PedestrianWolf Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 Roleplay Type: World of Equestria Mane RPName: Sorghum SweetSex: FemaleAge: Young Filly (a 'tween)Species: Earth PonyEye colour: Azure BlueCoat: Amber Waves of GrainMane/Tail: Dark Leaf Green, kept in braidsPhysique: Average for a filly her age. Long legs she hasn't quite grown into yet, and a slender frame.Residence: FillydelphiaOccupation: Student, works in the family gristmillCutie Mark: None yet, to her consternationHistory: Sorghum Sweet lives with her parents, Einkorn and Caraway Rye, at their mill upriver from Fillydelphia. Her uncle Emmer and aunt Wilhelmina also live in Fillydelphia, and they help out at the family mill. Her older brother, Durham Red has a mill of his own in Appleloosa.She goes to school more often than her brother did, but she still gets pulled out of classes when it gets busy and they need the extra help. She does well in class, but doesn't have a favorite subject. Sorghum Sweet has a few friends among the other blank flanks in her school. If they knew about the Cutie Mark Crusaders, they would definitely have started a FIllydelphia chapter of the club.Character Summary: Sorghum Sweet is an adventurous pony. Or at least, she would like to be. She is always chafing at the bit to go out and do things, if only her parents would let her. She is quite sure she could find her destiny and get her cutie mark if she were allowed to go out and explore.She isn't much interested in book learning. She wants to learn by doing. Reading books can be interesting, but it just makes her want to go out and actually experience the things she read about.Sorghum Sweet is not sure that the mill is her destiny. She doesn't mind helping with the family business. Sweeping up the fallen grain and spilled flour can be relaxing, allowing her thoughts to wander. And she's gotten pretty good at sewing up the finished bags of flour. But it feels more like a placeholder, not her final destination.She is allowed to go visit her older brother in Appleloosa, but even then she's stuck at his mill, because he's too busy working. Not fair. At least the town he lives in is small, and she can wander down main street without getting into trouble.Sorghum Sweet is a very friendly and easygoing filly. She's quick to make friends and willing to try new things. She does get teased occasionally for still being a blank flank, but never maliciously. She enjoys roughhousing and playing games like kickball, tag, red rover, basically really physical sports.Between working at the mill, her schooling, and playing with her friends, she doesn't really have much time for hobbies. She hasn't found any that hold her interest at any rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PedestrianWolf Posted April 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2013 I'm not sure what else this character needs, so I'm marking it ready for feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted April 16, 2013 Report Share Posted April 16, 2013 Looking over this app, it is brief, but it does cover all of the required fields. The only things I can see offhand that might hold this up in the next level of analysis is the single reference to "human age" (frowned on my Senior RP Staff) and they may want to see some of what you wrote expanded. They'll probably want to see more about this filly's personality and how she gets along with other ponies.I really like this app, and if you'll make those changes, I think it'll be fine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted April 21, 2013 Report Share Posted April 21, 2013 Ok, I can see you've made some changes to this app! Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PedestrianWolf Posted April 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2013 Thanks! Still not sure if it needs anything more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted April 23, 2013 Report Share Posted April 23, 2013 History is short, but for a foal not much is needed, and this seems like a very cute character: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted April 23, 2013 Report Share Posted April 23, 2013 Moving to Earth Pony. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PedestrianWolf Posted April 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2013 Awesome, thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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