everyone we asked pretended not to speak English. We got to the point where we were like "Eiffel Tower?"...they, once again, pretended not to understand. It's freaking FRENCH! Probably the nicest European people I've met actually have to be the Germans and the Scottish/Irish. I've been all over Europe :)

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AGREED! I swear, I was in Paris with my cousin, and we were asking for directions to the Eiffel Tower...everyone we asked pretended not to speak English. We got to the point where we were like "Eiffel Tower?"...they, once again, pretended not to understand. It's freaking FRENCH! Probably the nicest European people I've met actually have to be the Germans and the Scottish/Irish. I've been all over Europe :)

What?, no love for the British eh? I see how it is. :smug:

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AGREED! I swear, I was in Paris with my cousin, and we were asking for directions to the Eiffel Tower...everyone we asked pretended not to speak English. We got to the point where we were like "Eiffel Tower?"...they, once again, pretended not to understand. It's freaking FRENCH! Probably the nicest European people I've met actually have to be the Germans and the Scottish/Irish. I've been all over Europe :)

strange you should be able to see the tower from just about anywhere in paris

any way that dosent beat the time I went and asked this guy if he could give me directions to a decent restaurant. He says yes. I asked if the food there is good. He says yes. I then ask if its close by. He says yes. I then stood there like an idiot for a couple minutes before I finally asked "Are you going to show me this restaurant?".He laughed and said no. I then told him "But you said you were going to show us this restaurant (note: with family). He then azzholishly said "I told you I could show you this restaurant. I never said I was going to"

I never wanted to slap someone harder

(another note :the whole conversation was in french)

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What?, no love for the British eh? I see how it is. :smug:

The British are darlings, Nova :) I cannot say much about them other than that, due to only being in London for a time. In most other European countries I've been in both the cities and countryside, so I can talk about them...I say, Americans get a bad rap, but other countries deserve it more.

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