AlisonRose

Sorry to bother but you need to remove ALL the color from your app and change the title of it. The title should be just the name and then [WiP] or [Final] as a suffix. I hope this helps! Here is a picture to help you know what I am talking about.

I would like to state, I was fangirling until Guy showed up at the end. T_T

One thing that I still use Pony Creator for is to get a general idea of the colors and a close style of how I want the pony to look before I set out and seduce an artist to draw them for me =)

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope you enjoy your stay here and I can't wait to see you active and in the RP area~ Also: that is some pretty amazing stuff!

Apple Bumpkin sat happily at the small table as she grinned watching Sweetie Belle trot away and tend to everypony's needs while Rarity got right to business. It was obvious that she did in fact need a assistant in the shop but it was most likely not going to be her since as far as Bumpkin could tell, Rarity was stubborn in her ways and knew she needed to change but didn't seem to want to yet. She let out a sigh and made a strange face as the obnoxious white pony decided to go out of his way to ruin all of Sweetie Belle's and Rarity's hard work. "Why doesn't he just make time for it, if he is so darn worried bout it." She muttered softly to herself. She then sat straight up and looked around trying to figure out why there had been so many stallions and colts in a dress shop. She let out a small giggle and then got up and trotted to place herself right behind Sweetie Belle. " 'Ah can help ya'll while 'Ah wait. Ain't no trouble at all. Just tell me what needs doin, and don't even think ah payin me." She grinned as she patted Sweetie Belle's head gently trying to not mess up her slick mane style or knock off the glasses that were obviously not originally hers. " 'Ah just need somthin ta do while 'Ah wait, unless ya'll wanted ta talk with me, 'Ah don mind either way." She grinned even larger as she got down on Sweetie Belle's level. She was interupting their conversation but just didn't care since the pony conversing with Sweetie Belle about his schedule issues. She paused for a moment and shook her head no. "On second thought, 'Ah'll just wait at the table some more for ya. Best ta stay outa yer way." She made a sort of sad face as she mumbled to herself all the way back to the table before sitting down at her spot again.

I love japan, I am a japanofile T_T Also, welcome to Cantlerot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I hope to see you active and in the RP area!

Bumpkin trotted in place for a moment as she examined all of the foals. With a nod and a grin to Cheerilee she spoke. “ 'Ah'm just glad ya'll could make it out'n here ta see how work gets done differently, depending on the style of farm ya'll go to.” She was grinning massively as she looked on with shining eyes. She leaned in close to Cheerilee and spoke softly to her. “ 'Ah'm sorry that 'Ah ain't much to brag about, but I really like your mane. Ya'll be the best lookin teacher 'Ah ever seen. But what 'Ah wanted to say is that mah chicks are going ta be runnin bout and 'Ah just wanted to know if yer class knew how to handle chicks.” At that one of the small yellow chicks popped out from Apple Bumpkin's hoofkerchief and started chirping as it looked around. She had put it in there this morning as it was sleeping in the middle of the walk way of the chicken coop and made it impossible to get around unless you picked it up. She had forgotten it was in there but with a grin and a soft pat to the head it nestled back in and seemed to just stare at Cheerilee with eyes that asked if she would carry it. Bumpkin returned her gaze to the fillies and colts that were scattered about behind Cheerilee and gave them a huge grin and a wave. She knew they most likely thought she was crazy for being so full of energy but it wasn't everyday you were graced with the presence of the teacher of your favorite cousin. On top of that all, Cheerilee was famous among the Apple Family thanks to all of the good things that Apple Bloom had said about her and Bumpkin knew that all of those things had to be true so it was on her utmost pleasure to be the one to introduce Tiny Apple Valley off to the foals. “ 'Ah don't mean to take ya'll away from your ogglin. But 'Ah'm Apple Bumpkin, cousin of this'n here Apple Bloom!” She points out Apple Bloom with a huge grin then goes back to speaking. “Here on ta farm ya'll will get ta see what goes on at a typical day, any questions or comments please bring them forth as 'Ah always have an open ear to alternative ideas so just get my attention by hollerin at me or asking Cheerilee to give me a nudge if ya'll too scared of me!” She grinned massivly again and turned around to face towards the farm. “As ya'll can see there isn't much to Tiny Apple Valley, but that is the beuty of it. We spend a majority of our time doing business with other farms then actually financing anything huge here on our own farm. Over yonder is the Farm House, should ya'll need a break just go in there and sit down at the table and relax. But remember that your amazing teacher has told ya'll to make sure that you know there is a paper due on what ya'll learned here! So don't take a break for too long, less you plan on cheetin on that paper of yers, but that aint a good idea cuz Cheerilee here is smart and she'll catch you.” Bumpkin was beside herself, she had heard all of the talk of Cheerilee but here she was IN PONY standing RIGHT INFRONT OF HER. She also commented to herself of the sheer number of foals that came for this little event and hoped that she could keep them all interested. “Now, what sha'll we look at or do first?” It wasn't really a question, more of an out loud thought, but she left the door open for anypony to jump on it and give their input on what they wanted to see or do first.

Welcome to canterlot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I can't wait to see you active and engrossed in the RP area!

Sadly, that isn't quite what I meant. You are very close to getting it though. Please look at other apps (Mine or others who have some Mane-RP ones passed) and observe how we do the character summary area. So far it looks wonderful and you have improved a lot over your first run at it. But don't rush things like this, let the ideas flow and try to keep yourself focused on the character and what you feel they would be like and how they would act. Having a conversation with yourself (as per, you asking questions and the pony answering) is a great way to get ideas out for your app. Most of the time I ask myself (The pony myself) how they would act of behave in a certain situation and it allows me to better my app for them. I hope this helps!

Not at all, I have been around several times and know how this game works. I don't lose at all though, never have, never will. I didn't earn the title: Mia the Titan for just being easy to beat. =) Get on my level =D

So best news that has happened ever... AJ is best pony. Other then that, I win, and always will win. You can find my theme song here: LINKU It may or may not be NSFW, as per its a rap. So yea fair warning and all that.

Why thank you BBB!

I present to you, pictures to help illustrate where to post your app because a bunch of people have been asking about that lately. They are a bit small but that is due to Photobucket being mean. Also I added in some extra little text stuff to help inform why peoples apps don't get passed right away or why they don't get into the Roleplay group right away. I hope this helps in some way or another T_T

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I hope to see you active and enjoying the RP area eventually! If you need any help here with your character please let me know!

First thing I notice is the RP Type: You can only pic Mane OR Crossover. Mane has more strict rules but the Mane-RP ponies can be used in Crossover, however Crossovers can not be used in Mane-Rp. The next I see is AGE, we DO NOT deal in straight numbers and that should be replaced with Stallion. Next: Cutie Mark, he has to have one. That is a pretty solid rule for all ponies his age. Occupation: Needs to be changed to something more... explanatory? Also, your character summary should be expanded some. On a side note I am not sure if your name for this pony will be accepted as it stands for Mane=RP. His Motivation area will also need to be changed as all ponies have motivation from something. I hope this helps!

To turn it in you simply make a new topic in the APPLICATION area! Make sure that you have the tags set properly. Below I have added some pics to show you what I am talking about, I hope its a lot of help!

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I can't wait to see you in the RP area!

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I can't wait to see you in the RP area!

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I can't wait to see you in the RP area!

Fiddlesticks frowned to her sister as she chastised her about running off without telling her. She grinned widely as she was introduced by her sister and gave a quick and polite bow to the pony standing next to her sister. "I'm sorry Tavi, I was only heading down to the end of the street to get you a cup of tea from the tea stall. You were working so hard today that I didn't want to fully bother you and drag you with me. I am very sorry. I wont do it again, I promise." But the fact was that she said that every time, and yet it seemed to never fail with her calm natured sister. The two of them had stuck together through most anytime and this would be no different, it was a simple mix up that turned out for the best as it gave Fiddlesticks some time to produce the cup of tea from her back and hand it to her sister. "I got the kind you like, I think." She was always unsure of what type of tea Tavi liked the best so she kept guessing and was decently well off at getting it right or so she thought. "Pardon me Miss Parcel but we need to head home and practice! There is that huge concert coming up in a few days and I don't want to be rusty. Also Tavi has to keep in high spirits since she made first chair this year!" Her sister loved to brag about the fact that her sister was a first chair, but it meant more to her since Fiddlesticks herself was a third chair. The concert would be a stunning and marvelous one for sure should anypony attend it.

Welcome to Canterlot! As Lux above me has said this last weekend was a strange event with not one but TWO T-1 ponies doing battle. I hope you enjoy your stay here at Canterlot and I hope to see you active in the RP area!

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope you enjoy your time here and I hope to see you active and busy in the RP area! The Roleplaying experiance you will find here is amazing and unlike anything you have ever played before. Almost everypony here is more then willing to RP with the new people even if it is just a short 'Show me the ropes.' style RP or even a one on one RP where it just gives you a chance to flush out your character and build a relationship with another pony. If you need anything RP wise, please do not hesitate to PM me!

Welcome back to Canterlot! I am one of the new ponies whom was not blessed with the chance to meet you! But at least you are back! I hope to see you in the RP area eventually! (Active none the less!)