A couple of things I noticed. First off, I see you haven't written what type of app this is going to be. The way you have it now is brilliant and well-made but I'm afraid some things might keep this from being a ManeRP character. For instance, how under likes it has tobacco. As far as I have seen, this may not be allowed in ManeRP, being something a bit too.........adult themed(?). Essentialy I'm thinking that would need to get changed. Also, I'm not sure about where it says that she had a fling with a unicorn. I'm thinking that is, again, a bit above the ManeRP rating. Like the show, ManeRP keeps it rated E, and that might not be the case with tobbaco and flings and such. As I said, like the character, but perhaps more Crossover oriented. Good Luck with this app ~Eric