Story: Cast Help with these ideas?

[LeBronySecret]

I've been having this problem with this story idea lately.

It just came to me a few days ago while on TV Tropes.

Basically,I'm attempting to do a sad Story with the Mane Six..but involving this:

(I had to remove the song due to some rules I didn't know about.Just look up 'Alcest Le Secret')

This song (I dunno if you guys would want to listen to a 13 minute song),but the lyrics say other wise!

[colour=#000000]English:

Sometimes, the trees sketch out a peculiar ballet,

Imitating my little body deceived by the wind,

And the ivy whispers familiar words

Look at life with the eyes of a child

To smell the suave perfumes exhaled

By a garden whose secret you filled long ago

And at that moment sang the giggling diaphanous girls

Of the sparkling, pearly river

I do have something planned,but I need more help with this![/colour]

Edited February 17, 2013 by LeBronySecret

[Cadabra]

I'd be curious to know exactly what it is you are going for with your story, and at what angle you wish to tell it from. Songs can be great influences for writing. (I'm working on one with elements of Johnny Cash songs right now.)

[LeBronySecret]

I'd be curious to know exactly what it is you are going for with your story, and at what angle you wish to tell it from. Songs can be great influences for writing. (I'm working on one with elements of Johnny Cash songs right now.)

Well what I'm trying to do is kinda make it an emotional idea to it.

I've read several fanfctions and they ALWAYS include very intense detail.

I have written something so far,but I'm still struggling on how to continue it.

Plus listening to the song again is really getting some ideas to come (Including one involving the Aftermath of Canterlot Wedding with the album 'The Incident' by Porcupine Tree).

[Cadabra]

I'd be glad to give it a read over if you would be willing to give my work in progress a read over too. PM me your email address and I will give you mine.

[LeBronySecret]

I will =)!Thank you,I have also been writing another story.

[Cadabra]

I'd be glad to help with that too!