I want to help you~

[Monochrome]

Okay.

[Kasurion]

Hi! Could I please have some help creating a back story (or a 'history') for my OC? He's the pony in my profile pic.

[kinkamina]

Think you Can improve Errare?

(even though she's technically complete. Just cuz. ^w^)

http://www.canterlot...dy/#entry381703

[Monochrome]

Okay~ Give me until tomorrow and I should have some suggestions for you.

[Monochrome]

And yes, Kasurion, who is this character?

[kinkamina]

Wow. Tommorow Really Spanned out quite a few days. >_>

I'm just kidding.

I'm sure you'r probably already busy with more important stuff.

#IMPATIENT

[Monochrome]

Oops, sorry! XD I forget WAY too many things. Let me look over that one more time, will respond soon.

[Monochrome]

I must say, as a complete newbie at critiquing histories, I'm not quite sure what to look for in a good history. However, personally, I really like Errare. (Rp with me sometime, maybe? ) My only issue would be that, although you are entitled to your own crack pairings/fan shippings/whatever you want to call them, I'm not too keen on the idea that she is the daughter of Discord and Pinkamena. Also, could you elaborate on how exactly that dimension changed her eye color?