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Sunset stood there a bit awkwardly. "Um... Do you wanna keep going? Or is the race off?" He sat on his haunches, ready and waiting for the pony to give him an answer.

The poor thing was really shy! Maybe he could stay here a while. "Err... Why would you tell me you're not important?" he asked. It just seemed like a rather... Strange thing to say. 'She must be absolutely terrified! Why could that be?' he thought to himself. "Um... Is there anything I can do? Really?"

Sunset soared over the pony, slowly catching up, nearly ahead. All of a sudden, the pony disappeared. Sunset blinked. He hadn't been going THAT fast- had he? He took a look back, as he flew rather slowly along, and saw Robikku sprawled on the ground. For a moment, he considered just keeping on going. But this WAS another pegasi... If it had been an Earth Pony, he would have kept going. But, he did have some sort of respect for a Pegasus... He sighed and turned. "Need a hoof?"

Sunset pushes hard as they near the line, watching as the other pony got a little burst of speed from an air pocket. "Oh yeah?" he muttered. Sunset pulled up into an updraft, throwing him up high into the air. He grinned as he began to catch little pockets of air over the other pony, slowly but surely propelling him forward. The other pony was ahead, but Sunset didn't care; he MUST have this race!

Sunset spun his head around, trying to take a look at the pony. The strange, fast Pegasus was catching up. "Cmon, Sunset..." he muttered. "I can win this...". He snuck another look back at the pegasus, and was shocked to find the pony almost right behind him.

The pony was actually catching up! In all his life, Sunset had barely ever been beaten, but this pony was truly fast! Sunset panted. "I'm halfway there! Gotta keep going, just gotta win..." he muttered to himself as he raced around, coming up to his third lap.

Sunset stood silently while the dresser tightened the straps on his saddlebags. Thoughts were tumbling through his mind; the legendary treasures of the dragon, the trek up the mountain, and the possible fight with the beast. Most exciting of all, he knew that the beast may have the magic he needed to reach the sun. He twitched. "Can't you go any faster?" he asked impatiently. Just then, the dresser pony stepped back. He smiled, and galloped out, towards the trail to the cave.

Sunset Sprint watches as the Wonderbolts fly by. "Wow..." he murmurs. They really were incredibly fast, and he itched to test his skills against them. If he beat them, he would be the best ever! But for now, he knew that he would have to wait. The crowds around him ooed and aahed, but he sat there patiently, waiting for a chance.

Suddenly, Sunset zooms past, flying over their heads. Little dust motes caught fire above them, making a fabulous display of little sparkles. He turned, bemused. "What in the hay would ponies be doing out here?" he asked. He took a second look at them, and a look of enlightenment spread across his face. "Oh. Okay, well, I'll just be, ah, leaving... Sunset hurries away, blushing at interrupting someponys date.

Sunset sighed and stretched out the tense muscles in his wings. He had known it might be a bad idea to sleep on a hay bale, but he just wasn't earning enough bits from racing these days. He had known that it wasn't his best idea to come to Canterlot, where everypony hung onto their bits like magnets on magnets, but he had still come anyway. 'Why are you such an arrogant pony?' he asked hitself. He sighed, because he didn't know the answer. He rolled out of the bed to hear someone shouting. "And she was ALONE?" Sunset stood up, and flew out, determined to find out what all the fuss was about.

Sunset walked up to a little pot plant. All around the garden, similar pot plants stood in a circle. Sunset pointed with one hoof. "See how the plants are in a circle? We fly three laps around them. Sunset smiled. This was his kind of contest- even though he wasn't exactly slender, and might have some trouble getting through the tougher plants, he was built for speed and agility. He eyed the Pegasus next to him. He seemed agitated, but ready. "Ready? One... Two... Three... Go!" Sunset was off like a bolt of lightning, hoping that he had left the other Pegasus behind. He raced around, craving his neck to see if the pegasus was there.

Sunset smiles devilishly. "I'm sure you'll enjoy your race...", he said sweetly. Under his breath, so nopony could hear, he whispered "Or at least I will, when I win. Sunsetstarted to walk out towards the gardens. He beckoned for this poor new victim to follow. Never once did it occur to him that this Pegasus might be fast enough to beat him. He just didn't think like that.

Sunset walks up to Azura. "Hi, you seem a bit lost. Can I help you with anything?" Really, Sunset was itching to go outside and fly a bit, but he didn't like seeing a lady in distress. That, and he hated seeing unicorns in trouble. It just really annoyed him. "Is there anything I can do for you?", he asked pleasantly, trying not to upset the poor, shy thing. At least, he thought she must be shy.

I couldn't come up with anything that started with z. Crew is fine xD [Pegasus Pony] Sunset Sprint Age: Colt/Young Stallion Gender: Male Active in: [*:1avz9p9b] One is the lonliest Number - Canterlot Previous Threads: [*:1avz9p9b] The arrival of just another Pegasi - Gala Main Hall [*:1avz9p9b] Solo in the Crowd - Gala Ballroom [*:1avz9p9b] Wow - Gala VIP Room [unicorn Pony] Aurora Shine Age: Young Mare Gender: Female Active in: [*:1avz9p9b] Welcoming Comittee [FiM Cast Derpy Hooves Age: Young Mare Gender: Female Active in: [*:1avz9p9b] Doing her Job

Sunset walks into the main hall, breathing in the scent of the royalty. 'I don't really belong here,'he thought to himself. 'Then again, maybe I can finally find a Pegasus that is worthy to challenge me...' Sunset walks up to Robikku. "Hey, you there! Yeah, you! The Pegasus! Do you wanna race?" Sunset smirks, convinced he can win. A little voice in the back of his mind was telling him 'Sunset, you know you shouldn't be doing this. Remember- you crashed the last time you pushed yourself too hard, and that wasn't so long ago!' But Sunset doesn't listen. He leans against a table and waits for a response. ((I'm new, is this how RP here works? I just jump in and have a go? Also, do we have an OOC area?))

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Thanks! Im glad you're enjoying it. Part Two should be out soon.

Woo, bronies!

It's finally finished. Fixed those problems. *Crossed fingers*

The Badger Song. Look it up, trust me, it's great. That, or the Nyan. Don't look that one up. It's Nyancat if you're curious.

One last try... I hope ^.^ I have to get this done before the 30th xD

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We all need more big Mac.

Finalized. I enjoyed making him, hopefully I don't have to rewrite him at all now.

All Disneys movies. They are pretty good movies ^.^