MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 How is this Application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FarSkies Posted March 12, 2012 Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 I guess it's going well? I don't think I've gotten enough feedback to really tell though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 I guess it's going well? I don't think I've gotten enough feedback to really tell though...Well, weekends are generally slow around the board. If you mark it as [Final], a staff member will critique it thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FarSkies Posted March 13, 2012 Report Share Posted March 13, 2012 Changed it to 'FINAL,' guess I'm ready for it to be critiqued. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted March 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2012 Dislikes: Polluted air, boastfulness, talking about himselfWhen given the floor, he can't help but tell outlandishly tall tales of his days away from the capital of Equestria.These things seem a little contradictory. What do you think?Also, interesting talent. Digging it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FarSkies Posted March 13, 2012 Report Share Posted March 13, 2012 The way I see it, there's a big difference between talking about what you do, and telling about who you are. Here, let me change it a bit to show that better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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