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Derpyy Wonderbolt

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RoleplayType: World of Equestria

Name: Light Harmony

Sex: Male

Age: Stallion

Species: Unicorn

Eye colour: His eyes are a dark blue.

Coat: His coat is a sheer white. A very pure white.

Mane/Tail: Light's mane goes down to about the end of his neck and s stretchs up above his horn. The mane comes down on one side of his face in little diagonals. His mane goes above his horn. His mane is two different colours. It is a light blue and a dark red. The colours go with each other very well. His tail is very long and almost goes down to the ground when he walks. But his tail is the same colours as his mane. His tail colours split down the middle. One half is dark red and the other half is the light blue.

Physique: Light is about the average size of any regualr stallion but he is a bit smaller seeing as how he is not that old. He is not very weighty but he isn't skin and bones. As for muscles, Light is not muscular but he is not weak (lol does that make sense?)

Residence: Light lives in Las Pegasus

Occupation: Light does not actually have a job yet. He has not been thinking about a job since he just finished his studies in music but he wants to play his music for as many ponies he can.

CutieMark: Light's cutie mark is a few music notes sitting side by side. Light got his cutie mark when he was younger. When Light was young his parents actually suppressed music and they wanted Light to be a sciency and smart type of pony. Light's parents saw music as a waste of time and energy for him. They thought he should focus more on school related business. Because Light and his parents lived in Canterlot. But whenever his parents sent him off to the school he went to Light would often sneak off and seclude himself and listen to the birds singing in the woods. One day when Light snuck off he came across a tree that he noticed more and more birds were going to and coming from. Light approached the tree and found a lone zebra living behind the tree. Light started talking to the zebra and she started to teach Light how to play the bongos and other instruments. Light visited the zebra almost everyday and always had fun with her. One day he was playing a song with her and he was finally able to play a part in a song he was never able to play before. The next thing he knew was that he had his cutie mark. The zebra was so happy for him and Light was happy for himself. But Light forgot that his parent would see his cutie mark is music related. So Light said his goodbyes to the zebra and packed some of his things and moved to Ponyville.

History: Light and his family were born in Canterlot. Light did not exactly get along while he was growing up and living with them. His mother was a very eloquent pony and she loved her rules. She always pushed her rules on Light and his father. His father was the exact same way. Light's parents usually made Light study his science and other things he did not like at all. Light's parents hated music and to Lights it seemed like they hated anything he liked. Light always had a bad childhood until Light befriended the music loving zebra. Her name was Shekana and Light would go and play music with her everyday. It was almost as if Shekana was his real mother. Light liked to think of her like that. When Light got earned his cutie mark he decided to leave his parents and move to Las Pegasus. Which he did. Light's life is now a great one. He does what he wants and usually only studies music. Light can play multiple instruments. Light only wished to show his musical talents with the whole city of Las Pegasus. Light usually spends most of his time playing an instrument and teaching himself new things. Light hopes one day that he will be able to play shows almost daily for Las Pegasis

CharacterSummary: Light is a very nice pony. Light always wants to make new friends and be nice to everypony he sees. Light is so nice to everypony because he remembers how his parents treated him and he doesn't want anypony to feel the same way he did back then. Light always like to crack joked and try to lighten up the mood if a conversation is going bad. He is a very calm and somewhat flirtatious pony. Light often liked to express the way that he feels through his music. He has not written any songs yet because he doesn't think he can. Light likes to think of his talents as being able to make any pony happy and his ability to play music. Light likes to see ponies happy and loves hearing any other pony playing music. Sometimes if he hears a pony playing music he will start playing with them. Light dislikes seeing ponies sad or mad. He may not know the thoughts and feelings of the other ponies but he just wants everypony to be happy. Light's hobbies include just playing music and going to his favorite restaurants and eating with new and old friends. Overall Light is a nice and loving pony. He likes to think of himself as one of the nicest ponies but he doesn't tell other ponies this. He is always able to make a new friend. Light's faults are that sometimes he can get to flirtatious but not very often. One main thing is sometimes when he is playing music with another pony if the pony plays a wrong note or plays the song a way Light doesn't like he will sometimes yell at that pony. But he would sometimes apologize after his outburst. Light sometimes has a short temper and he hates that about himself. One of Light's biggest fears is that when he is playing a show he will mess up and no one will like his music and he will be booed off stage. All we wants is for everypony to like his music. He hopes one day that his parents...if they are still out there..will appreciate his music.

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Lux Alicorn

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Hello.

Your friendly neighborhood Helpstaffer here.

You have a great character here. A couple of things before this character gets approved.

You'll need to fix the text first of all It's too small and in colour. The easiest way I find is to click the Edit button, highlight the entire text, select Black in the colour area and a larger font size. This will make things much more readable.

Next, I think you should add why Light's parents hate music so much. Do they think it's a waste of time?

You mention a zebra named Shekana. Is she just a zebra you added, an OC you also play, or a friend's OC? The reason I ask is that if you placn to have your character know another from the past, you need to get whoever plays that character's permission.

Lastly, you need to take out the line about how he played with Vinyl Scratch. We don't allow character related to cast ones. So just as you can't be Twilight Sparkle's classmate from school, you can't have Light play with Vinyl Scratch. When your character is approved however, feel free to interact with any OCs or cast ponies as you like.

Let me know when you've made the changes and you'll be ready to go!

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Derpyy Wonderbolt

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Well the zebra is no OC character lol I just put her in there to give a little back story for him. No one plays her. I don't want her to be a character.

Thanks for helping me with everything haha I am new and I always hate it when I mess something up because I feel like the moderators and helpers of the site thing I'm an idiot lol

I changed the colour and font and took out the Vinyl Scratch thing. Added in that his parents saw music as a waste of time as well

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Lux Alicorn

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I can assure you that no one will think you're dumb for making a mistake. Creating a character is a learning process, one that gets better over time.

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Hello.

I sent your application for review yesterday. It will take a few days to render a decision (especially since we have many others to review). Please be patient and know that I am tracking this app's progress.

Thanks!

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Hello again. Your app looks fine, but there is one final thing that needs adjusted (sorry I didn't pick this up before).

I encourage your character to live in another location besides Ponyville. There are many interesting cities where your pony can live in besides there. If you change it, make sure you check the rest of your app to make sure everywhere it's changed.

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