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The DA RP is taking up most of my time at the mo, but I'll let you know when i've got the ground work for this one

Welcome Walker! Cain and I loved your ap!

PAAAASS! Nexar is in!

This is an INVITATION ONLY RP. Sorry dude, but we can't accept you into this RP.

Approooooooved

i need to see yours..... And i'll have you know i'm very harsh with aps.

Okia dokie lokie!

Perfectly fine, but will her brother be an NPC or your second character?

[colour=#282828]Name: Hoax[/colour] [colour=#282828]Age group: Young adult[/colour] [colour=#282828]Gender: Mare[/colour] [colour=#282828]Race: Unicorn[/colour] [colour=#282828]Cutie mark: The symbol of a death hex, reflecting her talent for Entropy magic. [/colour] [colour=#282828]Talent: Hoax has an affinity for the Entropy school of magic. Her ability to manipulate the forces of erosion, decay and destruction is second to none - but her knowledge of the other schools is currently rather low, as she doesn't really hold interest for them. [/colour] [colour=#282828]Class: Mage. [/colour] [colour=#282828]Specialisation: None yet. [/colour] [colour=#282828]Fighting Style: Hoax's style is not to deal overwhelming damage like most "War" mages, but to completely cripple the enemy with a variety of hexes and disorienting spells. Her affinity for Entropy allows her to paralyze her foes, send them into terrible waking nightmares and curse them with lethal bad luck - leaving them hopeless to the swords and arrows of her allies. When severely pressed, Hoax will cast Death magic, using the bodies of the dead to heal her own wounds. On a one on one fight, Hoax's preference for misdirection hexes and disorienting spells make her an incredibly frustrating enemy. However, she lacks any kind of true defense, and is vulnerable in close quarter combat. [/colour] [colour=#282828]History: Headstrong[/colour][colour=#000000], reckless, cunning and ruthlessly charming, Hoax has made something of a name for herself during her long years in the Circle. Incredibly gifted in her chosen art, especially for someone so young; her endless drive for knowledge has made her one of the more powerful apprentices in the Tower. However, her constant thirst for knowledge and experience has caused her more than one bad encounter with the templars, who believe that her easy going charm has allowed her to avoid the maker's wrath on more than one occasion.[/colour] Hoax strongly dislikes the tower, the Chantry and their doctrine - despising the limitations imposed on her when she desires nothing but to see the world outside. She holds a fascination for Tevinter, and the times of old but has always worked hard to keep that a secret from the Templars - A Mage with a fascination for Tevinter and the old gods is always asking for trouble. When the Warden-Commander arrived at the circle asking for aid at Ostagar, Hoax eagerly volunteered - and though she is set to take part in a terrible battle, her chance for freedom has never been closer. [colour=#282828]Starting Location: Ostagar. [/colour] [colour=#282828][/colour]

Much better! You can't start in Orzammar though - you're either at Ostegar for the battle, or in Ponyville with the refugees.

The Carta hire mercs from all over to fill their ranks, having a healer for the other mercs would be practical. And DD's can still be healed, so it's fine.

It's a pass! All fine and dandy here. The only thing we'd like to point out, is that RP isn't like the game combat wise, and plowing through seven soldiers will be a lot than in the game. But still, all is well.

That's fine dude, don't worry! you won't be left behind! haha

Okay Shadow, some good and some bad. 1. Firstly, Cain and myself feel that it's vital you understand the Fade if you're going to be a mage character. Check out this article, it'll fill you in. http://dragonage.wikia.com/wiki/Fade 2. We'd like you to drop the Crimson Hoof, and replace that with an in-game group. The Carta will fit best, they're a great match for the character. So if you need more detail, check here http://dragonage.wikia.com/wiki/Carta 3. i'm afraid it's a no to the staff with the lightening blot. DA staves are usually plain wood or metal. Only the most powerful staves are "unique" in appearance. 4. Keep it consistent - you say that her cutie mark is blue lightening, then change it to green. You also say she showed magical talent at seven, but also at eight. 5. Try to keep an eye on spelling! We're not harsh on that sort of thing, but basics like proofreading do help. Apart from that, totally fine! Please reedit and you're ready to go!

Congratulations on the most ridiculous post I've ever seen during my days doing RPs. I did not give you permission to attack my character. I doubt Shadow gave you permission to do that to him. You can not simply kill/petrify every single character in the vicinity and expect no retaliation. And with that, I'm leaving this RP. I'm done. Ciao.

Could do with putting his thought process in if that's the case. Only glean so much from dialogue. I don't want Hoax to be a warden by the way. She can help out though.

Who said I was going to attack...? I prefer passive aggressive charm and common sense.

I can.

If he tries anything, I'll blast him. Don't worry.

I'm confused, why am I suddenly being threatened?