Dahlia (Ready)

[franshpout]

Name: Dahlia

Gender: Female

Age: Mare

Species: Aerion

Eye colour: Bright Red

Character colour: Pink

Mane/Tail/Other: The mane and tail are of a blonde color. The way it is combed is that she has a forelock falling on front of her, but it's not wide enough to hide her eyes or anything. The back of her mane falls naturaly on one of the sides, mostly the left one. It is medium long. On the side of her head she has her mane attached in a ponytail. It is always combed on the left side. The shape or sight of the mane appears somewhat messy and not completely combed. Her tail follows the same pattern.

Physique: Her body shape appears slightly slimmer than the average of the aerions. The same can be said for her height. Compared to most aerions she looks smaller, but not by much. There is nothing abnormal looking on her apart from this. Her wings are well suited for her body with a normal size.

Residence: Stalliongrad. Or at least that is where she comes from and where her father and brother stay. She doesn't stay in one place for too long after she's caused some trouble, so she may explore a lot of places.

Occupation: She has no stable job. Actually she has none at the moment. She lives on her own, surviving by stealing from others. Living in society is not easy for her anyway due to previous actions. She can't just go out and let herself be spotted so easily... but that doesn't mean she doesn't go out at all and avoids asolutely everyone. She mostly tries to avoid guards.

Cutie Mark: An orange carnation flower with a crescent moon.

Unique Traits: She's a pretty brilliant pony who knows how to plan her things. Whenever she fails at something, then she won't give up. She'll push forward no matter what.

History: One does not start doing harshful things just because he wants to. It is always brought by many different factors. It is an unfortunate life for Dahlia. While borned from two Aerions leading a normal life, when she grew up her two parents couldn't stay together anymore. Her mother fought with her father and was starting to like him less and less. Dahlia heard the fights happen more than once where both would yell at each other. Of course the filly was staying away from them, but it didn't prevent her from hearing them do so. It saddened her a lot and eventually the mother left, leaving behind her son and daughter with their father.

Dahlia's father was now alone to raise the two, but it was hard to do so even with his kind spirit due to his moral being completely crushed. Dahlia was never told the reason why her mother left, leaving her with the beliefs that maybe she didn't like them anymore. Her father would always try to convince her otherwise and reassure her with his kind words, reminding her that he'd always take good care of her and would love her as well as her brother.

Unfortunately this left Dahlia to be fragile. Interacting with the others at school proved to be a problem and in the later years she was an easy prey for those who liked to bully. She could endure it for some time... When she was going home, all she'd see would be her father who didn't seem to have recovered from the separation he lived. Despite that he would always smile to his daughter whenever she'd look at him. He'd keep telling her that he loved her and the such. Dahlia, although young, sensed that something was amiss. She was not capable of determining what it was, but it still kept bothering her and gave her a sense of worry that was hard to get rid of.

Growing up, her years in school with the others were not getting easier. While she had a few classmates to talk to, they were not real friends with who she could hang out all the time. Aside from that, she was still the victim of those who were tougher. Yet with the time this young aerion had built up a lot of rage from that as well as her life at home, constantly worrying about her own father. At one moment she simply snapped. One unlucky bully decided to pick on her, but never expected to find himself down on the ground after being roughly punched across the face. Dahlia had acted on impulsivity, responding with what should have come out a long time ago. Those in company of the downed bully didn't dare to try and do anything against the now mad aerion. They left... and left her alone. In that moment of solitude Dahlia realised that she could fend for herself. The new discovery lead her to actually move on. That way she discovered that she could carry on and not let others get in her way. With this burst of confidence rising the young aerion decided that things should change for her. And it's on that day that Dahlia received her own cutie mark. A red carnation flower above a crescent moon made its appearance on her flank. This awful day didn't end so badly after all... Yet not all ended there.

Due to her new ways of thinking, the filly truly decided that it was time for her to face her problems. Thing was... she didn't face them like she should. At first she would reply to those who tried to harm her. Either insulting them or simply yelling, she took a certain pleasure in that. She would even get to the weaker ones and get something from them if she was interested in things they had. The bullied became the bully... of course this didn't go without being punished. Yet even with the intervention of the father, it didn't do much.

Years after she hadn't changed much since then. Others began to know her and avoid her. Dahlia didn't give them much of a care. She'd go talk to some if she ever wanted to anyway. Strangely enough at some point in her life she managed to get a coltfriend. But the relationship didn't last for a very long time. The colt in question had his eyes on another pony at some point and decided to leave Dahlia for her. Dahlia became enraged and decided to get revenge on this pony... by starting rude rumors about her. Dahlia worked on her story so it could be believable and managed to spread it in secret through the school, causing the colt to put an end to the relationship weeks later. Dahlia did not get him back, but she was satisfied nonetheless.

In the end, though, Dahlia left school. She had enough of it, of all the teachers and the students, the homeworks that she was not doing anymore... Instead she decided to start her own life and do things for her own self. She had no job, was staying with her father and brother. Back in school she had begun to steal things. This habit remained as she grew older. It was little and meaningless things at first, but her actions were always punished whenever she was caught anyway. Though not severe, it was still not pleasant, but Dahlia didn't give up. She kept on doing it anyway...

She kept doing it, but this time going for more valuable things. When she reached the age of adulthood, her actions were punished more severely. She had been caught a couple of times already, being kept in a cell too a few times. During her times there her father often came to visit her to keep her company. The father kept being ever so forgiving to her that it didn't help Dahlia not commit anymore of these acts. Once free she would only try to improve her methods to avoid being caught again... and she was really improving.

Her life consists of surviving without reason. She lives because she wants to know how far she can get no matter the path she chooses. Knowing she has the support of her father and brother, she will keep going forward for herself.

Character Personality: Although rude, Dahlia remains a pony you can talk to. Her goal is not to hurt others, but just to get things to her advantage. She mostly acts this way to keep herself ahead of the others and make sure she doesn't fall back to when she was still a shy pony. Whenever she falls down, she will instantly get back up and try again, no matter the consequences. She's a pretty bright girl, though, so her intellect is of great use for whenever she has something to plan.

Character Summary: Dahlia lives a carefree life by herself. Her relation with her brother is good despite her attitude and she loves her father very much who loves her back just as much even though they both act in different ways. She steals to allow herself to live and it's pretty much her only way to do so. Her father may help in secret, but she tries to do most of the job herself. She gets in trouble a lot, that's for sure, but she will always find a way out of it as well.

She can help others as well if she ever feels like it and if she finds an interest in the person too. Yet she'll expect some reward once the job is done.

If in danger, Dahlia is a dirty fighter. She doesn't play it fair and may just use any object that is around to her advantage.

(Have fun!)

[Mojo]

Hi there!

Looking over this app, it has all of the required fields filled and is very well written.

Though this character app has an overall sad tone to it, I believe it's acceptable for CC.

Although your Character Summary is a little brief, there's enough in it to satisfy me.

Recommending this app for further Senior RPH analysis!

[franshpout]

Aaah, I might work more on the character summarization, then XD

And yeah. it's not easy to make a happy story when the character is made to be a troublemaker, especially for me! Besides no one just decides to be evil, it gets developed with time, but honestly the story pretty much takes the points in her life where she had bad luck so it explains how she got there, but if we were to go more in details, then of course she had good moments

Anyway, thanks for checking!

[Armony]