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[colour=#000000]Roleplay Type: crossover

Name: Dweebie Phoebe

Sex: Female

Age: Older Filly

Species: Pegasus

Eye colour: Lime Green. She mostly wears her thick glasses though so her eyes are rarely seen.

Coat: A bright Magenta

Mane/Tail: Her mane is useally in a bundled up pony tail, tied back with her favrite hair tie. Her hair tie looks like a small saturn. Her pony tail splits off into a star like shape at the back of her head. Her hair colour is a lime green and has a bright yellow colour out line the tips of her pony tail. The front of her hair bounces into three bumps that also has yellow tips. Her tail is always a mess. She does not really care for her tail. She has much better things to do. Therefore its always in tangles.

Physique: Dweebie is not one for sports or going out. So beacuse of this she is a bit chubby.

Residence: Lives in a cottage with her uncle and sister In the white tail wood.

Occupation: Works at a comic book shop in Baltimare as a chashier and expert on all things comic

Cutie Mark: Alien head and planet side by side. Three stars; one on the top two on the bottom.

Ever since Dweebie was a small pony she has not fit in with the foals at her school. Before she moved to white tailwood she lived in Manehattan.She could not fly or run very well and unfortunatly at the school Dweebie went both thouse things are very importent. Every gym class was the same; Get picked last, giggling, triping and comments about how she waddled when she ran or about how thick and ugly her glasses are. Beacuse of this she always wanted to be alone. She dident trust other filly's or colts so she always yarnd for another world where she could be accpeted, loved and where she could be who she is.

One day after a particularly bad day at school she came home and her favrite uncle came to visit. Her uncle Tracker Jacker would always bring a treat from the everfree forest. This time he brought her something extra special. He brought her a book he wrote about myths and mysteries about the everfree forest. Dweebie noticed the cover on the book. It had alot of mythical creatures that may or may not exist in equestria. It had flutter ponies, wisps, zombie ponies and of course a cutiesarus. But one creature stood out to Dweebie. She asked him "Uncle whats this one?" Her uncle told her of strange creatures called aliens. He said that their where no known ones around in equestria but he did tell her of all the amazing rumors and stories he has hurd about them over the years. He told her about the amazing technology they rumored to have. He told her about thier strange and far off world. And he told her about how he had (alegendy) seen these creatures various times. As he told her more and more about these amazing beings her eyes widened to as wide as they possibully could. Her little mind buzzed with ideas of amazing lands where she could finally be accepted. Where she could experience things she could never have in equestria. She might even meet a friend.

From that day then Dweebie Phoebe studied as hard as she could to learn more about aliens. She read both facts and fiction all about aliens. She learned about the solar system, the stars and the planets just so she could be even closer to these beings. She began to start making desighnes for these amazing creatures. On her free time she would draw worlds for these creatures. Soon her room was full of amazing pictures of these creatures. She was starting to devote her whole life to them. This did not stop the harsh bullying but it did help her keep her mind off them. She became quite knowlageable about space after a while and one day the teacher announced that the school was going to have a science fair. Dweebie lit up with joy, until the teacher said that they had to have partners. Dweebie raised her hoof only to be told that they must have partners. Dweebie sank in her seat as the class laughfed at her. As the class gathered into partners Dweebie put her head down. No one ever choose her anyway so mabey she could be alone for her project. Suddenly a little filly tapped her on her shoulder. It was the new filly that had just move from out of town. Dweebie forgot she was even in her class. She asked Dweebie if they could be partners and Dweebie reluctently agreed. [/colour]

[colour=#000000]After school they met in the libary. The other pony had no idea what to do for the assighment so she asked Dweebie what she would like to do for the assighment. Dweebies eyes opened in surprise. No pony had ever cared about her ideas before. She told Cherry about her idea and Cherry thought it was a fantastic idea. And with that They started to work on thier project. Everyday after school they would work hard on thier project, makeing sure no pony else would see. They became really good friends the more they saw each other. They even started to see each other to do other things besides working on thier project. They would draw, play games and even fly together. Dweebie Phoebe felt more and more happy the more they played. [/colour]

[colour=#000000]The day of the science fair came. Dweebie and Cherry came early to set up thier project and to protect it. Who knows what kind of trouble the other students could to thier project. The two fillys covered thier project so they can do a big revel. They waited as the other students started to trickle in and set up thier projects. They tauted the two as useual but this time they did not even notice. The two were too busy playing clapping rymes and word games. The fiar finally started and the juges arived. The two waited anxiously for the juges to come over to see thier project. They took the cover off and reviled the amazing project. It was a working space ship that was built based on rumors and media on aliens. Of corse it could not fly into space. It could only hover about 2 feet off the ground but it was still very impressive. They also had a huge bristal board that was filled to the brim with reaserch about aleins and thier spaceships. The juges jaws dropped. They seemed very impressed. "What is this?" they ask. "Its a UFO desighned off eye witness accounts! Here is the air pump that makes it hover. We dont have the technology to make an anti gravity mode." She said happily. The juge smiled and wrote down his score. The others followed then went to tally up the scores and revle the winner. While the juges were debating Dweebie turned to Cherry. "Uh....Cherry. Thanks for helping me with the project. And most of all thanks for being my friend." The two fillys hugged. The judges were finally done counting the points. "The winner of the science fair is....Dweebie Phoebe and Cherry Belle!" Dweebie was shocked. Cherry belle had to push her onto the stage. The two accepted the award with all clapping and cheering. Even the filly's and colts who made fun of them before. Everyone was so inpressed with the two. Dweebie started to tear up. "Dweebie Look!" Shouted Cherry Belle. Dweebie looked down and noticed something on her flank, an alien head with a purple planet beside it. Along with three start. Dweebie got her cutie mark. This was one of the best days of her life. Since getting her cutie mark the filly's and colts respected her more. After all she was the first one in her class to get one!

History:[/colour]

[colour=#000000]When Dweebie was little she lived in Manehatten with her parents and little sister Sweet Tweet. Her parents worked as fire ponies in the Manehatten fire house. She rarely spent time with them so her uncle was often left to baby sit. The two fillys loved thier uncle so they werent bothered by not seeing ther parents too much. When they did see them they always did family activites together like flying and camping trips. Dweebie sometimes felt it would be better if they just stayed home to talk. But sadly Dweebie never got this wish. One night the fire marcel came to the house and tole Tracker Jacker the bad news. The next morning Tracker Jacker sat the girls down and told them that their was a very bad fire north side of manehatten and thier parents could not get out in time. Dweebie and Sweet Tweet were devastaed. The two criyed into Jackers chest. He told them they would be living with him for now on. It took the two months to be ok at his home. They missed thier parents so much. Living with thier uncle was hard at first but beacsue he was so supprotive they managed to become more comfertable with the whole situartion. Even now they still have trouble with grief.[/colour]

[colour=#000000]Now they live with thier uncle in his one of many cottages. They love being in the forst and are quite happy with how the horrible siduation turned out. Dweebie often goes to ponyville where she

Character Summary:[/colour][colour=#000000] Dweebie is a goofy shy filly. She is very passinate about the things in her life she loves. Dweebie is not one for being friends with many ponies. She useally hangs around with few choice ponies. While in big groups she is quiet unless something she is passinoate about is mentioned. Then she will talk or hours. While with ponies who have similar intrests she will graldly talk to them for hours and hours. On the other hand when she is with ponies that do not same similar intrets she shys away from them. She tryies hard not to look them in the eyes or tries to talk about her intrests. Over all she is a friendly pony but just very akward and shy.[/colour]

[colour=#000000]When Dweebie gets pashionate about something she becomes very exighted very quick. Sometimes she forgets her suroundeings and causes a lot of trouble. She can`t control her volume or her dancing and sometimes disterbes other ponies. She also has a tendacy to bump into ponies while becoming to exighted. [/colour]

[colour=#000000]Dweebie loves fantacy creatures. She loves learning about the wilderness with her uncle. They often stray away from real wilderness and talk about creatures that may or may not exist in equestria like the cutiesarus and aliens. Dweebie reads alot of books. She mostly reads comic books and fantacy books. She also reads alot of books about theories of aliens in equestria. When Dweebie isen't reading she collects toys and figures of shows and books she likes. Dweebie has a very impressive collection. Other thing she enjoys doing is drawing. She useally keeps her art to herself beacuse she feels its not the best. She often only drawns monsters and aliens. One of her favrite hobbies is to go to conventions and dress up as her favrite characters.[/colour][colour=#000000] She has a good grasp of sewing and has one some small compititions. [/colour]

One of Dweebie Phoebe's biggest goals is to prove that aliens exist. She wants to study their life style and possibully live with them. She also wants to use the possible technology the aliens have to make life in equestria better. Dweebie belives anything is possible and wants to prove it to everypony.

The thing that Dweebie is most afraid of is fire. She sometime even flinches when someone lights a candle. She is also afriad of other ponies. She can make friends but she rarely does beacuse her self esteem is so low. Her worries include being able to prove aliens existing, her looks, what convention she is going to and how her costumes and art look.

[colour=#000000]Photo: post-157-0-73684900-1359938865_thumb.png[/colour]

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QuickLime Alicorn

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Well the Staff is unsure really how to handle the aliens thing, especially the rather humanoid alien on her cutie mark, However this app is just fine for crossovers/ FFA if you'd like to do that instead :D

Or we could work together to get this passed to Mane, which would you like to do?:)

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I was hopeing to get it to mane...but I like the cutie mark the way it is.

My suggestion, is to shift the focus from space... To simple pony mythology. Having your pony be a Vampire, Ghost, or all-around cryptid nut could work. Or perhaps even a superhero-fan (I could see you character is fascinated with comic books). For example, she could be convinced that the "Mare Do Well" could still be out there.

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I am having trouble understanding why. Would you mind explaining a bit more? Also what would I haft to do to make her ok to rp with in the mane rp?

Well for one the alien on her cutie mark is what a Humanoid alien looks like, that and well we don't really know much about Equestria and Aliens in the first place, there has been no mention of them, and besides the princesses control the sun and the moon, and lord knows what else...It's just a can of worms we arn't particularly ready to open yet ^^

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Hmm, looking at this app thoroughly, I don't think we really have that many problems in regards to the alien issue, so long as you in no way insinuate that the aliens actually exist. If the character is just chasing conspiracies and unproven accounts of alien life forms, that's fine. I think that can be done in a fun, silly way that is in no way harmful to the game. Perhaps if you further reinforced in the text that there is no real proof that the aliens do in any way exist, that would help alleviate any concerns on the matter.

The problem I do have is with the cutie mark. Really it's a two-fold problem: 1). It's a humanoid alien head, and we really prefer not including anything that suggests any kind of humanoid life form in the WoE RP environment, and 2). the design is clearly derived from the famous gray alien, which through it's prominence and connections to real world incidents and ideas verges a little too closely on our rule against symbols with a clear and explicit association with something else (see the cutie mark section of the app guide). As such, I don't think I'd allow the cutie mark as it is.

However, with a change of cutie mark, and further emphasis that there is no proof the aliens actually exist, I think the alien enthusiasm could still be allowed. Hope that is clear.

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Hi Rainbow! I know you're frustrated about having your character reviewed -- and moreover changed -- to work within a certain roleplay type. As we've acknowledged that your character may not be the best fit for WoE, why not change the roleplay type to Crossovers? This will allow your character design to stay exactly how you like it, which will serve as a valuable reference for other players. CO and FFA are fun, active areas to play, where this character would be fantastic. There's no reason to discard all the hard work you have put into this application!

Simply edit the roleplay type to Crossovers in your application, and I will stamp this character! :)

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