DantonDamnark

Proposed Change Log: Chang Danton's Cutie Mark Change Danton's Preview Add more information on his Cutie Mark --- Really, no real change needed Name Change(Cause I have to): Opacus Sol Sol is Latin for Sun.Danton's Cutie Mark change is cosmetic, no real change in his personality or anything. However, the Cutie Mark is to change depending on what angle it is viewed from. --- Decided on single, non-changing Cutie mark. In case you want to see his Preview click Link Note: I will be using the Left one.

Here's a link to a Horse Dictionary. I find it helpful for Ponication of words and names.

Update: Added Buff Stallion and Filly Templates

Took your advice and added a paragraph on it at the end.

I actually did have this story on the app, but BlindJester suggested I remove all the Copy-Paste stuff. Though I think BlindJester only saw the sentence above the app saying this was mostly a copy-paste job(which was true at the start of it's WIP, but not true at the time he posted). Edit: Added something. 3rd paragraph under Spoilers(not in). I thought about this too. I wanted her to sound like tom-colt. I'll figure this out. Edit: I've removed the things involving tailoring. I think it makes it better. I'll work on this ASAP. Edit: Last 2 Paragraphs in Spoilers explain it now.

Right, it is illegal to kick out a minor unless they are "legally" an adult. I assume that the kid has not been emancipated (made a legal adult through the court) and since he is under 18, he is not a "legal" adult. Nevertheless, I do not feel this is a legitimate story.

So what is the game to be about? I assume something like Legend of Zelda but with ponies?

Sounds cool.

Taking a second look, I noticed how much I severely modified/deleted from the initial Copy-Paste. It about 85-90% original, but I removed that 10-15% now.

Add her picture.

I love your animated avatar. It's original.

I've refined my choice of character to a Sky Pegasus Thief. Just though I'd let you know. By the way, what ages types are we playing as? Filly/Colt or Mare/Stallion?

I think you should expanded upon her Character Summary. Add a story about how she got her Cutie Mark.

My 250th Post.

I was gonna say this was a bad idea(Pegasus/Zebra) until I remembered that it is biologically possible for Horses and Zebras to "mate". And since another Horse/Other hybrid exists in MLP:FiM (Mules). I can't wait to see how this turns out.

Fixed Color Hex Codes.

Lilly was hiding in a nearby bush, watching as Blueblood's carriage pulled up. Lilly's friend, Frilly, had gotten a tip on his arrival. Lilly never understood how Frilly got such accurate information like this. Frilly and Lilly had set up a "trap" for the Prince. They had placed a cream pie atop an elegantly dressed table in the middle of the route he would take after stepping of his carriage. But several steps in front of it, they had made a pitfall just deep enough to cause somepony to trip. Frilly was not here at the moment as she said she had "another, bigger plan for 'His Royal Majesty'". "This better not backfire, Frilly" Lilly said to herself. "I don't want the guards after us... Again..."

Lilly was still a little dazed from the collision after Cherrilee helped her up. The frog, who had been taken for quite a ride, hopped out of Lilly's hair and toward the exit. "I-I think I'm okay..." Lilly said as her head bobbed back around. "It wasn't my fault! There was a lot of talking and hollering and something got in my hair and-" Lilly stopped talking once she saw who she bumped into. A Pegasus wearing a blueish jumpsuit and goggles. Lilly had to hold her hooves over her mouth to keep from laughing. "I didn't-*chuckle*-didn't realize it was Nightmare Night so soon"