Noctriix

Saucy: I can entirely see where you're coming from with the extremely long paragraph wording....... i do have that fault somethimes In regards to teleporting, i am aware that this is something that most unicorns are able to do............. with limited success. In which they can only teleport to places they can see with their eyes at the point of starting the teleporting process. However, I am going off of the rules for "My little Pony: Roleplaying is Magic" just saying. Though, I figured it'd suit him well... as being a stage performer...... there are many cues one would have to make on and off stage, teleporting would help maneuvering backstage much easier. That's just how I figured it. In terms of weaknessess, his amplification magic can severly drain him depending on the extent of him using it. I think I removed that segment when I deleted his two SIGNATURE spells, remind me to re add that later. He also has two other weaknessess... A lack of coffee and other caffienated hot beverages... (check the Dislikes section), and you can essentially cripple him if you would somehow damage or stain his trademark vest. That portion of his character was devised entirely from my love of the show "How I met your mother" I freaking love Barney Stinson..... True Story. Your post made me feel very good about myself Sauce, I love the way you do your spoiler thing too..... it's EXTREMELY unique. Thank you for the review -edit- There, I spaced up the summary paragraph and added in his problems with overusing his amplification magic, just for you!

Not to be rude, but could you please highlight or quote the section you're talking about? I've truly no idea where this "Self Levitation" is being shown as a power ._.

Alright, what I've changed so far: His coat no longer has an "Aura" In which it would almost have a magical sense to it, now it is only a light glimmer that is given off when he is under the harshest or most focused of light sources. His levitation powers have been modified, making him less powerful in that regard. I am not entirely sure where you guys are getting the "Self telekinesis" ability, I don't recall ever listing it, nor was I ever intending upon having him use it. Any instances where his name still was read as Spotlight have now been changed to the correct name; Limelight I added that he is also a trained dancer, this was a mistake that I never noticed from day one. Currently on standby till more feedback is given

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So, no telekinesis in any way shape or form? Or just to not use it on myself?

No biggie, I'll have an audtion Pm'd to you shortly......... also seriously man, every character I've been reading in their own natural voices........ untill Applebloom on Chapter 6... When she says "Granny's makin waffles!", I immediately began reading her in the voice of Eddie Murphy.... Gotta love Shrek...

And, despite how silly this sounds, if one is audtioning for the main character, you want THE ENTIRE prologue to be read? I only ask, because it's a rather long peice

Would you be willing to take auditions by soundcloud, rather than by youtube?

I think most of the issues should be taken care of now Scotchy but thanks for the advice! And trust me..... you could hear this guy from the other side of town if he tried hard enough

Fair enough, I can see where you're coming from with that. My reasoning with giving him his powers in that kind of fashion was that because he was given a lesser variety, they should be slightly more focused. Seeing that because he couldnt create magical barriers, cause mustaches to materialize out of nowhere, etc. like Twilight can, i figured it would be ok to make him stronger in just those 3 fields of magic. I.e. Manipulation, amplification, and levitation. However, changing that won't be a problem. However, no, it isn't a new addition, it's been there since day one I also can very well see where you're coming from with the vocal manipulation issue. Correct me if i'm wrong, but I doubt that that is a very common power within Equestria already, so I can see where having him be a specialist with it could definantly prove worrisome. I think it should be fiar to Note that Spotlight is an actor, and that does in volve acting with his voice. Though, I think stating that would be sufficient in it's own right. I could possibly say that he has many different types of voices practiced, and that he could be considered an impressionist. Then, only leaving basic amplication magic to be the only kind of spell he'd actually have, rather than saying that he has a special power where he can change his voice however he pleases. Actually, the more I think about that, yes, that sounds like it should work perfectly fine (To me at least, correct me if I'm wrong). In regards to the super levitation, that's not a problem, I can fix that in a jiffy. Thank you very much for the review rosie!

I removed the Limelight Glare spell, as it was at it's very nature, A spell used to dominate others, however I edited the second spell, to make it that he has the ability to make it sound how HE wants it to sound, rather than any pony who happens to be listening. So in other words, he's no longer controlling over or dominating any other person. Hopefully that remedies your concern! Noct

If I was to remove the two signature spells would it be safe to say that this application is good to go?

Which is ironic, because Fluttershy's probly one of the last of the mane six I'd ever say that to. I felt odd after I said it... ahaha

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For me, it's a close tie mbetween mlp and Kingdom hearts. I've only been an mlp fan for the last half a year..... Kingdom hearts is my childhood. In comparison.... Kingdom hearts fans are spoilers, trolls, and kids who "Think" they know how to sword fight thanks to playing a video game. yaoi fanfics and obese cosplayers are also very common..... we also do nothing but whine about waiting for the next main console game....... it's only been 6 years..... interaction? Neeiiighhhhhhhhhhh....

My only problem with this song.... Theres one singer.... not multiple distinctive characters... granted I see the fact that there is a chorus part... but... hmmm /:

http://soundcloud.com/noctriix/prose Couldn't help myself... Beautiful work!

Hey Bass, could you post a video of the song you wanna work on? I wanna make sure I start practicing the right one! Willow: Thanks! Dancing through Life, from the wicked Soundtrack is coming next. Followed by Any requests the audience gives Btw... I don't know about you guys, but I just ate some Oatmeal, and it was CRAZY (This is my 150th post )

You say they're awesome, which ones and why?

Write your own lyrics if you'd like , I'll adapt!!!!

I'm sure there arn't WAAAAY to many super Metallica fans on this site, but I felt a serious emotional connection to this song. I really hope you'd all give it a listen and offer feedback, this one really tugged at my heartsrings... please enjoy. http://soundcloud.com/noctriix/nothing-else-matters

His name has been changed, along with his entire applicationg rewritten as to make sure the name "Spotlight" appears not a single time. Hopefully that clears all possible problems!