VinylScratch Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 (edited) Roleplay Type: Mane RPName: Pearl Heart (Pearl)Sex: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: HippocampEye Color: Open Ocean Blue Coat Color: Sand TanMane/Tail/Markings: 2 braids, apple red mane, freckles, slight southernish accent (more mild than AJ)Physique: StandardCutie Mark: Treasure ChestOrigin/Residence: Okeanos. She currently travels around wherever work takes her.Occupation: Treasure HunterMotivation: Finding artifacts and giving them to museumsLikes: Small, contained fire, shiny thingsDislikes: Boring stuffCharacter Summary-Pearl Heart was born into a farming family in Okeanos. She didn't very well like the farming community and wished to do something exciting. Pearl spent most of her time in the museam, looking at the shiny artifacts. The only thing more interesting than that was the stories of how the treasures got there. Endless tales of prospectors and hunters lurked in her mind. That was what she wanted to do. Pearl was searching and was able to stumble upon an old merchant ship. She brought a bag and began to load treasures and shiny tings into it, feeling that she had a mission to bring it back to the museam. As she was leaving, another hippocamp appeared before her, blabbing about navy stuff and what not. He kept fixing his glasses and started talking about stuff she didn't really care about. It was odd, yet beautiful to her. Finally, they exchanged their names and the hippocamp called Seven Seas mentioned the cutie mark of a treasure chest on her flank that had just appeared. Pearl still continues to travel with her lover, Seven Seas(or Q because whenever she has a question, she'd say "Seven Seas, I have a Q" and eventually shortened it) in search of treasure and other adventures.Pearl has an intense love for shiny things, Whenever her and Q find something, she usually just stares at in and squees while _ just blabbers on. She is adventurous and outhoing. Sometimes a little arrogant and outspoken, but always confident. Edited January 28, 2012 by VinylScratch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 (edited) Added backstory1/7 - added a whee more1/9 - most likely going to redo much of her personality that I had written at word (I take a flash drive with my WIP ponies everywhere in case I get a spark during class or sumthin Edited January 9, 2012 by VinylScratch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kudalyn Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 History:Coral Cultivation/Farm Life:Pearl was born to a poor family of fish herders and marketers in Okeanos. They lived in a small coral house near the marketplace. Okeanos, in Pearl's eyes, was what most aquatic ponies used to communicate and trade with the land dwellers. Nothing more. The fish herding business was in bulk. Everyone would try to compete by catching a special type of fish, bigger sizes, or dropping the price down just that extra bit to make everyone go 'Squeee!'.Fire Love: Pearl was born to a poor family of fish herders and marketers in Okeanos. They lived in a small coral house near the marketplace. Okeanos, in Pearl's eyes, was what most aquatic ponies used to communicate and trade with the land dwellers. Nothing more. The fish herding business was in bulk. Everyone would try to compete by catching a special type of fish, bigger sizes, or dropping the price down just that extra bit to make everyone go 'Squeee!'.You've got a section repeating here Anyways, seems like a good start..... I like the treasure hunter aspect. Very nice. I'm not really big on the -loves fire- part, but since Hippocamps do love shiny things it's alright. Just don't make it go overboard with her personality, like she becomes an arsonist or something XDBeing a bit envious of the land ponies is alright too, but don't forget, not everything corrodes underwater. Okeanos is made of stone and marble. Those don't corrode very quickly, specially if they are maintained properly.Also, please elaborate on her personality. Is she outgoing? Is she shy? Is she rash, or careful? How did she become the way she is?And for her history, you kind of left things open. Will she continue to become a treasure hunter, or will she just give up her dreams and live on the farm? I assume it's a fish farm. Don't forget - while hippocamps can farm fish, they don't eat them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 You've got a section repeating here Anyways, seems like a good start..... I like the treasure hunter aspect. Very nice. I'm not really big on the -loves fire- part, but since Hippocamps do love shiny things it's alright. Just don't make it go overboard with her personality, like she becomes an arsonist or something XDBeing a bit envious of the land ponies is alright too, but don't forget, not everything corrodes underwater. Okeanos is made of stone and marble. Those don't corrode very quickly, specially if they are maintained properly.Also, please elaborate on her personality. Is she outgoing? Is she shy? Is she rash, or careful? How did she become the way she is?And for her history, you kind of left things open. Will she continue to become a treasure hunter, or will she just give up her dreams and live on the farm? I assume it's a fish farm. Don't forget - while hippocamps can farm fish, they don't eat them.Yes, fire isn't her biggest aspect. It was just something I thought of of her being envious of earth ponies and then I'm like 'fire's so pretty' xD But yeh now that u mention the corroding thing XD It was just a thought at the time I feel like of tossing it nowMost of her history is left blank but everything will be filled in in due time, young padawan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted January 13, 2012 Report Share Posted January 13, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 How is this Application coming along?Still coming along, been busy the past couple days though, but still working on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2012 Update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MyLittlePonyTales Posted January 21, 2012 Report Share Posted January 21, 2012 If a comment is not made saying you would like to keep this character, it will be removed in 5 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2012 I'm workin on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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VinylScratch Posted January 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 It's gonna get done TONIGHT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 All done except for Qs name(null) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VinylScratch Posted January 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 FINAL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kudalyn Posted January 28, 2012 Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 This is looking much better! I like how you elaborated on her character, and added in her cutie mark's history. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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