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  1. Even though Fio had yelled to the group, she proceeded to hustle over to them so that shouting wouldn't be required. The Diamond Dog was cautious to not go too fast, she didn't want to appear as though she was about to pounce them after all. The dirt below her paws felt so different in comparison to what the forest had, but she welcomed it. The Diamond Dog began pondering if they even heard her earlier. As she made her way Fio noticed one of the Pegasi promptly ascended before lowering itself above her companions. Fio smirked, the reaction of the Pegasus was evidence enough that they knew of her presence. She was glad though, at least they didn't scatter like some of her previous experiences with pony folk. She was quick to replace her smirk with an open smile, Fio was now several meters from the group. The Diamond Dog was about to ask them if this was Ponyville, but was caught off guard by the pink pony in the group. "[colour=#ff6699]No, we don't have any gems to spare,[/colour]" the earth pony shot. Well, that was... unsettling for the Diamond Dog. Was the pony saying that she was a beggar of sorts? Yes, she didn't have a gem on her to spend, but Fio wasn't about to do something as below herself as begging. She would do what every other proud Diamond Dog would, work their way back from the ground up. But then something else piqued Fio's interest. With how the pony reacted to her, does that mean there were other Diamond Dogs here? If so, does that mean that the pink one and the other residents here have had a negative experience with them? Fio hoped not, but considering that she wasn't ousted out of the town meant that this wasn't the case. She thought carefully about her next words and replied with a wry smile. No matter her words though, her sullen expression gave away her true feelings. Fio laughs, "[colour=#cc9966]Ahah, a joke, I get it! . . . My name's Fio and I was just simply wondering if this place was Ponyville?[/colour]" A loud rumbling emanates from the Diamond Dog, accompanied by a pained expression which paints itself on Fio's face. If she didn't have fur, Fio would surely be blushing. "[colour=#cc9966]... And do you happen to know where I can find a job around these parts?[/colour]"
  2. I am interested in participating, the only problem as of now is that school and work would conflict. My schedule would be quite open towards the end of May, but until then the only time I'd be available would be Mon-Thurs @ 5-8pm Pacific. A problematic time for those who live outside the U.S. or on the East Coast.
  3. "I hated every minute of training, but I said, 'Don't quit. Suffer now and live the rest of your life as a champion.'" - Muhammad Ali
  4. On the edge of the Everfree Forest lies a sleeping beast, awakening in the shade of the weeping willows. It proceeds to thrust its rump into the air and leans forward, stretching her rested muscles. The beast is rewarded with a satisfying collection of crackling noises, its joints popping in conjunction to the ever increasing steep incline. At the peak its muscles can stretch, she reveals her pearly whites and lets out a bellowing yawn. She then stands upon her hind quarters and looks down to her bosom, yearning to verify her valuable after her slumber in the forest. She reaches under her olive drab bandana and searches for her heirloom. Her paws come to contact with a cool, solid object, assuring her that she did indeed still have her possession. The beast does a once over on itself, making sure that it didn't miss anything else. After assuring itself that everything was fine, the animal surveys its surroundings and witnesses a promising sight. It was difficult to see, but she could see a source of light brighter than the dreary veil the Everfree gave. Excited, it hops on all fours and makes a mad dash towards the stronger source of illumination. Upon reaching the source it was greeted with a rich field of green grass, a wide collection of flowers were strewn about the majestic field. Excited, she proceeded to run with all her strength and jumped joyously into the air. The warmth of the sum accompanied with the fresh air filled the auburn coloured animal with much relief. After many days in the forest, Fio the Diamond Dog finally found her way out of the Everfree. Gravity was beginning to influence Fio and she in turn plummeted to the earth. A wave of flower petals rushed upward past the Diamond Dog as she touched down to the cool grass, welcoming her return. Fio felt as though she won a permit to use Equestrium, it'd been a while since the Diamond Dog was so excited! She smiled and allowed the rest of her body to fall. More petals shot fourth past Fio, a bed of flowers had softened her fall. As the small rain of petals drifted towards her, Fio looked to the heavens and allowed herself to get lost in the large collection of clouds before her. Even though it hasn't been long since she left her home, a lot has happened since then. She never would've guessed that she would get lost in a forest only to be saved by some ponies. A chuckle escapes her lips as she thinks past her experience with them. She felt a bit regretful leaving them, but she still wasn't really used to these talking equine's. She felt more like the odd pup in the group and decided it was best if she parted ways after finding out which direction would lead her out of the forest. But she did learn one thing about ponies, their looks can be deceiving. After having her fill of the lovely sky, Fio finally gets up and surveys the land. Even though she was out of the Everfree, she still had to find this 'Ponyville' Stormwing had mentioned. If the Diamond Dog had her bearings right, although more like hoping, the town should be just past the collection of trees and hills before her. Fio marched her way into the forest once more. After traversing the terrain, she finally finds the end and comes to witness a town before her. An can be heard as Fio ingested the sight she beheld. Even if this isn't Ponyville, she could now finally work her way towards resupplying herself and resuming her journey! As she entered the town, Fio witnesses an orange Pegasi fly off into the distance. Her eyes trail to the Pegasus' origin and sees a group of ponies not too far. Now Fio can find out where she was and ask about the possibility of some jobs. She walks towards the group and yells in their general direction."[colour=#cc9966]Excuse me, little ponies, I have a question![/colour]"
  5. ((Hey everyone, mind if I bring Fio in here? Just want to check 'cause you may not want a Diamond Dog in this RP.))
  6. Maybe we could use a combination of FlockDraw and Skype, but then again I'm not sure everyone would appreciate being forced to draw digitally. Doodle or Die is another option but again, it'll force everyone to draw in the digital medium once more.
  7. Both Lux and Rosewind are spot on and I couldn't say it any better than they have. If you don't mind, I'd like to tell you of my own experience. Yes it's a wall of text, but this will help you, I promise! If anything, at least watch the video at the bottom. When I first started drawing I originally started with a wacom tablet and I was doing it for the wrong reasons. I drew to gain attention and wanted to be the next CSIMadmax or other famous pony artist. Sure, I got some of the attention I craved but I found little to no satisfaction overall. My own views were low and I just felt frustrated because it seemed like I was in an endless rut of zero self improvement. It continually angered me that I would take days just for ONE digital picture. I felt as though I just HAD to get it right or else nobody would like it. Even when I did get an image 'perfect' I still got low views and the cycle renewed itself. In the end, I closed my account and just gave up drawing for a while due to being frustrated. It was only last summer when I started doodling on a notepad for the heck of it did my interest in drawing get revived. I tried the tablet once more but found that it was once again, too frustrating. I did my research and found Ctrl+Paint. I did the Unplugged series for a while and it helped me out, but I still felt I needed someone on the spot to ask questions. After all, Matt is a busy guy and doesn't have the time to answer every question. I decided to go back to college. When winter came I decided to take a beginning drawing class to hone my skills and learn the basics. While it did help me improve, there was several issues early on. For one thing I never practiced and only drew while in class. The next issue was that I was overly critical on my drawings and always felt frustrated because I didn't get it perfect. It wasn't until I talked with my teacher did he recommend me some books and just told me to not be so hard on myself. I'll admit, it wasn't an overnight change but my mood did change as the semester continued. I got better, I practiced and I learned a very important thing while drawing. Sure, practicing is important, getting advice and critique is important as well. But it wasn't until I started doing Life Drawing did I discover a very important aspect to drawing. I had to let go. Let go of trying to attain perfection and accept that I'm human. I will make mistakes and those mistakes actually HELPED my drawings more than harm. It was only when I went through such a difficult time did I realize these things and learned this very important skill. As soon as I began letting go, I found myself able to draw at a much faster pace and enjoy it even more so than I ever did before. If I had just learned to have accepted myself and threw away the notion of perfection much sooner, I would've truly began drawing way before I started up school and got these books. But you don't need school to get a head start on your drawing career! If I had to suggest some books, I'd recommend Drawing On The Right Side of the Brain by Betty Edwards. This book will help you in symbol recognition and is an excellent beginners drawing book. When you begin to start getting a handle on the basics, the next one I'd suggest is Figure Drawing for All It's Worth by Andrew Loome. This is the next step if you wish to focus more on composing figures and anatomy. It even has suggestions for different techniques and overall composition. If you don't have money, or the library doesn't have these books then you can visit Ctrl+Paint and go to their Unplugged section in the library. Remember: Drawing is a practice, there is no formula or magic shortcut to mastering this field. It'll take years and years of work, but it'll pay off in the long run. Be diligent, take some classes, and don't lose hope when you fall! Draw for yourself, draw for your enjoyment and don't be afraid to experiment! I hope you got something out of this wall, I leave you with Matt Kohr's words which influenced me to take beginning drawing.
  8. Best $40 I've spent in a while. If you need me, I'll be making friends with my friendly neighborhood postal worker
  9. So I heard you like Marks, so I put a mark with your mark so you can mark while you mark. . . . Here's your goodie Kitirina Here's your goodie Aza - Made two slightly different variants due to the dark on dark emphasis. Now, both of you may find it hard to see your moon/baton but it should pop out once you apply your mark to your OC. Hope it's to your liking, enjoy P.S. If you'd like, I can edit the moon/baton to a different shade so that the smaller icons will show up easier when they're put under your avatar. As of right now it's a bit... well it's hard to see unless you look at the bigger version. I'll let ya decide from here.
  10. Lets go and push ourselves beyond the limits!

  11. "During the many years of life, we feel anger, bitterness, and fear. And yet, even when betrayed, a part of us wants to trust again. Just as we believe in ourselves, we want to believe in others. No matter who takes the first step. I will believe in them. And I believe that they will make the choice to believe in me, too." - Seto, Fragile Dreams: Farewell Ruins of the Moon.
  12. Fantastic job everyone, I love everyone's interpretations! I haven't had a good laugh in a long time, let alone where I laughed so often! My thanks to everyone who participated, excellent job everyone! It was consciously inspired. I was having one heck of a difficult time coming up with a good image that would work well with Browneh's line. There were several ideas that only had both AJ and RD, but those kinds of images are overdone so horrendously I just threw the thought out a window. They were originally going to be in dresses at a competition, but again that felt overdone. So I thought about having Spike in it again 'cause lets face it, Spike's awesome and it just felt it'd make sense to have him in the second pic. He was originally going to be playing with some pony toys, much like his scene in A Canterlot Wedding but it just felt a bit overused again. After a bit of adjusting with the original rough and comparison, the manly Spike image was born. I'm glad that there's been such a warm reception for my images, thank you for the kind words everyone I enjoyed this game and am really looking forward towards the next event!
  13. I loved my precious Firefox until a certain update made it chug at the rate of SLUDGE. I've been using Chrome ever since and I haven't had any troubles. Although, I have been thinking about Waterfox... P.S. Did you try deleting cookies and wipe your history/cache when you were trying to get off the guest account?
  14. Fio smiled as wave of relief flowed through her with Stormwing's words, she was glad that he accepted her apology and was willing to help her out. The Diamond Dog could feel the Pegasus' rich forest green eyes fixed upon her, as though she may suddenly betray her true motives if he didn't keep a close watch. Fio understood Stormwing's concerns, even the bit about the possibility of Diamond Dogs eating ponies. She was an alien sight in these lands and would continue being as such until her fellow kin chooses to visit their equine neighbors. Besides, ponies probably taste like cotton candy... The navy blue Pegasi turns around, his messy mane and tail following suits as he turns his body 'round. He raises one of his hoofs towards the tree and is about to, what Fio was guessing, tap the trunk when suddenly its roots come alive. When the old tree opens up, a black mare steps out of the ancient ones core. A prick of water makes its way to the Diamond Dogs muzzle and distracts her. She look up in retaliation and witnesses the forthcoming rain the heavens were gifting to the Earth. It seems as though Fio was going to get her downpour after all, her tiny smile now swelled into a grin. After being enchanted with her favorite element, the Diamond Dog refocused on the two Pegasi. What really got Fio's attention though was the panicked expression the black Pegasus was exhibiting. [colour=#282828]"There's another pony out here, Twilight said, so i was sent here by her to find you all," [/colour][colour=#282828]the black mare said to her blue counterpart. There was someone else in the forest besides themselves? Who was this Twilight and how did she happen to know about their plight? This question wrapped itself around Fio's mind, but was quickly thrown askew as she witnessed the mare make a dash into the forest, her last words being "I know how to find you guys" before she vanished into the dark veil of the Everfree. Fio wasn't a bit worried about the mare, she said she knew how to find them so there was no point on stressing over nothing.[/colour] [colour=#282828]A beasts howl could be heard in the distance.[/colour] [colour=#282828]Now Fio was worried about the mare. Wherever the Pegasi was going, she couldn't stop the thought of the mare coming into contact with whatever was in the distance. Sure, the Pegasus could just simply fly off, but it was currently raining where they were. If it was raining now then surely there was a downpour further out in the forest, where the sky was much more noticeable since the trees were not as thick. If a Pegasi's feathers became drenched with water, could they even fly? Fio wasn't sure, but the thought of the mare succumbing to the danger of what was in the forest couldn't escape her. Fio had to help them out. Stormwing was willing to help her, now she in turn should pay him back in regard. Even if they didn't find this other pony in the forest, Fio wanted to be sure that at least no harm would come to the mare. [/colour] [colour=#282828]Fio runs over to the ancient tree and takes off her olive drab bandana. "[/colour][colour=#cc9966]Mr. Pegasus, I don't know your name but we've got to go after your friend."[/colour][colour=#282828]The Diamond Dog breathes deeply into her neckerchief and proceeds to fasten it to one of the trees roots. A colourless gem can be seen bobbing on Fio's chest as she jogs back to the awaiting Pegasus.[/colour] [colour=#cc9966]"I do not know what dangers lurk in this forest, but we need to make sure that nothing happens to your companion." [/colour][colour=#282828] [/colour] Fio proceeds to bend over and meets Stormwing face to face. Her silver eyes meet his green, hiding the cocky expression her visage betrayed. [colour=#cc9966]"Whether you like it or not I'm going to help."[/colour][colour=#282828] [/colour]
  15. Hey Kitirina, I'll see what I can do for ya when it comes to making another mark. I'll have something by Monday. If I can pump one out sooner I'll notify you via PM and edit this post.
  16. I'm all for it! Fictional bugs interest me just as much as the real.
  17. I wasn't thinking when I decided to edit that post. My apologies, to you and Diego.
  18. As much as I love My Little Pastels, I wouldn't exactly want us to discover the actual existence of a universe in which Equestria was a reality. It's not that I wouldn't want it to exist, I'd be quite happy indeed knowing that such a wonderful place could. But if man does create a way to verify that parallel universes exist, one would want to go to it. Surely, it would become the one true "Final Frontier." If humanity was successful in finding a way to go to another universe, the greed of man would want to perverse innocent worlds for their own selfish needs. You could say that we'd be opening Pandora's box. For those of you who have no idea what the Multiverse Theory is and don't want to read some boring Wiki, I'd suggest watching the following video
  19. Agreed. We started them at the same time, we should showcase them at the same time. Edit: So, who wants to host TP #11?
  20. I'm glad you liked my critique! If I did have a suggestion though, you may want to space it out over the course of several days. Don't want to get burnt ya know? As for the mixing, it was fine. Unless your friend edited the original in some way, I didn't notice anything different. You'll get better, believe me. Software helps, but it's the human aspect which truly brings things to life Just put in the time to practice, record, listen and repeat until you're satisfied with your song. Also: You can edit your posts to cut down on double posting (It's somewhat frowned upon on forums.) It's at the bottom right corner of your posts, wedged between the "Report" and "MultiQuote" buttons. I don't want you to think that you're in trouble, I just wanted to let ya know
  21. Fio initially followed these ponies with ease, just simply keeping her distance and having the shadows hide her presence. But as she continued her pursuit, the diamond dog found herself closing the gap between herself and the guides more and more with every passing step. Because the forest was getting thicker, Fio found herself almost losing these equines several times throughout the journey. As the diamond dog continued to follow them, she was shocked when she witnessed the Unicorn manipulate the forests limbs to his will. Did all Unicorns have the ability to do this? What surprised her even more was when the ligaments of the forest returned seamlessly to their original position with no influence. The few stories Fio's heard from back home and what little Unicorns she's come accross gave her limited insight. She really should've spent more time talking with the residents of Dodge Junction. At a quick moment of respite, Fio pondered the whole situation and looked to the sky. Her once grey roof was replaced with a thick weave of green. The diamond dog felt a tinge of disappointing, she was really looking forward to the forthcoming storm. The group stopped at what seemed like a massive base for a titan of a tree. Fio was marveled at the sight, and more so when the Unicorn manipulated the tree. From what she could tell, he revealed something to the group. But at her current angle, Fio couldn't really make anything else out. It was a path going down obviously, as the diamond dog watched the ponies begin their descent. As for where it went? Fio wasn't really picky at this moment, she had to get ouf of the Everfree as soon as possible. Fio was hoping she wouldn't have to reveal herself so soon, but she couldn't risk the chance of being left out. She thought about possibly digging after them, but the chances of her actually finding them and not digging into the roots of the trees was slim. If there was a time to show herself, the time was now. The diamond dog stepped fourth from the brush, alerting the blueish-grey Pegasus of her presence. Fio could see him rushing his friends, something Fio was hoping to avoid. "[colour=#48818c]Who-who are you?[/colour]" the Pegasi questioned her. Fio could sense that he was scared of her, she wasn't surprised. Dodge Junction didn't exactly welcome her with open arms and it only reinforced her suspicions. Even though there are diamond dog settlements throughout the lands, they clearly had little to no contact with pony folk. Fio raises her brow, gives Stormwing a quizzical look and begins to pace around. "[colour=#CC9966]Who, me? Why, I'm just a treasure hunter traversing these lands in hopes of finding herself. Silly, I know, but it's an incredibly difficult thing to find, believe me![/colour]" Fio stops, chuckles and orients herself in the direction of the Pegasus. She shrugs and innocently grins at Stormwing. "[colour=#CC9966]Ah, but how rude of me, I should really give you a more formal introduction as to whom I am, should I not? The name's Fio Filigree, I hail from the Badlands and I've become quite lost in this Forest. [/colour][colour=#cc9966]Please don't take what I'm about to say in the wrong way, but I [/colour][colour=#cc9966]must confess. I've been trailing you for a bit now and I'm sorry. I know it's mischievous to do so, but I haven't been able to find my way out of the Everfree for quite some time. Not to mention I've lost all my supplies. Normally I would've introduced myself just as I found you, but you were aiding an injured Pegasi. I didn't want to add any additional stress to anyone in your group, especially the pony who's been injured, but it was inevitable by the looks of it. I simply need to find my way out of these woods and back to the main roads. Would you and your group be willing to accept my apology and help me?[/colour]" It wouldn't surprise Fio if they choose not to help her. After all, she was following them and didn't even reveal herself up until now. "[colour=#cc9966]Please?[/colour]" Fio looks at Stormwing openly, waiting with baited breath for his decision.
  22. Hello Panda, welcome to Canterlot! I see you're already getting a head start at being an active member, I like that But before I go on with the critique, I just wanted to let you know that there's a sub-forum where users can showcase their creative outlets. For you, I'd suggest going to the Music Showcase forum which you can find at the following link. Don't worry about creating another topic, I'm sure this one will be moved in due time so save yourself the trouble friend http://www.canterlot...music-showcase/ ~~~~ Now with the critique. First I wanted to say that it's a very brave thing for you to be asking for a critique on something that you've worked on. It shows a finesse that truly helps you further improve your works and of yourself by finding flaws that you initially couldn't. Most people are reclusive to saying that they need help via critique, but this is due to the fact of how harsh some critique's can be on the net. But enough of my banter, lets get on with it shall we? *** Please, DO NOT take this critique personally! There's no voice behind text after all, so please don't read too much into this little chunk of data Your timing is spot on throughout most of the song, there's no doubt about it. I've listened to cover songs where the user had a stellar voice, but for the love of them couldn't time themselves close enough with the original (even with editing programs.) Some parts felt a bit rushed or a bit slow, but practicing the song to virtual memorization will help fix this. I must admit though, one of the glaring issues with your cover though is that it feels as though it's being sung off key or without emphasis throughout the song. You may want to practice your vocals and study the way Eurobeat (Or another prominent singer you like) voices their works. Question how they sings, and why. Ask yourself some questions while listening, like the following, "When does their voice get to a high point? Why? When do they seem to stress their voice and for how long? Do they have suggestions on how to practice? Should I practice this way?" These are just a few poor examples, after all I'm no singer. I'd highly suggesting using Google to assist you in finding how to practice your singing. There's a wealthy amount of information on the net which will help you meet your goals. Remember: Professionals and experienced individuals didn't get where they were overnight. It took A LOT of time and dedication, practicing and learning from their mistakes. Everyone who's made a career out of singing (or a majority of anything where someone's good at it really) have been where you're at. Some had teachers, others were self taught, but they all had one thing in common with one another. They had a passion for what they were doing and in turn, utilized that energy to dedicate themselves. The journey will be tough, sometimes to the point where it's disheartening to the point where you want to just throw in the towel. But if this is your passion, don't quit. If it's something you enjoy and love to do, don't fall into the currents of dismay. Fight against the current and carve your own path! Summary: While you have good timing throughout the song, it really sounds like there wasn't enough practice put into the song. A simple fix is obvious, practice the lines and do some studying. It's a long difficult road, but perseverance will reward you! You've got a lot of work ahead of you Panda, good luck!
  23. So hey, there's a Robot Unicorn Attack 2 available on iTunes.... WHY DO I STILL OWN A DUMB PHONE?! ;-;

  24. How long has it been since Fio entered the Everfree forest? Two, three days? She wasn't exactly keeping tabs on how long she's been traversing these wild woods but she knew one thing without a shadow of a doubt, she was lost. Fio was normally well equipped for situations like this, but a careless run in with the river stole her hard earned supplies. Even if she had her map and compass, she doubted that it'd do her any good here. Fio was regretting not listening to the citizens of Dodge Junction, to avoid the Everfree Forest like the plague. She could feel her pride stinging, but Fio gave off a deep sigh and chuckled to herself. If her pack mates ever heard of her getting lost, she would never hear the end of it. Besides, she got herself into this situation and somehow she'll get herself out of it. Fio looked towards the sky and sniffed the elements deeply. A storm was coming and she welcomed it with open arms. But there was something else Fio picked up besides the smell of the fourth coming rain, it was the sweet smell of another individual. Fio made a mad dash towards the scent, hoping it would lead to civilization. As she got closer to the source, she began picking up more scents and slowed down to a crawl. At last, she found the source of the smells, but it wasn't civilization she found, but of five ponies. Four of these were Pegasi, while one was a unicorn, a surprising sight for Fio. Even though she's met other ponies in the past, she still hasn't gotten used to seeing them so often outside of the Badlands. From what her eyes could betray, one of them was injured and the others were assisting. This was obviously not a time to interfere and the sight of a diamond dog may do more harm than good. Fio decided that it'd be best to lay low and simply follow them, hopefully they would lead her out of this accursed forest.
  25. Comedy, my one weakness! LETS GIVE IT A GO ANYWAY! Argonite was once a proud dragon who had it all. The gems, the dames, even a mountain sized cave which resided quite a ways from other dragons! All he needed to worry about was the wild life and some talking animals in a town not far. He had just finished moving in and decided to take a nap. He was, for once, at peace... That is until he was awoken by five small, talking blobs. He didn't really care for what they said, the purple one was just boring and overly ignored it. A white one with a beautiful mane approached him, the only one Argonite somewhat liked out of the five. It had such a way with words, that is until it attempted to take some of his hoarde! Then a noisy, pink thing came in and was beginning to make a racket! He panicked and roared in fright, sending the menacing creature back to whence it came from. Argonite had never seen anything so terrifying and prayed it never returned. Then suddenly, a flying rainbow blob came out of nowhere and smacked Argonite in the face! These talking, flying blob like things just couldn't take a hint! He decided that if they weren't going to leave by passive persuasion, he'd use blunt force. He used his breath to knock them all over, hopefully dissuading them from staying any longer. Although he felt as though he may have overdone it after seeing the rock behind them crumble, revealing a frightened yellow blob. He was about to give these things a piece of his mind, until the yellow one raised its voice towards him. "How dare you?!" How dare he? How dare he?! After th- OH GOD THE YELLOW ONE WAS GOING STRAIGHT FOR HIM! This yellow blob was terrifying, but what she was saying cut him to the core. But she was kind, much kinder than those other ruffians who bugged him in such a rude, manipulative manner. After acknowledging his wrongings and finding a new cave, he yearned to thank her for being so understanding and kind. He knew that he couldn't simply waltz into the town the yellow one lived in, so he consulted a striped talking blob to assist him. It gave Argonite a potion which would turn him into a pony, perfect! He heard the blob mentioning something about 'side effects' but ignored them as he was only focused on thanking the yellow one. After chugging the potion and the transformation was complete, he hurried on to see his new visage in the pond. "Huh, so this is how those talking blobs really look like... Now all I need is a pretty bow!" AHHHH!!! I put in too much time on this and the Lime posted... Curses!!! There's no way I'm deleting my response to Phil's Pwnie! Chocolate Moose was an average philly in Baltimare, until a horrific accident at Stamp Co.! Most would say that it was just bad timing, others have said Moose was just a bad cocoa bean and was in restricted places. But the truth is, Moose was just busy eating stamps with the employee's of Stamp Co. They had a wide array of flavours, from Burstin~Berry to Luscious~Lime. But when the clerks realized something was wrong, it was too late. Little did Chocolate Moose know, but she was eating a bucket of vintage frog stamps! Only then did they realize that they should've been paying to the audible croaks Moose was giving off. Moose was now more frog than pony! Even though he was a mess, they could rebuild him! Hiring the greatest unicorns in transmogrification and duct tape, they were able to restore 75% of Chocolate Moose's original form! They knew that she would now be able to rebuild their life, especially with such hypnotizing eyes! Her parents didn't seem to notice anything awry, they even complimented on his lovely mane and stache! But those fools, Moose knew his true destiny now. For his quest was no longer about finding her cutie mark or joining the Cutie Mark Crusders. No, he would devote his new found powers of hypnotism for good, for justice! He knew that he was the hero that Baltimare deserved... Right after he visits that awesome Stamp Shop again! Incoming Taffy!
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