MetalBronyATL Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Applejack led her into the next room and move her hooves from her eyes. "Tadaaaa!" Rarity said excitedly as she pointed to an incredibly beautiful wedding dress, made exactly like the sketch she had shown Moonlite. It was, in fact, quite prettier than Princess Cadence's wedding dress. "What do you think, darling?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Moonlite just stared wide eyed, "h..how..you d..do so fast!" she said in utter shock staring at the work of beauty before her and ran up and hugged Rarity happily, "Oh it's so amazing!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 "I have my ways..." Rarity said slyly as Moonlite hugged her. "I'm ever so glad you like it, dear." She said hugging her back, her heart warmed from the joy Moon felt. "Well, go on. Try it on." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 "Oh but Rarity, I couldn't, I wish not to ruin it by accident before my wedding day" she said nervous about putting on the piece of art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 "Nonsense, sweetheart. Even if anything happened it wouldn't be a problem to remedy." Rarity said, genty floating the dress over and opening the dressing room curtain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 Moonlite nodded and took the dress and went to change Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 "Ah can't thank ya enough, Rarity. It means a lot ta be helpin' us." Applejack said. Rarity replied with a nuzzle and a smile. "Of course, darling. But you better be as cooperative as your bride-to-be has been." she jested, causing Applejack to roll her eyes. "Just....don't make it too frou-fouy."Blood smiled at the happiness amongst the mares, but soon turned back to his desk and looked over the helmet he found. "I need to go to Canterlot soon and find out more about this."((Killjoy, if you're reading this, Soul just reported in to Killjoy)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killjoy Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 ((I read it))Killjoy closed the book and looked up at Soul "This will be a long hard road, this will be quite the journey to tread." she said rubbing her eyes after reading almost a 150 pages. "getting eveyone ready to accept another reformed evil will be long a tedious." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 "I think we both know what has to be done first and foremost....." Soul began, involuntarily looking around. "...and you're probably the best pony to break it to her." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Moonlite sighed, "Not even two seconds and back to work" she said to him in an unamused tone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 "Are you ready, Moon? Need some help?" Rarity called, seeing if Moonlite was having any trouble getting the dress on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 She poked he head out, "just a sec" she said warmly and quickly finished getting into the dress. It was odd wearing clothes but it felt nice, and with that she adjust the dress and poked her head out, "you sure AJ is allowed to see?" she teased Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 ((Do most weddings allow that? I wouldn't know. Lol))"I'm sure you look dazzling, hun. And I'm sure Applejack wouldn't mind the preview." Rarity said giggling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 [idk i know on wedding day groom and bride can't see eachother]Moonlite smiled and came out of the changing closet/room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 "Oh my....." Rarity whispered, awed by how stunning Moonlite looked. Applejack was speechless, her marefriend looked like an angel. "Sugarcube....ah've never seen somepony so goregous." Applejack said, loss for words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Moonite blushed and looked away, "Oh come on, I can't be that fabulous, thats miss rarity's job!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killjoy Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 killjoy sighed "she isn't ready...and she won't be for quite some time. 1,000 years of agony is something the princess does not need to pushed onto her again, especially so soon. It would be easier if she was here for more than a few years before all this...the timing could not be any more worse. I don't think I have it in me to bring her such grave news." she said looking down. "but you are right...I'll have to telk her...I just don't kniw when." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 "Darling, don't ever doubt your own beauty. At this very moment you are far more beautiful than anything I could ever hope to dream." Rarity said sweetly, still in awe of Moonlite's stunning appearance. "Better for you to tell her sooner than her find out herself later." Soul said, sighing at how delicate the situation was at the moment. "Of all ponies, I know she would have the most rational response to you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Moonlite blushed, not used to such flatery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 "Right then, the dress looks fantastic. You can take it off now. We must now discuss how we'll be doing your mane and tail." Rarity said, her determination to make Moon the most beautiful bride ever still stronger than ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Moon nodded and went and chaned out, very cautious and returned it to Rarity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Rarity took the dress and floated it to a manikin cautiously. "Now, I have no intention of making you look anything less than an absolute beauty. I know Applejack will be particularly interested in how I style your tail." She teased slyly. Applejack blushed furiously. "C'mon, Rarity. Now that's just low." She said, trying to hide her red cheeks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Moonlite turned her rear to AJ and flicked her with her tail, "now now, don't be ashamed of it, you love it!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Applejack couldn't help but giggle. "Ya got me, I sure so." she said, playfully smacking Moonlite's flank slightly hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenChrysalis747 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Moonlite squeaked and blushed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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