Pegasus Silver Spark [Final]

[SilverSpark]

RoleplayType: World of Equestria RP

Name: Silver Spark

Sex: male

Age: Stallion

Species: Pegasus

EyeColor: Green

CoatColor: Light Grey

Mane/Tail/MarkingsColor&Style: Messy Blue and white mane and tail, always wearing a pair of goggles that usually sit on top of his head when he isn't working or flying

Physique: Slightly smaller than most, but is very agile

CutieMark: A pair of crossed lightning bolts

Origin/Residence: Born in Canterlot, now lives in Cloudsdale

Occupation: Weatherpony, specializes in storm clouds

Motivation: The belief that grand adventure is always around the corner and bettering himself

Likes: Reading,flight agility training, traveling

Dislikes: Unnecessary formalities

CharacterSummary:

Foal-Hood: Silver Spark was born in Canterlot to a Unicorn and Pegasus Couple. He lived with his parents in the up-stairs portion of their two-story clock shop. They never had any trouble getting by, but for the most part Silver had to find ways to occupy himself. His parents loved to read and taught him how at a very young age. When he wasn't at the library, he found it fun to play with some of the extra clock parts and build small wind-up toys with his parents. He was always amazed at how they worked and would attempt to design some of his own, usually very simple creations. When he was old enough, his father taught him how to fly and it was almost impossible to get him out of the sky from that day on.

Cutie Mark Story:One day he decided to follow a few Weatherponies back to Cloudsdale in order to see where the weather came from. He was amazed at how the devices in the weather factory worked particularly in making storm clouds. He was caught by one of the workers while watching them. Instead of being scolded, they showed him how the machines worked and the careful precision that is needed to keep it functioning correctly. The turning of the cogs and gear, and the way everything meshed perfectly together, working in perfect harmony. It was just like the clocks he had helped put together for years except it didn't just move a couple of hands around, it turned water into all sorts of clouds. Huge, dark cumulonimbus clouds to thin, wispy Cirrus ones. Even the cumulus clouds most commonly used for construction. The possibilities were endless. All the work that was put into these machines to create some of the most useful materials in the world. Afterwards, he barely managed to stutter out a thank you to the workers before he went straight to the Canterlot Public Library to do more research on everything related to the Weather he could. When it came to closing time, he hid on top of one of the larger bookshelves just so he could stay all night and continue his studies. He finally returned home the next morning. His Parents were relieved when he got home and pointed out he got his cutie mark. In all the excitement, he hadn't even noticed. After he told them his story, they weren't terribly surprised and glad he knew what his talent was.

Adulthood: After he became an adult, he moved Cloudsdale to formally learn how to make work the Cloud Machine and manipulate storm clouds. He rented a small apartment when he first moved there and never left it, using it solely as a place to sleep and keep his possessions since most of his time is spent away from home.

Personality: Very proud of his work and always trying to find a better way of doing things. He doesn't compare himself with others but occasionally comes off as confrontational when talking about his achievements. When he isn't at the factory, he is usually practicing his flight skills, at the closest library. He doesn't care for keeping himself well groomed, just enough so he doesn't look like a slob. He does his best to be polite, but has no tolerance for people who obsess over every detail of how someone looks or acts. He easily becomes engrossed in projects. Loves to read and hear stories of grand adventure. He hopes to have some of his own and when he isn't reading, he's strengthening his flight ability and travelling whenever he gets time off from work. Does his best to be polite to others but easily forgets his manners when focused.

[MyLittlePonyTales]

Could you please removed all colors from your application and make the text regular size font?

[brianblackberry]

Cutie Mark Story:One day he decided to follow a few Weatherponies back to Cloudsdale in order to see where the weather came from. He was amazed at how the devices in the weather factory worked particularly in making storm clouds. He was caught by one of the workers while watching them. Instead of being scolded, they showed him how the machines worked and the careful precision that is needed to keep it functioning correctly. He thanked the workers and went straight to the Canterlot Public Library staying hidden after closing to do more research on everything related to the Weather he could. His Parents were relieved when he finally returned home and were not terribly surprised when he told them his story.

There is nothing wrong with this story, it just doesn't give that cutie mark moment. It is never mentioned when during this he actually received his cutie mark, and what precise event caused it to appear for him and his realization of his special talent. Other than this one omission, that application looks fine.

[SilverSpark]

Thanks for pointing that out to me, writing has never been my strong suit. I changed it up a bit to convey what I meant a little better, what do you think?

[brianblackberry]

For Great Justice!

[Dio]

Please be patient while we move you to the Roleplayers group so you can start RPing!