ToothpasteThy Posted May 14, 2015 Report Share Posted May 14, 2015 Name: Toothpaste Aquafresh Nicknames: Toothie, Toothy, Tooths, Tooth, and 'that crazed lunatic' from time to time. Gender: Male Age: He is older than he appears and usually acts. Appears to be a young stallion, and acts like a colt. Species: Earth pony! Hurray~ Eye colour: Yellow like a banana. Character colour: White like a white bandana. Mane/Tail/Other: Minty green, dark minty green, and red. Physique: Toothie is only as heavy as his heart, which is to say not at all. It's a wonder how he doesn't collapse beneath the weight of his own mane. His mane also tastes kind of minty ever since he experimented with a mane flavor potion he created. The potion turned out to have a permanent effect. https://i.imgur.com/kNBRQ8x.jpg (older picture complete with no cutie mark). Alternate design that Toothie likely won't be seen in: https://i.imgur.com/CVuR69D.jpg Residence: Wherever he happens to have found work for the time. No permanent residence. He often sleeps on the streets contentedly. Occupation: Helping around wherever he is with chores. A freelance chore-doer. Cutie Mark: Yellow tribal markings in the shape of a comet: a smooth, thick outer oval (as seen on an A&W symbol border) with a half oval with a spike shaped indent in it, not unlike a cartoon representation of a comet. (as seen in linked picture) --Important!-- His cutie mark is only seen when in his alternate appearance ( https://i.imgur.com/CVuR69D.jpg ). His cutie mark is nowhere to be seen otherwise. The midnight after Toothie met the magician who caused his love for making potions, a bright yellow comet flashed across the sky, and then his cutie mark appeared. That's it. Nothing else. So he is rather ashamed of it as he actually doesn't understand it's significance. But every night he goes out and watches the stars in hope that he would see the comet again. Unique Traits: Toothie has been a very skilled potion brewer for almost all of his life. His mixes seem to be limitless in variety and capabilities, quite possibly a result of lifelong practice. He became fascinated with potion brewing ever since a streetside earth pony magician performing many tricks, and it was the same magician who taught him the basics and a few of his secrets. He totes also stores things in his mane. History: If you could catch him in a midnight moment of his seriousness, one might be able to learn of his original residence in Vanhoover where he once lived with his family that he loves, yet usually does not mention. Growing up with such a nice family as his is kind of embarrassing for Toothie because of how different he is from them. Another reason why he finds it an awkward question is because it is far too serious and not-fun compared to talking about how he filled up his house with styrofoam peanuts while sleepwalking, or when he accidentally brought babysitting supplies into the Everfree as opposed to camping gear. Good times~ Character Personality: Once meeting him, you never would have thought that Toothie had ever taken anything seriously in his life. Sure he's capable of such feats, but only in certain situations. He likes too many things to list, but for the sake of having a proper RP profile... Minty freshness, brushies, huggles, being active, etc.. He quite dislikes humidity, being ignored, arrogance, and more. Likes and dislikes are meant to be discovered~ Character Summary: -Crazy, happy, silly pony. So spontaneous that he sometimes gets to obnoxious and intolerable levels. However, when watching the starry sky as he does every night, he calms down and wishes that he could see the comet he did as a colt. -Outgoing. Friendship is always right around the corner~ Personal space is a foreign concept to him sometimes. -Toothie will forget things, even if he was just told. -Curious, mostly about other ponies. Probably why he likes to trot around saying hello, it seems to get the occasional conversation. -Toothie is caring, he will go at great lengths to make a complete stranger feel better. -Odd and confusing lump of minty freshness~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 2, 2015 Report Share Posted July 2, 2015 You still workin' on this tooth paste pony? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted July 5, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2015 You still workin' on this tooth paste pony? To be honest, I completely forgot about it .3.I've been super busy with camp and other things lately as well; so unless there need to be changes, I think it'll stay as it is xPThanks for reminding me of this! xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 5, 2015 Report Share Posted July 5, 2015 If you want to go ahead and change the app title to "ready" I'll review it for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 6, 2015 Report Share Posted July 6, 2015 Ok I'll give you a few things to work on and once they are taken care of this will be ready for SRPH approval.Cutie Mark: needs more detail than stating that it is of tribal markings. Describe what the markings look like. Also for CC all young adult ponies née to have a cutie mark so if his isn't seen there needs to be a reason why. Does he cover it up?History: needs more detail. Why is he good at making potions? Where was his first job? This section needs more development by at least three or four sentences.Perhaps less reference to insane asylums? I'm not sure Equestria would have even one of these let alone multiple... Also Im not sure that if a pony acts a little off he would be sent to an insane asylum by other ponies. After you've made these adjustments post here and I'll take a look. Overall, I like this character and I'm sure he will be fun to RP with Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 22, 2015 Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 How's this app coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted July 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2015 How's this app coming along?Very slowly. I'm working at a summer camp, so it is difficult to get any lengthy posts or edits in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted August 14, 2015 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2015 *boom* *smack* *pattywhap!*(Bump~) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted August 16, 2015 Report Share Posted August 16, 2015 Does this mean you are ready for another review of this character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted August 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2015 Does this mean you are ready for another review of this character?More than likely.Although I feel it is also more than likely that more tweaks are required before acceptance is achieved. Forever insufficient~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted August 21, 2015 Report Share Posted August 21, 2015 I like the updates you have made to this. Once you fix my following suggestion I'll be able to recommend this for SRPH approval Please describe with word the cutie mark your pony has. A link to a picture is fine but likes can break so we require a written out description. There also needs to be a story/reason behind why he had the particular mark that he does. Let me know here when you've made this update. You're almost there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted August 29, 2015 Report Share Posted August 29, 2015 How you doing with this app? Need more time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted September 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2015 How you doing with this app? Need more time?When I actually have good internet and free time. In other words, when I get home from vacation. Should be within a week. Unless I end up getting way too busy again. Which is beyond likely ;-; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted September 19, 2015 Report Share Posted September 19, 2015 How are you doing with this app? Need some more time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted September 20, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2015 I return from two months of work, then go on a three week vacation. Now I have a job. I might be able to sneak a few updates in. Also, if this thread reaches two pages, I'mma cry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted September 20, 2015 Report Share Posted September 20, 2015 It's no problem if there's lots of posts in this thread it's all part of the process of getting your app approved. I do a check in post about every two weeks on apps that haven't been updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted September 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2015 I did a thing to the stuff. It might be satisfactory.Or not.If that's the case, I give up xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted September 25, 2015 Report Share Posted September 25, 2015 Ok! I'm good to put this up for review by another SRPH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToothpasteThy Posted September 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2015 Ok! I'm good to put this up for review by another SRPH! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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