Summer_Squall Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 Name:Summer Squall. Sex: Female. Age: Mare. Species: Unicorn. Pelt Color: Afternoon sun yellow. Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Silver/Silver/Long, thick, and barely wavy. Eye Color: Silverish-blue. Cutie Mark: A sun peeking over a raincloud. Physique: Wispy. Origin: Painted Pinto Desert, settled in Appleloosa Roleplay Type: Mane Equestria Universe. Occupation: Firepony(like fireman, not pony who sets everything on fire.) Motivation: Saving lives! And with her specialization in water magic, firepony was the best career she could want. Likes: Water,trees, reading. Dislikes: Fire, unless s'mores are involved. Character Summary: Summer Squall, an only child, used to belong to a roaming desert band along with her parents. She would help the band find hidden water wells with her special water themed magic. She found about this peculiar power one day when she concentrated on levitating some water into buckets for her and her parents to carry along for their desert wandering, and turned it to a raincloud by mistake! Which earned her cutie mark, and also earned her a new name: Squall after a storm and Summer because of her yellow coat. When she was passing through a town called Appleloosa, she saw a building catch fire. Using her water magic, she helped to put out the blaze, and was offered to settle in town as the first official pony fire brigade. Also, she could make small rainclouds, handy for helping keep the field of appletrees watered. It's a pretty easy life actually, despite all the town's buildings being made of wood, so she has plenty of free time to wander about, she isn't the only pony in the brigade. Summer tends to be the timid type, though nowhere near as timid as fluttershy for example. She does tend to get a bit full of herself when she uses her magic however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted August 10, 2011 Report Share Posted August 10, 2011 This is a great start to what could be a wonderful character but we need to flesh this pony out a bit!First I would like to point out we don't use numbers for age here since we don't know how a pony ages and how long they live so if you could change the age to Mare that would be wonderful. Secondly I wish to know how Summer earned her cutie-mark, who were her parents what did they do? Did her parents inspire her when she started this direction of her magic or did they have higher/different goals for their daughter. Is she an only child or does she have brothers and/or sisters? Why did her parents name her Summer Squall was it because of her pelt? What is her personality like? Just a few questions to help you expand your pony a little bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer_Squall Posted August 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2011 Yar, updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 Alright we're getting there but I think it could be a little more informational.Why did she decide to try levitating water? Does she have any personal goals? Does she still keep in contact with her parents? How has she adapted to life in Appleloosa if at all. How did she get her job with the Appleloosans? Just expand and explore this character a bit more and I recommend that you take a look at other accepted applications to help inspire you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer_Squall Posted August 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 Updated again, sorry for the slowness, I've been writing other things too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 I still wish you would go into detail but everything seems to check out it seems so I'm going to approve this.http://missrarity.com/stuff/AppAssessed.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted August 17, 2011 Report Share Posted August 17, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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